Nov. 6, 2022
Hello! I hope you're doing well :)
Thank you for correcting my mistakes.
Today I'm making this assignment earlier so I'll have free time later.
What were the three most important achievements in your life?
1 Reading books by myself.
2 Learning languages; including English and Japanese.
3 I learned some of my highschool's subjects on my own
Write about an experience in which you have overcome some difficulty.
Due to COVID-19 quarantine I felt depressed, where I couldn't do much to improve my situation. I used to escape from my reality to a game called genshin impact but then I started to read books and see a brand new reality; I started to take control of myself even when a chaos was around me.
Describe your school routine.
I read my highschool's resources, then I make flashcards in the StudySmarter app, after that I take a break and finally I complete the activities.
Sometimes I complete them earlier to have free time later.
What do you do in your free time?
I use my mom's camera, dance, learn languages, read, knit, and most of all I study physics.
What new skills or challenges are you trying to overcome?
-Making easier to keep all my hobbies and school activities up.
-Mastering my skills.
-Improving my actual situation.
Write about any difficulties in this moment of your life.
Sadness and rage.
Sometimes I feel sad and angry for my actual situation and I'm doing my best to understand and control my emotions.
What are you doing to overcome those difficulties?
I write a diary, I pay attention to my emotions and I allow myself to feel them, I read books, I make exercise, I learn languages and I learn physics with a lovely professor, I'm trying to be grateful everytime I can.
What are your plans after finishing high school?
I want to study and live in a safe country, I would like teaching learning techniques, I want to study geography and I wish being a fashion designer.
Would you like to study for a degree? Which one? Which university?
I'm not sure about what university but I want to study geography in college because I love it so much.
What would you like to work on?
Most of all, I want to be a fashion designer.
What is your greatest goal?
To appreciate every moment, no matter how hard it is.
What challenges will you have to face to achieve your goal?
Ego, and changing my life's perspective.
Write a half page reflection on what you learned during this English modules and how they contributed to your formation.
During these modules I learned how to describe the location of objects, I learned how to indicate people how to go to an specific place, I learned when I must use capital letters and how to express fluently in English.
I feel more confident when speaking in one of my target languages.
I learned how to conjugate and when should I use the words "were" and "was".
I also improved my English pronunciation and my English undesrstanding so I can consume contents in English without feeling unconfortable.
This module and the influence of my professor's corrections improved drastically my English mistakes.
Now I am much better at English and it allows me to interact with a plenty of people all over the world.
Therefore, I learned about myself; about my past, my present and what I want to be in the future. I clarified my goals in order to achieve them.
These modules were a beautiful challenge to face and they gave me a lesson that is to remember that I'm not perfect so I should focus on improving and try over and over again until I master English.
Assignment "My Biography"
Hello!
I hope you're doing well :)
Thank you for correcting my mistakes.
Today I'm makdoing this assignment earlier so I'll have free time later.
What were the three most important achievements in your life?
Or: What have been the three most important…
1 Reading books by myself.
2 Learning languages; including English and Japanese.
3 I learned some of my high school'’s subjects on my own.
Or: 3 Learning some of …
Write about an experience in which you have overcome some difficulty.
More natural:
Write about an experience which you overcame with some difficulty.
Due to COVID-19 quarantine I felt depressed,. It was a situation where I couldn'’t do much to improve my situation.life.
I used to escape from my reality tohrough a game called gGenshin iImpact but then I started to read books and see a brand new reality; I started to take control of myself even when athere was chaos wasall around me.
Names with capitals always !
Describe your school routine.
I read my high school'’s resources, then I make flashcards in theusing an app called StudySmarter app, after that I take a break and finally I complete the rest of the activities.
Sometimes I complete them earlier tso havthat I can have more free time later.
What do you do in your free time?
I use my mom's camera, dance, learn languages, read, knit, and most of all I study physics.
What new skills or challenges are you trying to overcome?
-Making easier to keep all Trying to make my life more organised so that I can keep up with all of my hobbies and school activities up.
Let me know what you wanted to say!
-Mastering my skills.
-Improving my actualcurrent situation.
