Oct. 13, 2021
At last! An extra holiday!
Thanks to the typhoon I got an extra holiday.
The previous couple typhoons arrived also was holiday.
But at that time I didn’t have a job.
Which means nothing to me.
But this time I do have a job therefore today I can stay at home and do nothing.
I watched so many movies, played long hours TV games…
I am so happy.
But I can’t go out and eat a good dinner that is the only “not so happy” moment.
Sorry to say that this time “Typhoon I liked you”.
At last! An extra holiday!
Thanks to the typhoon, I got an extra holiday.
TWhen the previous couple of typhoons arrived, we also washad a holiday.
WhichSo the holidays meanst nothing to me.
But this time I do have a job therefore, so today I can stay at home and do nothing.
I have watched so many movies, and played long hours TV gamesTV games for hours …
But I can’t go out and eat a good dinner that is. That has been the only “not so happy” moment.
Sorry to say thait, but this time I can say “Typhoon, I liked you!”.
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At last! An extra holiday! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Thanks to the typhoon I got an extra holiday. Thanks to the typhoon, I got an extra holiday. |
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The previous couple typhoons arrived also was holiday.
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But at that time I didn’t have a job. |
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Which means nothing to me.
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But this time I do have a job therefore today I can stay at home and do nothing. But this time I do have a job |
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I watched so many movies, played long hours TV games… I have watched |
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I am so happy. |
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But I can’t go out and eat a good dinner that is the only “not so happy” moment. But I can’t go out and eat a good dinner |
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Sorry to say that this time “Typhoon I liked you”. Sorry to say |
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