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kaelimaru

Nov. 17, 2022

3
ASMR

My day is finally done and it went well. It was a rainy day. I was happy to see some puddles and didn't really care if I was walking into one by heedlessness. It hasn't rained for months and our soils are really dry. Unfortunately, it needs more rain in the duration to go deeper into the phreatic tables. Their levels are still abnormally low for this period of the year.

Today, a friend of mine told me about ASMR. She is listening to it to fall asleep or to feel less stressed. I was a little bit sceptical about the benefits of this finding.

Oh… Sceptical, using this word right now reminds me about another one: septic! Both of them can be easily confusing words in French because they have the same pronunciation. If one day you want to write the adjective, which means something like to question commonly accepted truths and beliefs, don't forget the "c": sceptique. "Septique" is mostly used combined with "fosse"… "Fosse septique" which means "septic tank". One mute letter can change its meanings in a writing production. (:

This was my little aside.

ASMR is intriguing. People who are recording those videos are very patient and gentle. None of them grate my ears yet. I wouldn't listen to it for hours though but some role plays are well-made. Some youtubers make a good effort to create a realistic scenery. The vintage backgrounds decor are my favourite. They may spend a lot of time hunting the items they need. I don't really feel any triggles while listening to ASMR. By the way, if my eyes focus on the person's fingers moving on the screen, it tends to get me to sleep.

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My day is finally doneover and it went well.

I was happy to see some puddles and didn't really care if I was walking into one by heedlessnessaccident.

It hasn't rained for months and our soils are, so the ground is really dry.

Unfortunately, it needs more rain in the duration to go deeper into the phreatic tables. (?)

I don't understand this part.

She is listenings to it to fall asleep or to feel less stressed.

I was a little bit sceptical about the benefits of this findingactivity .

We're talking about an activity/a hobby here, rather than the findings (results) of an investigation.

One mute letter can change its meanings in a when writing production.

(:

This was my little aside. aside, ASMR is intriguing. People who are recording those videos are very patient and gentle. None of them grate my ears yet. I wouldn't listen to it for hours though but some role play videos are well-made. Some yYoutubers makeput in a good amount of effort to create a realistic scenery. The decor of the vintage backgrounds decor areis my favourite. They may spend a lot of time huntingsearching for the items they need. I don't really feel any trigglesingling sensation while listening to ASMR. By the way, if my eyes focus on the person's fingers moving on the screen, it tends to get me to make me fall asleep.

though and but both mean the same thing, so "but" is superfluous.

ASMR

My day is finally done and it went well.

It was a rainy day.

I was happy to see some puddles and didn't really care if I was walking into one by hneedlessness.ly.

It hasn't rained for months and our soils are is really dry.

Unfortunately, it needs more rain in the durationfor a longer period of time to go deeper into the phreatic tables.

Their levels are is still abnormally low for this period of the year.

Today, a friend of mine told me about ASMR.

She iwas listening to it to fall asleep or to feel less stressed.

I was a little bit sceptical about the benefits of this finding.application.

Oh… Sceptical, using this word right now reminds me aboutof another one:word - septic!

Both of them can be easily confusing wordsed in French because they have the same pronunciation.

If one day you want to write the adjective, which means something like to question commonly accepted truths and beliefs, don't forget the "c": sceptique.

"Septique" is mostly used combined with "fosse"… "Fosse septique" which means "septic tank".

One mute letter can change its meanings in awhen writing production.

(:

This was my little aside.

ASMR is intriguing. People who are recording thoese videos are very patient and gentle. None of them grate my ears as yet. I wouldn't listen to it for hours, though but some role plays are well-made. Some youtubers make a good effort to create a realistic scenery. The vintage backgrounds decor areis my favourite. They mayust spend a lot of time huntinglooking for the items they need. I don't really feel any triggles while listening to ASMR. By the way, if my eyes focus on the person's fingers moving on the screen, it tends to get me to make me fall asleep.

Not sure what triggles are.

