Oct. 28, 2022
Assignment 6: Opening Ceremony.
Hello! I hope you're doing well :)
Thank you all for always correcting me.
Write three questions in English to know the specific information in the opening.
Write long answers.
Who will assist? Politicians, photographers, the president and hundreds of people will assist.
When will the ceremony start? The ceremony will start at 8pm o'clock.
What is the purpose of this ceremony? The purpose of the ceremony is to explain what the president and politicians did when they were governing.
Write questions about what will your partner do before the opening day.
Wirte long answers.
Will you wear a black suit? Yes, I will wear a black suit with a red tie.
How you will manage your time before the opening day? I will dinner, after that I will open my agenda and call my assistant, then I will drive my black car and finally I will come to the ceremony.
What will you do before the opening day? I will prepare my speech and buy a new suit.
In a paragraph write how English can help you to get a better job.
When hiring, people prioritize polyglots or bilingual people in order to get foreign customers. Therefore, English can be benefitial for me to create a positive customer experience to others when getting a job.
It will also makes me confident if I want to communicate to other people. I would be able to work in places where English is spoken such as Australia, United Kingdom and United States. This is really important because all of them are industrialized countries, they have a strong economy and important technology developments.
Learning English is a priority because it is the most spoken language worldwide, and if I speak it I will get access to more information and free sources to improve my skills in my future job.
Assignment 6: Opening Ceremony.
Hello!
I hope you're doing well :)
Thank you all for alwaysfor correcting me.
Thank you is more personal as one person right now is reading this and correcting it; therefore don’t use ‘all’, just saying you is much more natural !
Write three questions in English to know the specifichat give information in the opening.prologue of a story.
This sentence was unnatural I’m not sure what you were trying to say but I tried my best, let me know what it was you wanted if this isn’t it!
Write long answers.
Who will assist (you)?
You must clarify whom or what the assistance is for:
“She needs assistance for the assignment.”
“She needs help to open the door.”
“She needed help lifting the heavy package.”
Politicians, photographers, the pPresident and hundreds of people will assist.
President = proper noun, therefore capital
You don’t need to repeat the context of a question, for example:
“Did you eat your breakfast.”
“I ate peas for breakfast.”
“I ate carrot.”
You can just say the second one it is much more natural
When will the ceremony start?
The ceremony will start at 8pm PM / 8 o'’clock.
Pick one
What is theits purpose of this ceremony?
Use it to omit the subject; we already know the subject will be the ceremony as it’s been implied; therefore you and use its to avoid saying the subject again !
The purpose of the ceremony is to explain what the president and politicians did when they were governing.
Write questions about what will your partner do bewill be doing in preparation fore the opening day.
Much more natural
“I will be at home.”
“I will be eating food.”
“I am going to be at the park.”
^^^ use ‘be’ with future tenses to imply an action in gerund / place. Use it with future tenses and ir a + gerund
Wirite long answers.
Will you wear a black suit? / Will you be wearing a black suit?
See notes above
Yes, I will wear a black suit with a red tie.
How you will you manage your time before the opening day?
With questions you reverse the subject (so I’ve heard !)
I will have dinner, after that/then I will open my agenda and call my assistant, then. I will drive my black car and finally I will come toarrive at the ceremony.
In English, breakfast/lunch/dinner are all nouns, never a verb. Therefore you would say “I had dinner.” “I will have dinner.” It is something we have (kind of like ‘tengo dieciséis años’; it is that weird verb in English and the equivalent of that weird one in Spanish!)
Arrive = to get to a location
What will you do before the opening day?
I will prepare my speech and buy a new suit.
In a paragraph write how English can help you to get a better job.
When hiring, people prioritize polyglots or bilingual people in order to get foreign customers.
Therefore, English can be benefitial for me to create a positive customer experience to others when getting a job.
It will also makes me confident if I want to communicate towith other people.
I would be able to work in places where English is spoken such as Australia, United Kingdom andEngland and the United States/America.
This is really important because all of them are industrialized countries, they have a strong economy and importanta plethora of technologyical developments.
More natural
Learning English is a priority for me because it is the most spoken language worldwide, and if I speak it I will get access to more information and free resources to improve my skillsopportunities and progression in my future job/endeavours.
For me - you are reflecting on yourself.
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Buen trabajo !
Oct. 28, 2022
Write three questions in English to know the specifichat give information in the opening.prologue of a story.
Umm I just wrote the instructions but they mean imagining a opening ceremony (and you can choose the topic) and then write questions and answers about it.
Oct. 28, 2022
Politicians, photographers, the pPresident and hundreds of people will assist.
Ok, I repeated it befause the activity asks long answers, how can I make it longer without repeating?
