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Atomic Habits Book

This book written by Jemes Clear is one of the most popular texts considered as a best sellers. The narrative of this book is about how somebody can make a new good habit and get rid of the bad ones, is one of my favorites texts because contains valuable information useful for our daily life.
Atomic Habits describe clearly each necessary needed step to make a new habit in your life and is a guide of understanding and comprehension of the requirements to build these new habits that we want to implement.
In my opinion, the book is very easy to understand and promote basic information based in real examples and situations that normally happen in our lives, so its can be read by anyone of any age.
Additionally, this book is not concentrate only about building a new habits, also include a guide to get rid of the bad ones such as smoking or bad eating habits, learning the normal sequence that our mind and body interpret as an stimulus to determine our behavior. Having in mind that concepts and being conscious of our actions is possible transform our acts through habits.
When I started reading this book I couldn't stop reading it, because every word made sense to me, it was as a familiar book because I found out the correct and methodic way to improve my behavior as I wished. Sometimes is not easy to change our routine, but is easier when you start with tiny changes that finally become into great outcomes, the importance of the correct understanding of our acts and comprehension of our body and mind.

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Atomic Habits Book

This book written by Jeames Clear is one of the most popular texts considered as a best sellers.books in today's age.

The narrative of this book dis aboutcusses how somebody can makeform a new goodbeneficial habit and get rid of the badunhelpful ones,. It is one of my favorites text books because it contains valuable information useful for our daily lifeves.

Atomic Habits describe clearly each necessary neededclearly describes each step to makebuild a new habit in your life and. It is a guide of understanding and comprehension of the requirements to build these new habits that we want to implement.

I shortened the sentences to be more concise.

In my opinion, the book is very easy to understand and promote basicvides useful information based ion real-life examples and situations that normally happen in our lives, so. Furthermore, it's can be read byuseful for anyone ofat any age.

Additionally, this book is not concentrate only about building a new habits, also includes a guide to get rid of the bad ones, such as smoking or badpoor eating habits, . Clearning the normal discusses the sequence that our mind and body interpret as an stimulus to determine our behavior.

After you mention the author of a book or text once, use their last name.

Having in mind that concepts and being conscious of our actionsIt is possible to transform our acts through habitcreating habits and being aware of our actions.

When I started reading this book, I couldn't stop reading it, because every word made sense to me, i. It was as a familiar book because I found out the correct and methodical way to improve my behavior as I wished.

Sometimes, it is not easy to change our routine, bu. However, it is easier when you start with tiny changes that finally become into great outcomes, the importance of the correct understanding of our acts and comprehension of our body and mind.add up into bigger outcomes.

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Glad you enjoyed Atomic Habits. I think I want to read it again this year. As for your text, I recommend looking back at every sentence and make them as concise as possible.

This book written by Jeames Clear is one of the most popular texts considered as a best sellers.

The meaning as written is a little odd. As written, it basically means "Among the books considered as best sellers, the book written by James Clear is one of the most popular texts", which is a valid meaning, but if you just meant to add on that the book is a bestseller, you could write

This book written by James Clear is one of the most popular texts, and is considered as a best seller.

The narrative of this book is about how somebody can make a new good habit and get rid of their bad ones, and it is one of my favorites textspieces of writing because it contains valuable information useful for ourmy daily life.

Reworded to be more natural

Atomic Habits describes clearly eachvery necessary needed step to make a new habit in your life and is a guide tof understanding and comprehension of the requirements to build these new habits that we want to implement.

1. necessary and needed are synonyms, sounds a little weird to include both here.
2. Since the book is singular (even though it's title is not), we use "describes".
3. Understanding and comprehension are redundant in this sentence

In my opinion, the book is very easy to understand and promotes basic information based ion real examples and situations that normally happen in our lives, so its can be read by anyone of any age.

Additionally, this book is not concentrate only aboutfocused solely on building a new habits, but also includes a guide to get rid of the bad ones such as smoking or bad eating habits, by learning the normal sequence that our mind and body interpret as an stimulus to determine our behavior.

Having in mind thatKeeping these concepts in mind and being conscious of our actions, it is possible transform our acts through habits.