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kaelimaru

Nov. 19, 2022

3

(:

This was my little aside.

ASMR is intriguing. People who are recording thoese videos are very patient and gentle. None of them grate my ears as yet. I wouldn't listen to it for hours, though but some role plays are well-made. Some youtubers make a good effort to create a realistic scenery. The vintage backgrounds decor areis my favourite. They mayust spend a lot of time huntinglooking for the items they need. I don't really feel any triggles while listening to ASMR. By the way, if my eyes focus on the person's fingers moving on the screen, it tends to get me to make me fall asleep.

I think it's kind of chills you get when you hear the sound. (:

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kaelimaru

Nov. 19, 2022

3

Thank you!

ASMR

My day is finally done and it went well.

It was a rainy day.

I was happy to see some puddles and didn't really care if I was walking into one by heedlessnessaccident.

It hasn't rained for months and our soils are is really dry.

'Soil' is usually uncountable except in rare instances, like at a gardening store: "We sell many types of soils, like soil for cacti"

Unfortunately, itwe needs a more rain in the duration to (go deeper into the phreatic tables./refill the aquifers).

'Phreatic' appears correct but I have never seen it before. Perhaps it's used more in science.

Their levels are still abnormally low for this period of the year.

Today, a friend of mine told me about ASMR.

She is listening to it to fall asleep orand to feel less stressed.

I was a little bit sceptical about the benefits of this (finding).

'Finding' sounds overly formal but is correct.

Oh… Sceptical, using this word right now reminds me about/of another one: septic!

Both of them can be easily confusinged words in French because they have the same pronunciation.

If one day you want to write the adjective, which means something like to question commonly accepted truths and beliefs, don't forget the "c": sceptique.

"Septique" is mostly used combined with "fosse"… "Fosse septique" which means "septic tank".

One mute/silent letter can change its meanings in a writing production.

(:

This was my little aside.

ASMR is intriguing. People who are recording those videos are very patient and gentle. None of them grate my ears yet. I wouldn't listen to it for hours though but some role plays are well-made. Some youtubers make a good effort to create a realistic scenery. The vintage backgrounds decor are my favourite. They may spend a lot of time hunting the items they need. I don't really feel any triggles while listening to ASMR. By the way, if my eyes focus on the person's fingers moving on the screen, it tends to get me to sleep.

I can only correct this last part in one block for some reason.

...hunting *for* the items...
The vintage decor in the backgrounds...
I don't really feel any tingles...

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Nice work!

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kaelimaru

Nov. 19, 2022

3

Thank you!

ASMR

My day is finally done, and it went well.

It was a rainy day.

I was happy to see some puddles and didn't really care if I was walkinglked into one by heedlessnesson accident.

It hasn't rained for months, and our soils are is really dry.

Unfortunately, it needs more rain in the duration to go deeper into the phreatic tables.

Their levels are still abnormally low for this period of the year.

Today, a friend of mine told me about ASMR.

I was a little bit sckeptical about the benefits of this findingASMR.

Oh… Sceptical, using thise word right nowskeptical reminds me aboutof another one: septic!

Both of them can be easily confusing words in French because they have the same pronunciation.

If one day you want to write the adjective, which means something like "to question commonly accepted truths and beliefs", don't forget the "c": sceptique.

One mutesilent letter can change its meanings in a writing production.

kaelimaru's avatar
kaelimaru

Nov. 19, 2022

3

Thank you!

ASMR


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My day is finally done and it went well.


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My day is finally doneover and it went well.

It was a rainy day.


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I was happy to see some puddles and didn't really care if I was walking into one by heedlessness.


I was happy to see some puddles and didn't really care if I was walkinglked into one by heedlessnesson accident.

I was happy to see some puddles and didn't really care if I was walking into one by heedlessnessaccident.

I was happy to see some puddles and didn't really care if I was walking into one by hneedlessness.ly.

I was happy to see some puddles and didn't really care if I was walking into one by heedlessnessaccident.

