Feb. 15, 2025
I'm tired of being stoped when I'm talking
I'm tired that I can't continue my talking
I'm tired of letting the worlds inside me
I know it's not evry time
I know that there is times when I fineshed it
I know that there's someones that appreciate me
I know that there's someones don't love talking
I know all that stuff, but what about me
Sometimes I start thinking
About if they are appreciating me like I do
About if they don't want to talk with me
About if they love me or not
About if I'm the wrong here
About if I'm doing the same with them
I know it's not a big deal I know
But I feel it's like that thing getting me sick
But I feel that am hiding something
But i feel myself is a mess
Actually I can say that I'm the wrong person
Because I'm the one
When I start talking I have to finish it
When I start talking I have to continue
How matter what
Even if a day pass
Even if a one hour
Even if we talked in so many other topics
I don't know if I'm the wrong person
I don't know if I'm right
I'm tired of being stopped when I'm talking
I'm tired that I can't continue my talking
dialogue
I'm tired of letting the worlds stay inside me
I know it's not evry time
always like that
I know that there is times when I fineished it
I know that there's someones that who appreciate me
I know that there's someones don't love talking
I know all that stuff, but what about me
Sometimes I start thinking
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About ifwhether I'm the wrong here
About ifwhether I'm doing the same with them
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Because I'm the only one talking here
When I started talking, I have to finish it
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How
No matter what
Even if a day has pass
ed
Even if a one hour
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Even if we talked ion so many other topics
I don't know if I'm the wrong person
I don't know if I'm right
I'm tired of being stopped when I'm talking
I'm tired that I can't continue my dialogue
I'm tired of letting the words stay inside me
I know it's not always like that
I know that there is times when I finished it
I know that there's someone who appreciate me
I know that there's someone don't love talking
I know all that stuff, but what about me
Sometimes I start thinking
About whether they are appreciating me like I do
About whether they don't want to talk with me
About whether they love me or not
About whether I'm the wrong here
About whether I'm doing the same with them
I know it's not a big deal, I know
But I feel things like that are getting me sick
I feel that I am hiding something
But I feel myself is a mess
Actually I can say that I'm the wrong one
Because I'm the only one talking here
When I started talking, I have to finish it
When I started talking, I have to continue
No matter what
Even if a day has passed
Even if one hour has passed
Even if we talked on so many other topics
I don't know if I'm the wrong person
I don't know if I'm right
I just want to talk until the end:
I'm tired of being stopped when I'm talking
I'm tired that I can't continue my talking
I'm tired of letting the worlds inside me
I know it's not every time
I know that there isare times when I fineished it
I know that there's someones that appreciates me
I know that there's someonespeople that don't love talking
I know all that stuff, but what about me
?
Sometimes I start thinking
About if they are appreciatinge me like I do
of them
About if they don't want to talk with me
About if they love me or not
About if I'm in the wrong here
About if I'm doing the same with them
I know it's not a big deal, I know
But I feel it's like that thingit's getting me sick
But I feel that I am hiding something
But i feel myself islike I am a mess
Actually I can say that I'm in the wrong person
Because I'm the one
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When I start talking I have to continue
How
No matter what
Even if a day pass
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Even if ait's one hour
Even if we talked in soabout many other topics
I don't know if I'm in the wrong person
I don't know if I'm right
I'm tired of being stopped when I'm talking
I'm tired that I can't continue talking
I'm tired of letting the words inside me
I know it's not every time
I know that there are times when I finish it
I know that there's someone that appreciates me
I know that there's people that don't love talking
I know all that stuff, but what about me?
Sometimes I start thinking
About if they appreciate me like I do of them
About if they don't want to talk with me
About if they love me or not
About if I'm in the wrong here
About if I'm doing the same with them
I know it's not a big deal, I know
But I feel it's like it's getting me sick
But I feel that I am hiding something
But i feel like I am a mess
Actually I can say that I'm in the wrong
Because when I start talking, I have to finish
When I start talking I have to continue
No matter what
Even if a day passes
Even if it's one hour
Even if we talked about many other topics
I don't know if I'm in the wrong
I don't know if I'm right
Feedback
I had a little bit of trouble understanding what you meant for some sentences. Overall, I left punctuation and structure alone since this cascading waterfall poetry style was so prevalent in your post. I focused on correcting the meaning and message you were trying to convey.
I just want to talk until the end: I just want to talk until the end:
I'm tired of being stoped when I'm talking
I'm tired that I can't continue my talking
I'm tired of not letting out the worlds inside me
I know it's not every time
I know that there is times when I fineished it
I know that there'’s someones that appreciate me
I know that there's someones that don't love talking
I know all that stuff, but what about me
Sometimes I start thinking
About if they are appreciating me like I do
About i
If they don't want to talk with me
About i
If they love me or not
About i
If I'm the wrong here
About i
If I'm doing the same with them
I know it's not a big deal I know
But I feel it's like that thing getting me sick
But I feel that am hiding something
But i feel myself isI’m a mess
Actually I can say that I'm the wrong person
Because I'm the one
When I start talking I have to finish it
When I start talking I have to continue
How matter what
Even if a day pass
Even if a one hour
Even if we talked in so many other topics
I don't know if I'm the wrong person
I don't know if I'm right
I'm tired of being stoped when I'm talking
I'm tired that I can't continue talking
I'm tired of not letting out the worlds inside me
I know it's not every time
I know that there is times when I finish it
I know that there’s some that appreciate me
I know that there's some that don't love talking
I know all that stuff, but what about me
Sometimes I start thinking if they are appreciating me like I do
If they don't want to talk with me
If they love me or not
If I'm wrong here
If I'm doing the same with them
I know it's not a big deal I know
But I feel it's that thing getting me sick
But I feel that am hiding something
But i feel I’m a mess
Actually I can say that I'm the wrong person
Because I'm the one
When I start talking I have to finish it
When I start talking I have to continue
How matter what
Even if a day pass
Even if one hour
Even if we talked in so many other topics
I don't know if I'm the wrong person
I don't know if I'm right
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I'm tired of being stoped when I'm talking I'm tired that I can't continue my talking I'm tired of letting the worlds inside me I know it's not evry time I know that there is times when I fineshed it I know that there's someones that appreciate me I know that there's someones don't love talking I know all that stuff, but what about me Sometimes I start thinking About if they are appreciating me like I do About if they don't want to talk with me About if they love me or not About if I'm the wrong here About if I'm doing the same with them I know it's not a big deal I know But I feel it's like that thing getting me sick But I feel that am hiding something But i feel myself is a mess Actually I can say that I'm the wrong person Because I'm the one When I start talking I have to finish it When I start talking I have to continue How matter what Even if a day pass Even if a one hour Even if we talked in so many other topics I don't know if I'm the wrong person I don't know if I'm right
I'm tired of being stoped when I'm talking
I'm tired of being stopped when I'm talking
I'm tired of being stopped when I'm talking |
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