When I started reading this book I couldn't stop reading it, because every word made sense to me, it was asfelt like a familiar (?) book because I found out the correct and methodical way to improve my behavior as I wished.

familiar is probably the wrong adjective here, but I don't know what meaning you were going for to advise on the right one

Sometimes it is not easy to change our routine, but it is easier when you start with tiny changes that finally becomeexpand into great outcomes, the importance of the correct understanding of our acts and comprehension of our body and mind (...).

The second part of this sentence is incomplete. You've listed a topic (that whole last clause basically acts as one big noun), but not said anything about it.

Thise book written by Jemes Clear is one of the most popular texts and is considered as a best sellers.

The narrative of this book is about how somebody can makestart a new good habit and get rid of the bad ones,. It is one of my favorites texts because it contains valuable information useful for our daily life.

Atomic Habits describes clearly each necessary needed step to make astart new habit in your life and is a guide of understanding ands. It is a guide to comprehension of the requirements tofor building these new habits that we want to implement.

Understanding and comprehension son iguales . Las preposiciones.

In my opinion, the book is very easy to understand and promote basic information based ion real examples and situations that normally happen in our lives, so its. It can be read by anyone of any age.

Additionally, this book is not concentrate only aboutonly focused on building a new habits, but also includes a guide to get rid of the bad ones such as. For example, smoking or bad eating habits, learning the normal sequence that our mind and body interpret as an stimulus to determine ou can be changed by learning the stimuli that our mind and body use for behavior.

La segunda frase es difícil para entender

Having in mind thatBy understanding the concepts and being conscious of our actions, it is possible transform our acts through habits.

Toma en cuenta no se puede traducir literalmente

When I started reading this book, I couldn't stop reading it, because every word made sense to me, i. It was as a familiar book because I found out the correct and methodic way to improve my behavior as I wished.the suggestions were helpful.

No te entendí con la segunda frase. Es un poco largo también.

Sometimes it is not easy to change our routine, but is easier when you start with tiny changes that finally become into great outcomes, the importance of the correct understanding of our acts and comprehension of our body and mindsmall changes.

No ten entendí la segunda frase. No creo que sea necesario tampoco.

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Enfócate un poco más en las preposiciones. Muchas veces, la segunda frase de cada parte no te entendí bien. Usa las palabras más simples para expresar la idea hasta que tengas la claridad. Muy bien!

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Claudio

May 7, 2025

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Thank you for your help! I agree with your suggestions Hank 👍

Atomic Habits Book


Atomic Habits Book

This book written by Jemes Clear is one of the most popular texts considered as a best sellers.


Thise book written by Jemes Clear is one of the most popular texts and is considered as a best sellers.

This book written by Jeames Clear is one of the most popular texts considered as a best sellers.

The meaning as written is a little odd. As written, it basically means "Among the books considered as best sellers, the book written by James Clear is one of the most popular texts", which is a valid meaning, but if you just meant to add on that the book is a bestseller, you could write This book written by James Clear is one of the most popular texts, and is considered as a best seller.

This book written by Jeames Clear is one of the most popular texts considered as a best sellers.books in today's age.

The narrative of this book is about how somebody can make a new good habit and get rid of the bad ones, is one of my favorites texts because contains valuable information useful for our daily life.


The narrative of this book is about how somebody can makestart a new good habit and get rid of the bad ones,. It is one of my favorites texts because it contains valuable information useful for our daily life.

The narrative of this book is about how somebody can make a new good habit and get rid of their bad ones, and it is one of my favorites textspieces of writing because it contains valuable information useful for ourmy daily life.

Reworded to be more natural

The narrative of this book dis aboutcusses how somebody can makeform a new goodbeneficial habit and get rid of the badunhelpful ones,. It is one of my favorites text books because it contains valuable information useful for our daily lifeves.

Atomic Habits describe clearly each necessary needed step to make a new habit in your life and is a guide of understanding and comprehension of the requirements to build these new habits that we want to implement.


Atomic Habits describes clearly each necessary needed step to make astart new habit in your life and is a guide of understanding ands. It is a guide to comprehension of the requirements tofor building these new habits that we want to implement.

Understanding and comprehension son iguales . Las preposiciones.

Atomic Habits describes clearly eachvery necessary needed step to make a new habit in your life and is a guide tof understanding and comprehension of the requirements to build these new habits that we want to implement.

