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orea5

Oct. 24, 2022

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At the doctor's

-What seems to be the problem?
-I must have caught a sinus infection from my school mate that I share a table with. He was sneezing at me half Friday and my symptoms have been continuing since then. My tonsils are swollen and my sinuses are foul with mucus, I feel a burning pain on the front side of my head and a throbbing ache around my eyes. My temprature has been levelling out at 38 degrees Celsius for 2 days, I'm lethargic and my hands are abnormally hot to touch.
- I'm afraid I'll have to take a swab sample from your nose to exclude or confirm SARS-COV-2 infection.
You've tested negative so I recommend a 7 day sick leave until the symptoms have resolved. Breath this medicine through your mouth with an inhaler for 5 days. Two doses daily after a meal. Ibuprofen will releave your headaches and lower your fever and this decongestant will clear mucus out of your stuffy nose.
- 7 days off school will ruin my chance of resitting my maths test and the perspective of a long awaited date with my fiancée.
-As the Roman proverb goes 'A healthy mind in a healthy body'. Abide by my recommendations and you'll see your lady next weekend. I'll also write a note justifying your absence for your school teachers. See you at the follow -up visit on Friday.
- Is that Friday appointment compulsory? I feel I will get through with some movies and hot broth.
-Please book a slot on Friday and cancel it in case the symptoms go away.

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-I must have caught a sinus infection from my school mate that I share a table with.

Ibuprofen will relieave your headaches and lower your fever and this decongestant will clear mucus out of your stuffy nose.

-As the Roman proverb goes, 'A healthy mind in a healthy body'.

At the doctor's

-What seems to be the problem?

-I must have caught a sinus infection from my school mate that I share a table with.

He was sneezing at me halfl Friday and my symptoms have been continuing since then.

We usually say "half the day" but "half Friday" sounds weird to me. It'd be more natural to say "all Friday".

My tonsils are swollen and my sinuses are foulstuffed with mucus,. I feel a burning pain on the front side of my head and a throbbing ache around my eyes.

My temprature has been levelling out at 38 degrees Celsius for 2 days, I'm lethargic and my hands are abnormally hot to touch.

- I'm afraid I'll have to take a swab sample from your nose to exclude or confirm a SARS-COV-2 infection.

You've tested negative so I recommend a 7 -day sick leave until the symptoms have resolved.

When "day" in an adjective we add a "-" between it and the number.

BreathInhale this medicine through your mouth with an inhaler for 5 days.

Breath is different from Breathe. You meant Breathe, but it doesn't sound natural here.

Take two doses daily after a meal.

Ibuprofen will releave your headaches and lower your fever, and this decongestant will clear mucus out of your stuffy nose.

- 7 days off school will ruin my chance of resitting my maths test and the perspectiveopportunity of a long awaited date with my fiancée.

I think you are using the American term for "school" here as they say "school" for adult education too, and if you have a fiancée, I assume you're not a child. In the rest of the world we say that you go to "school" only if you are a child. Further up, you used °C and not °F which is why I'm confused as it's not clear to me which English you are writing in (US English? UK English? Etc), feels inconsistent.

-As the Roman proverb goes 'A healthy mind in a healthy body'.

Abide by my recommendations and you'll see your ladygirlfriend next weekend.

I'll also write a note justifying your absence forto your school teachers.

See you at the follow -up visit on Friday.

- Is that Friday appointment compulsory?

I feel I will get through with some movies and hot broth.

"Movies" is US English, "films" is used in the rest of the English-speaking world.

-Please book a slot on Friday and cancel it in case thef your symptoms go away.

Feedback

Very good! Remember to use °F instead of °C if you want to write in US English. Good work :)

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orea5

Oct. 24, 2022

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Thank you AEDW for your time, help and nice words of encouragement 🙂

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aedw

Oct. 25, 2022

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Thank you AEDW for your time, help and nice words of encouragement 🙂

You're welcome !

At the doctor's


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-What seems to be the problem?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

-I must have caught a sinus infection from my school mate that I share a table with.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

-I must have caught a sinus infection from my school mate that I share a table with.

He was sneezing at me half Friday and my symptoms have been continuing since then.


He was sneezing at me halfl Friday and my symptoms have been continuing since then.

We usually say "half the day" but "half Friday" sounds weird to me. It'd be more natural to say "all Friday".

My tonsils are swollen and my sinuses are foul with mucus, I feel a burning pain on the front side of my head and a throbbing ache around my eyes.


My tonsils are swollen and my sinuses are foulstuffed with mucus,. I feel a burning pain on the front side of my head and a throbbing ache around my eyes.

My temprature has been levelling out at 38 degrees Celsius for 2 days, I'm lethargic and my hands are abnormally hot to touch.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

- I'm afraid I'll have to take a swab sample from your nose to exclude or confirm SARS-COV-2 infection.


- I'm afraid I'll have to take a swab sample from your nose to exclude or confirm a SARS-COV-2 infection.

You've tested negative so I recommend a 7 day sick leave until the symptoms have resolved.


You've tested negative so I recommend a 7 -day sick leave until the symptoms have resolved.

When "day" in an adjective we add a "-" between it and the number.

Breath this medicine through your mouth with an inhaler for 5 days.


BreathInhale this medicine through your mouth with an inhaler for 5 days.

Breath is different from Breathe. You meant Breathe, but it doesn't sound natural here.

Two doses daily after a meal.


Take two doses daily after a meal.

Ibuprofen will releave your headaches and lower your fever and this decongestant will clear mucus out of your stuffy nose.


Ibuprofen will releave your headaches and lower your fever, and this decongestant will clear mucus out of your stuffy nose.

Ibuprofen will relieave your headaches and lower your fever and this decongestant will clear mucus out of your stuffy nose.

- 7 days off school will ruin my chance of resitting my maths test and the perspective of a long awaited date with my fiancée.


- 7 days off school will ruin my chance of resitting my maths test and the perspectiveopportunity of a long awaited date with my fiancée.

I think you are using the American term for "school" here as they say "school" for adult education too, and if you have a fiancée, I assume you're not a child. In the rest of the world we say that you go to "school" only if you are a child. Further up, you used °C and not °F which is why I'm confused as it's not clear to me which English you are writing in (US English? UK English? Etc), feels inconsistent.

-As the Roman proverb goes 'A healthy mind in a healthy body'.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

-As the Roman proverb goes, 'A healthy mind in a healthy body'.

Abide by my recommendations and you'll see your lady next weekend.


Abide by my recommendations and you'll see your ladygirlfriend next weekend.

I'll also write a note justifying your absence for your school teachers.


I'll also write a note justifying your absence forto your school teachers.

See you at the follow -up visit on Friday.


See you at the follow -up visit on Friday.

- Is that Friday appointment compulsory?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I feel I will get through with some movies and hot broth.


I feel I will get through with some movies and hot broth.

"Movies" is US English, "films" is used in the rest of the English-speaking world.

-Please book a slot on Friday and cancel it in case the symptoms go away.


-Please book a slot on Friday and cancel it in case thef your symptoms go away.

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