Oct. 29, 2022
Assignment 2: Meanwhile.
Hello! I hope you're doing well :)
Thank you for always correcting me.
Today I'm doing a assignment where I need to imagine that my neighbour was robbed and then answer some questions about it.
Instructions:
The theft occurred between 6 pm and 8pm. What were you doing when the thieved were stealing your neighbor's house? Mention three consecutive activities. Use first, after that and then
First I took a shower
After that I brushed my teeth.
Then I studied phisics.
Who do you live with? What were they doing before, during and after the theft? Mention three persons and two activities of each one.
I live with my mom, my brother and my grandmother.
Before the theft, my grandmother was watching the TV.
During the theft she searched some chocolates in the kitchen cabinet.
After the theft she sleeped for a while.
My brother was playing videogames before the theft.
During the theft he did some exercise.
After the theft he maked coffe.
My mom went shopping before the theft.
My mom was cooking when the theft was occuring.
My mom was taking a shower after the theft.
Write three questions that you would ask to your neighbor
Did you lost something important?
Is your house in disorder?
How do you feel about this theft?
Assignment 2: Meanwhile.
Hello!
I hope you're doing well :)
Thank you for always correcting me.
Always implies it is the same correctors, you are making a general entry to the public, english users never usually make this assumption, this would only be said naturally to a particular person e.g. you’re just sending your journals to one person in particular.
Today I'm doing a assignment where I need to imagine that my neighbour was robbed and then answer some questions about it.
Instructions:
The theft occurred between 6 pm and 8 pm.
What were you doing when the thieveds were stealing from your neighbor's house?
“She was stealing from the store.”
“He was stealing from his sister.”
Australian/British: neighbours (from now on I am going to assume you are aiming for an America dialect)
Mention three consecutive activities.
Use first, after that and then
First I took a shower
After that I brushed my teeth.
Then I studied phiysics.
Who do you live with?
What were they doing before, during and after the theft?
Mention three persons and two activities of each one.
I live with my mom, my brother and my grandmother.
Before the theft, my grandmother was watching theTV / was watching a program on TV.
During the theft she was searcheding for some chocolates in the kitchen cabinet.
“Ella fue a buscar” “She was searching”.
In English, with regards to a specific object, we always say “searching for”:
‘She was searching/looking for her dog.’
After the theft she sleepedpt for a little while.
Dormí - she it he slept
My brother was playing videogames before the theft.
During the theft he didwas doing some exercise.
More natural.
Estaba hacer ejercicio - he was doing exercise
After the theft he makedde some coffee.
My mom went shopping before the theft.
My mom was cooking when the theft was occurring./when the theft occurred.
My mom was taking a shower after the theft.
Write three questions that you would ask to your neighbor
Did you loste something important?
Is your house in disorder?
How do you feel about thise theft?
Feedback
Buen trabajo! I think you would benefit from searching up words you are unsure of or making a word list, as majority of your mistakes were based on spelling ! :) also, like the corrector above, I think you would also benefit from tense work, maybe uploading a journal with some tense sentences that we could correct would be best !
Oct. 29, 2022
What were you doing when the thieveds were stealing from your neighbor's house?
Haha, sorry, from now on I will specify the dialect in my journals.
Oct. 29, 2022
During the theft he didwas doing some exercise.
Es "estaba haciendo ejercicio" :)
¡Gracias por tus correcciones!
Oct. 29, 2022
¡Thank you again! I will help you with your journals too :)
Oct. 30, 2022
Oh haha thank you lol!
Today I'm doing an assignment where I need to imagine that my neighbour was robbed and then answer some questions about it.
What were you doing when the thieved weref was stealing your neighbor's house?
Then I studied phiysics.
During the theft, she was searcheding for some chocolates in the kitchen cabinet.
After the theft, she sleepedpt for a while.
During the theft, he didwas doing some exercise.
your sentence, although not grammatically wrong, would be better this way.
After the theft he makede coffee.
My mom was takingtook a shower after the theft.
Did you loste something important?
Feedback
pay close attention to your tenses.
Oct. 29, 2022
Thank you!
What were you doing when the thieveds were stealing your neighbour's house?
"Neighbour" has an extra "u" in Canadian, British, and Australian English. If you are aiming to use American English, then ignore this spelling correction.
Then I studied phiysics.
Mention three persons and two activities ofor each one.
Before the theft, my grandmother was watching the TV.
During the theft, she searched for some chocolates in the kitchen cabinet.
After the theft, she sleepedpt for a while.
During the theft, he did some exercise.
After the theft, he makede coffee.
My mom was cooking whilen the theft was occurring.
Write three questions that you would ask to your neighbour
Did you loste something important?
Is your house in disorder?
This doesn't sound natural. I think you were trying to say, "Is your house messy?" But please reply with what you might have wanted to say.
How do you feel about this theft?
You could also say, "How did you feel about this theft?" if you wanted to know what they were feeling during the event.
Oct. 29, 2022
Is your house in disorder?
Yes, that's what I wanted to say. Thank you :)
Oct. 29, 2022
Thank you so much!
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