1. necessary and needed are synonyms, sounds a little weird to include both here. 2. Since the book is singular (even though it's title is not), we use "describes". 3. Understanding and comprehension are redundant in this sentence

Atomic Habits describe clearly each necessary neededclearly describes each step to makebuild a new habit in your life and. It is a guide of understanding and comprehension of the requirements to build these new habits that we want to implement.

I shortened the sentences to be more concise.

Having in mind that concepts and being conscious of our actions is possible transform our acts through habits.


Having in mind thatBy understanding the concepts and being conscious of our actions, it is possible transform our acts through habits.

Toma en cuenta no se puede traducir literalmente

Having in mind thatKeeping these concepts in mind and being conscious of our actions, it is possible transform our acts through habits.

Having in mind that concepts and being conscious of our actionsIt is possible to transform our acts through habitcreating habits and being aware of our actions.

When I started reading this book I couldn't stop reading it, because every word made sense to me, it was as a familiar book because I found out the correct and methodic way to improve my behavior as I wished.


When I started reading this book, I couldn't stop reading it, because every word made sense to me, i. It was as a familiar book because I found out the correct and methodic way to improve my behavior as I wished.the suggestions were helpful.

No te entendí con la segunda frase. Es un poco largo también.

When I started reading this book I couldn't stop reading it, because every word made sense to me, it was asfelt like a familiar (?) book because I found out the correct and methodical way to improve my behavior as I wished.

familiar is probably the wrong adjective here, but I don't know what meaning you were going for to advise on the right one

When I started reading this book, I couldn't stop reading it, because every word made sense to me, i. It was as a familiar book because I found out the correct and methodical way to improve my behavior as I wished.

Sometimes is not easy to change our routine, but is easier when you start with tiny changes that finally become into great outcomes, the importance of the correct understanding of our acts and comprehension of our body and mind.


Sometimes it is not easy to change our routine, but is easier when you start with tiny changes that finally become into great outcomes, the importance of the correct understanding of our acts and comprehension of our body and mindsmall changes.

No ten entendí la segunda frase. No creo que sea necesario tampoco.

Sometimes it is not easy to change our routine, but it is easier when you start with tiny changes that finally becomeexpand into great outcomes, the importance of the correct understanding of our acts and comprehension of our body and mind (...).

The second part of this sentence is incomplete. You've listed a topic (that whole last clause basically acts as one big noun), but not said anything about it.

Sometimes, it is not easy to change our routine, bu. However, it is easier when you start with tiny changes that finally become into great outcomes, the importance of the correct understanding of our acts and comprehension of our body and mind.add up into bigger outcomes.

In my opinion, the book is very easy to understand and promote basic information based in real examples and situations that normally happen in our lives, so its can be read by anyone of any age.


In my opinion, the book is very easy to understand and promote basic information based ion real examples and situations that normally happen in our lives, so its. It can be read by anyone of any age.

In my opinion, the book is very easy to understand and promotes basic information based ion real examples and situations that normally happen in our lives, so its can be read by anyone of any age.

In my opinion, the book is very easy to understand and promote basicvides useful information based ion real-life examples and situations that normally happen in our lives, so. Furthermore, it's can be read byuseful for anyone ofat any age.

Additionally, this book is not concentrate only about building a new habits, also include a guide to get rid of the bad ones such as smoking or bad eating habits, learning the normal sequence that our mind and body interpret as an stimulus to determine our behavior.


Additionally, this book is not concentrate only aboutonly focused on building a new habits, but also includes a guide to get rid of the bad ones such as. For example, smoking or bad eating habits, learning the normal sequence that our mind and body interpret as an stimulus to determine ou can be changed by learning the stimuli that our mind and body use for behavior.

La segunda frase es difícil para entender

Additionally, this book is not concentrate only aboutfocused solely on building a new habits, but also includes a guide to get rid of the bad ones such as smoking or bad eating habits, by learning the normal sequence that our mind and body interpret as an stimulus to determine our behavior.

Additionally, this book is not concentrate only about building a new habits, also includes a guide to get rid of the bad ones, such as smoking or badpoor eating habits, . Clearning the normal discusses the sequence that our mind and body interpret as an stimulus to determine our behavior.

After you mention the author of a book or text once, use their last name.

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