For context you could say my financial/personal/mental situation !
Write about any difficulties in this moment of your life.
Or: Write about any difficulties you are experiencing in your life at the moment.
Sadness and rage.
Sometimes I feel sad and angry for my actual situation and, however/but I'’m doing my best to understand and to better control my emotions.
What are you doing to overcome thoese difficulties?
I write in a diary, I pay attention to my emotions and I allow myself to feel them, I read books, I makedo exercise, I learn languages aind I learnependently and physics with a lovely professor, and I'm trying to be grateful at everytime I can opportunity.
* it is always ‘doing/do exercise’
What are your plans after finishing high school?
I want to study and live in a safe country, I would like to teaching learning techniques, I want to study geography and I wish being a fashion designer.
Would you like to study for a degree?
Which one?
Which university?
I'm not sure about what university but I want to study geography in college because I love it so much.
What would you like to work on?
Most of all, I want to be a fashion designer.
What is your greatest goal?
To appreciate every moment, no matter how hard or small it is.
A natural metaphor we use!
What challenges will you have to face to achieve your goal?
Ego, and changing my life's perspective.
Write a half page reflection on what you learned during thisese English modules and how they contributed to your formation.
During these modules I learned how to describe the location of objects, I l learned how to indicate people how to go to an specific placegive directions, I learned when I must use capital letters and how to express myself fluently in English.
I feel more confident when speaking in one of my target languages.
I learned how to conjugate and when I should I use the words "were" and "was".
I also improved my English pronunciation and my English undesrstanding so that I can now consume contents in English without feeling unconmfortable.
This module and the influence of my professor's corrections improved drastically my English mistakesthe mistakes I was making in English drastically.
Word order and natural sound!
Now I am much better at English and it allows me to interact with a plenty/a plethora of people from all over the world.
Thereforeus/In conclusion, I learned about myself; about my past, my present and what I want to be in the future.
I clarified my goals in order to achieve them.
These modules were a beautiful challenge to face and they gave me a lesson that is; teaching me that it is important to remember that I'm not perfect so, and that I should focus on improving and trying over and over again until I master English and my other goals.
Feedback
Beautifully written, well done!! Congratulations on moving another step forward with your English goal!
Assignment: "My Biography"
It's a little better to put a colon here.
Hello!
I hope you're doing well :)
Thank you for correcting my mistakes.
Today I'm makdoing this assignment earlier so I'll have free time later.
When "make" is used outside an idiom, it indicates producing something. When "do" is used outside an idiom, it indicates performance of an activity.
What were the three most important achievements in your life?
2 Learning languages;, including English and Japanese.
3 I learned some of my subjects in high school's subjects on my own.
The subjects didn't belong to the high school, so it's better to say "subjects in high school".
Write about an experience in which you have overcome some difficulty.
Due to COVID-19 quarantine, I felt depressed, wheren I couldn't do much to improve my situation.
I used to escape from my reality to a game called gGenshin iImpact, but then I started to read books and see a brand new reality;. I started to take control of myself even when a chaos was asurrounded me.
"Chaos" is a non-count noun.
Describe your school routine.
I read my high school's resources, then I make flashcards in the StudySmarter app, after that I take a break and finally I complete the activities.
Sometimes I complete them earlier to{in order to|so that I} have free time later.
What do you do in your free time?
I use my mom's camera, dance, learn languages, read, knit, and most of all I study physics.
-MakingFinding ways to make it easier to keep up all my hobbies and school activities up.
-Improving my actualcurrent situation.
Sadness and rage.
It would be better to make this into a full sentence.
Sometimes I feel sad and angry for my actualabout my current situation and, but I'm doing my best to understand and control my emotions.
What are you doing to overcome those difficulties?
I write a diary, I pay attention to my emotions and I allow myself to feel them, I read books, I makedo exercise, I learn languages and I learn physics with a lovely professor,. I'm trying to be grateful wheneverytime I can.
What are your plans after finishing high school?
I want to study and live in a safe country,. I would like to teaching learning techniques, I want to study geography, and I wish beingant to be a fashion designer.
Would you like to study for a degree?
