Nov. 10, 2019
Attack on Titan
My recommendation Japanese comic is Attack on Titan. Although this picture is really gross, the story is deep and interesting.
Elen, the main character, fight with titans eating human to clear the land of titans. But he is getting find that the real enemy is humans, not titans. It is a closely knit plot, interwoven with threads of foreshadowing. The story made me think a lot of things. So I want many people to read this comic.
私のオススメの日本の漫画は『進撃の巨人』です。
絵はグロいけど、話は本当に深くて面白いです。
主人公エレンは、人間を食べる巨人を駆逐するため巨人と戦います。
しかし、エレンは本当の敵は巨人ではなく、人間だという事に気づいていきます。
これは伏線が張り巡らせていて、綿密なストリーです。
いろいろ考えさせられる作品です。ぜひ沢山の人に見てほしいです。
My recommendation for a Japanese comic is Attack on Titan.
Although this picture ie scenes areally gross, the story is deep and interesting.
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the word 'picture' doesn't work here. in mangas/comics, you can call the 'pictures' either 'drawings' or 'scenes' ('scenes' can apply to movies/tv as well)
Elen, the main character, fights with titans human-eating humtitans to clear the land of titanshem.
This sounds more natural and less repetitive with the word 'titan'
But he is getting finds that the real enemy isies are humans, not titans.
The story made me think about lot of things.
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I love Attack on Titan but I've only seen the anime. Maybe I will now read the manga. Thank you!
Nov. 10, 2019
I agree 'gory' is a good word to use in place of 'gross'
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One manga i would recommend is Attack on Titan.
Although this picture is really grosse the drawings can sometimes be gory, the story is deep and interesting.
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I think here maybe "gory" or "bloody" work better than gross.
Elen, the main character, fights with titans eating humanin order to clear the land of human eating titans.
But he is getting find that finds out that humans are the real enemy is humans, not titans.
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私も進撃の巨人が好きです。
My recommendation for Japanese comics is Attack on Titan.
Although thise picture iss are really gross, the story is deep and interesting.
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Elen, the main character, fights with titans human-eating humtitans to clear the land of titanshem.
But he is getting findfinding out that the real enemy is humans, not titans.
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この漫画を読みたい！
My recommendation Japanese comicManga is Attack on Titan.
We often use "Manga" more than "Japanese Comic."
Although thise picture iss are really grossory, the story is deep and interesting.
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"This picture" implies to something that already exists and was brought back, such as an annex picture. By using "the" you imply the pictures in the comic itself. "Gory" also singles out the nature of the gross part.
Elen, the main character, fights with titans eating humanhuman-eating titans in order to clear the land of titans.
But he is gettingends out finding that the real enemy isies are humans, not the titans.
It is a closely knit plot, interwoven with threads of foreshadowing.
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Very good! Keep practicing!
Nov. 10, 2019
I agree 'gory' is a good word to use in place of 'gross'
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My recommendation Japanese comic is Attack on Titan. My recommendation We often use "Manga" more than "Japanese Comic." My recommendation for Japanese comics is Attack on Titan.
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It is a closely knit plot, interwoven with threads of foreshadowing. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The story made me think a lot of things. The story made me think about lot of things. |
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So I want many people to read this comic. |
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