Oct. 28, 2022
Thank you so much for all your corrections, you've helped me a lot in this language learning journey.
Oct. 28, 2022
Umm I just wrote the instructions but they mean imagining a opening ceremony (and you can choose the topic) and then write questions and answers about it.
Oh ok! Then:
Write three questions in English for an imaginative topic of your choice and write detailed answers about it. (I chose to do an opening ceremony).
Or:
Write three questions in English for the preparation of an imaginative ceremony.
* I said ‘preparation’ because your questions are mostly around what you are doing to prepare e.g (what are you wearing, what is it about, who is going to be there) and you are talking about as a future event/upcoming event !
Oct. 28, 2022
Ok, I repeated it befause the activity asks long answers, how can I make it longer without repeating?
Ok here is the art of, I suppose us Australians say, ‘bullshitting’ 🤣:
“At the ceremony there will be a plethora of people. There will be politicians, photographers, paparazzi, the President and of course many hundreds of people from the public, including me, will be in attendance.”
Oct. 29, 2022
Hahah thank you!
Oct. 29, 2022
Oh ok! Then: Write three questions in English for an imaginative topic of your choice and write detailed answers about it. (I chose to do an opening ceremony). Or: Write three questions in English for the preparation of an imaginative ceremony. * I said ‘preparation’ because your questions are mostly around what you are doing to prepare e.g (what are you wearing, what is it about, who is going to be there) and you are talking about as a future event/upcoming event !
Ok! Thank you again :)
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I hope you're doing well :) This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Thank you all for always correcting me. Thank you Thank you is more personal as one person right now is reading this and correcting it; therefore don’t use ‘all’, just saying you is much more natural ! |
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Write three questions in English to know the specific information in the opening. Write three questions in English t This sentence was unnatural I’m not sure what you were trying to say but I tried my best, let me know what it was you wanted if this isn’t it! |
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Write long answers. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Who will assist? Who will assist (you)? You must clarify whom or what the assistance is for: “She needs assistance for the assignment.” “She needs help to open the door.” “She needed help lifting the heavy package.” |
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Politicians, photographers, the president and hundreds of people will assist. Politicians, photographers, the President = proper noun, therefore capital You don’t need to repeat the context of a question, for example: “Did you eat your breakfast.” “I ate peas for breakfast.” “I ate carrot.” You can just say the second one it is much more natural |
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When will the ceremony start? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The ceremony will start at 8pm o'clock. The ceremony will start at 8 Pick one |
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What is the purpose of this ceremony? What is Use it to omit the subject; we already know the subject will be the ceremony as it’s been implied; therefore you and use its to avoid saying the subject again ! |
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The purpose of the ceremony is to explain what the president and politicians did when they were governing. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Write questions about what will your partner do before the opening day. Write questions about what Much more natural “I will be at home.” “I will be eating food.” “I am going to be at the park.” ^^^ use ‘be’ with future tenses to imply an action in gerund / place. Use it with future tenses and ir a + gerund |
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Will you wear a black suit? Will you wear a black suit? / Will you be wearing a black suit? See notes above |
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Yes, I will wear a black suit with a red tie. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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How you will manage your time before the opening day? How With questions you reverse the subject (so I’ve heard !) |
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I will dinner, after that I will open my agenda and call my assistant, then I will drive my black car and finally I will come to the ceremony. I will have dinner, after that/then I will open my agenda and call my assistant In English, breakfast/lunch/dinner are all nouns, never a verb. Therefore you would say “I had dinner.” “I will have dinner.” It is something we have (kind of like ‘tengo dieciséis años’; it is that weird verb in English and the equivalent of that weird one in Spanish!) Arrive = to get to a location |
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What will you do before the opening day? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I will prepare my speech and buy a new suit. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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In a paragraph write how English can help you to get a better job. In a paragraph write how English can help you |
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When hiring, people prioritize polyglots or bilingual people in order to get foreign customers. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Therefore, English can be benefitial for me to create a positive customer experience to others when getting a job. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It will also makes me confident if I want to communicate to other people. It will also makes me confident if I want to communicate |
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I would be able to work in places where English is spoken such as Australia, United Kingdom and United States. I would be able to work in places where English is spoken such as Australia, |
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This is really important because all of them are industrialized countries, they have a strong economy and important technology developments. This is really important because all of them are industrialized countries, they have a strong economy and More natural |
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Learning English is a priority because it is the most spoken language worldwide, and if I speak it I will get access to more information and free sources to improve my skills in my future job. Learning English is a priority for me because it is the most spoken language worldwide, and if I speak it I will get access to more information and free resources to improve my For me - you are reflecting on yourself. |
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