Which one?
Which university?
I'm not sure about whatich university but I want to study geography in college because I love it so much.
What would you like to work on?
Most of all, I want to be a fashion designer.
What is your greatest goal?
To appreciate every moment, no matter how hard it is.
What challenges will you have to face to achieve your goal?
Write a half page reflection on what you learned during thisese English modules and how they contributed to your formation.
During these modules I learned how to describe the location of objects, I learned how to indicate to people how to go to an specific place, I learned when I must use capital letters, and I learned how to express myself fluently in English.
I feel more confident when speaking in one of my target languages.
I learned how to conjugate and when I should I use the words "were" and "was".
I also improved my English pronunciation and my English undesrstanding so I can consume contents inread English without feeling unconfortable.
This module and the influence of my professor's corrections improved drastically my English mistakesreduced my mistakes in English.
Now I am much better atin English and it allows me to interact with a plenty of people all over the world.
Therefore, I learned about myself;: about my past, my present and what I want to be in the future.
I clarified my goals in order to achieve them.
These modules were a beautifulgood challenge to face and they gave. They taught me a lesson that, which is to remember that I'm not perfect, so I should focus on improving and try over and over again until I master English.
Feedback
Very nice! You write well.
I think it's often a good idea to split long sentences into shorter ones.
Today, I'm makdoing this assignment earliernow so I'll have free time later.
What were the three most important achievements in your life?
1 Reading books by myself.
3 I learned some of my highschool's subjects on my own
Write about an experience in which you have overcoame some difficulty.
Due to the COVID-19 quarantine I felt depressed, whereand I couldn't do much to improve my situation.
I used to escape from my reality to a game called gGenshin iImpact but then I started to read books and, which helped me see a brand new reality; I started to take control of myself even when a chaos was around me.
Describe your school routine.
I read my highschool's resources, then I make flashcards in the StudySmarter app, after that I take a break and finally I complete the activities.
Sometimes I completefinish them earlier to have free time later.
What do you do in your free time?
I usetake photos with my mom's camera, dance, learn languages, read, knit, and most of all I study physics.
What new skills or challenges are you trying to overcome?
-Making easier to keepKeeping up with all my hobbies and school activities up.
-Mastering my skills.
-Improving my actualcurrent situation.
Write about any difficulties in this moment of your life.
Sadness and rage.
Sometimes I feel sad and angry for my actualbecause of my current situation and I'm doing my best to understand and control my emotions.
What are you doing to overcome those difficulties?
I writekeep a diary, I pay attention to my emotions and I allow myself to feel them, I read books, I make exercise, I learn languages and I learn physics with a lovely professor, I'm trying to be grateful every time I can.
What are your plans after finishing high school?
I want to study and live in a safe country, I would like to teaching learning techniques, I want to study geography and I wish beingto be a fashion designer.
Would you like to study for a degree?
Which one?
Which university?
I'm not sure about what university but I want to study geography in college because I love it so much.
What would you like to work on?
Most of all, I want to be a fashion designer.
This is correct, but you could also say "Most of all, I want to BECOME a fashion designer"
What is your greatest goal?
To appreciate every moment, no matter how hard it is.
What challenges will you have to face to achieve your goal?
Ego, and changing my life's perspective on life.
Write a half page reflection on what you learned during thisese English modules and how they contributed to your formation.
During these modules I learned how to describe the location of objects, I learned how to indicatetalk about people, how to go to an specific place, I learned when I must use capital letters and how to express fluently in English.
I feel more confident when speaking in one of my target languages.
I learned how to conjugate and when I should I use the words "were" and "was".
I also improved my English pronunciation and my English undesrstanding so I can consume contents in English without feeling unconmfortable.
This module and the influence of my professor's corrections improved drastically improved my English mistakes.
Now I am much better at English and it allows me to interact with a plenty of people all over the world.
Therefore, I learned about myself; about my past, my present and what I want to be in the future.
I clarified my goals in order to achieve them.
These modules were a beautiful challenge to face and they gavetaught me a lesson that is to remember that I'm not perfect so I should focus on improving and try over and over again until I master English.
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