Nov. 28, 2020
Happy 53
Sorry, should write this before not after!
Okay, what about this year’s birth day.
About me:
Still confuse that should I been happy or sad that I am still single.
Anyway, a picture with wife and kids is missing in my life.
About my career.
Super lucky to found one of the best jobs at that age. (50 after)
Good salary, good benefit, pressure free work load…
BUT I will say that: I don’t like that kind of job but I don’t have other choices.
About the world.
I think yes, it is the end of the world now!
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Sorry, should write this before not after! I am sorry. I should have written this before and not after! Sorry, should write this before not after! I am sorry. I should have written this before and not after!
A subject and a verb is required in a sentence. ‘“Before and not after” what? You are assuming that the reader knows what you mean.
Okay, what about this year’s birth day. Okay, what about this year’s birthday? Okay, what about this year’s birth day. Okay, what about this year’s birthday?
Still confuse that should I been happy or sad that I am still single. I am not sure whether I should be happy or sad that I am still single. Still confuse that should I been happy or sad that I am still single. I am not sure whether I should be happy or sad that I am still single.
Anyway, a picture with wife and kids is missing in my life. Anyway, a picture of a wife and kids is missing in my life. Anyway, a picture with wife and kids is missing in my life. Anyway, a picture of a wife and kids is missing in my life.
“A picture/photo of” or “a picture of me with a wife and kids”
About my career. About my career: About my career. About my career:
Super lucky to found one of the best jobs at that age. I was super lucky to have found a great job after the age of 50. Super lucky to found one of the best jobs at that age. I was super lucky to have found a great job after the age of 50.
Good salary, good benefit, pressure free work load… I have a good salary, good benefits and a pressure-free workload. Good salary, good benefit, pressure free work load… I have a good salary, good benefits and a pressure-free workload.
BUT I will say that: I don’t like that kind of job but I don’t have other choices. I don’t like my job, however, but I don’t have another choice. BUT I will say that: I don’t like that kind of job but I don’t have other choices. I don’t like my job, however, but I don’t have another choice.
About the world. About the world: About the world. About the world:
I think yes, it is the end of the world now! I think it is the end of the world now! I think yes, it is the end of the world now! I think it is the end of the world now!
I agree!
Feedback
The challenge for non-native speakers is to forget the grammar of their native language. Your L1 may allow sentences without subjects but English language does not. In spoken English subjects are sometimes omitted, but written English is a different matter. Your nonchalant style Is charming. The pessimism in your last sentence is counterbalanced by your whimsical attitude.
Nov. 28, 2020
wow
thanks
your world makes me in the moon now
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About the world. About the world. About the world: About the world. About the world: |
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Happy 53 |
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Sorry, should write this before not after! Sorry, should write this before not after! I am sorry. I should have written this before and not after! Sorry, should write this before not after! I am sorry. I should have written this before and not after! A subject and a verb is required in a sentence. ‘“Before and not after” what? You are assuming that the reader knows what you mean. |
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Okay, what about this year’s birth day. Okay, what about this year’s birth day. Okay, what about this year’s birthday? Okay, what about this year’s birth day. Okay, what about this year’s birthday? |
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About me: |
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Still confuse that should I been happy or sad that I am still single. Still confuse that should I been happy or sad that I am still single. I am not sure whether I should be happy or sad that I am still single. Still confuse that should I been happy or sad that I am still single. I am not sure whether I should be happy or sad that I am still single. |
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Anyway, a picture with wife and kids is missing in my life. Anyway, a picture with wife and kids is missing in my life. Anyway, a picture of a wife and kids is missing in my life. Anyway, a picture with wife and kids is missing in my life. Anyway, a picture of a wife and kids is missing in my life. “A picture/photo of” or “a picture of me with a wife and kids” |
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About my career. About my career. About my career: About my career. About my career: |
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Super lucky to found one of the best jobs at that age. Super lucky to found one of the best jobs at that age. I was super lucky to have found a great job after the age of 50. Super lucky to found one of the best jobs at that age. I was super lucky to have found a great job after the age of 50. |
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(50 after) |
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Good salary, good benefit, pressure free work load… Good salary, good benefit, pressure free work load… I have a good salary, good benefits and a pressure-free workload. Good salary, good benefit, pressure free work load… I have a good salary, good benefits and a pressure-free workload. |
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BUT I will say that: I don’t like that kind of job but I don’t have other choices. BUT I will say that: I don’t like that kind of job but I don’t have other choices. I don’t like my job, however, but I don’t have another choice. BUT I will say that: I don’t like that kind of job but I don’t have other choices. I don’t like my job, however, but I don’t have another choice. |
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I think yes, it is the end of the world now! I think yes, it is the end of the world now! I think it is the end of the world now! I think yes, it is the end of the world now! I think it is the end of the world now! I agree! |
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