It hasn't rained for months and our soils are really dry.


It hasn't rained for months, and our soils are is really dry.

It hasn't rained for months and our soils are is really dry.

'Soil' is usually uncountable except in rare instances, like at a gardening store: "We sell many types of soils, like soil for cacti"

It hasn't rained for months and our soils are is really dry.

It hasn't rained for months and our soils are, so the ground is really dry.

Unfortunately, it needs more rain in the duration to go deeper into the phreatic tables.


Unfortunately, it needs more rain in the duration to go deeper into the phreatic tables.

Unfortunately, itwe needs a more rain in the duration to (go deeper into the phreatic tables./refill the aquifers).

'Phreatic' appears correct but I have never seen it before. Perhaps it's used more in science.

Unfortunately, it needs more rain in the durationfor a longer period of time to go deeper into the phreatic tables.

Unfortunately, it needs more rain in the duration to go deeper into the phreatic tables. (?)

I don't understand this part.

Their levels are still abnormally low for this period of the year.


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Their levels are is still abnormally low for this period of the year.

Today, a friend of mine told me about ASMR.


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She is listening to it to fall asleep or to feel less stressed.


She is listening to it to fall asleep orand to feel less stressed.

She iwas listening to it to fall asleep or to feel less stressed.

She is listenings to it to fall asleep or to feel less stressed.

I was a little bit sceptical about the benefits of this finding.


I was a little bit sckeptical about the benefits of this findingASMR.

I was a little bit sceptical about the benefits of this (finding).

'Finding' sounds overly formal but is correct.

I was a little bit sceptical about the benefits of this finding.application.

I was a little bit sceptical about the benefits of this findingactivity .

We're talking about an activity/a hobby here, rather than the findings (results) of an investigation.

Oh… Sceptical, using this word right now reminds me about another one: septic!


Oh… Sceptical, using thise word right nowskeptical reminds me aboutof another one: septic!

Oh… Sceptical, using this word right now reminds me about/of another one: septic!

Oh… Sceptical, using this word right now reminds me aboutof another one:word - septic!

Both of them can be easily confusing words in French because they have the same pronunciation.


Both of them can be easily confusing words in French because they have the same pronunciation.

Both of them can be easily confusinged words in French because they have the same pronunciation.

Both of them can be easily confusing wordsed in French because they have the same pronunciation.

If one day you want to write the adjective, which means something like to question commonly accepted truths and beliefs, don't forget the "c": sceptique.


If one day you want to write the adjective, which means something like "to question commonly accepted truths and beliefs", don't forget the "c": sceptique.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Septique is mostly used combined with fosse… fosse septique which means septic tank.


One mute letter can change its meanings in a writing production.


One mutesilent letter can change its meanings in a writing production.

One mute/silent letter can change its meanings in a writing production.

One mute letter can change its meanings in awhen writing production.

One mute letter can change its meanings in a when writing production.

(: This was my little aside. ASMR is intriguing. People who are recording those videos are very patient and gentle. None of them grate my ears yet. I wouldn't listen to it for hours though but some role plays are well-made. Some youtubers make a good effort to create a realistic scenery. The vintage backgrounds decor are my favourite. They must spend a lot of time hunting the items they need. I don't really feel any triggles while listening to ASMR. By the way, if my eyes focus on the person's fingers moving on the screen, it tends to get me to sleep.


"Septique" is mostly used combined with "fosse"… "Fosse septique" which means "septic tank".


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

(: This was my little aside. ASMR is intriguing. People who are recording those videos are very patient and gentle. None of them grate my ears yet. I wouldn't listen to it for hours though but some role plays are well-made. Some youtubers make a good effort to create a realistic scenery. The vintage backgrounds decor are my favourite. They may spend a lot of time hunting the items they need. I don't really feel any triggles while listening to ASMR. By the way, if my eyes focus on the person's fingers moving on the screen, it tends to get me to sleep.


(:

This was my little aside.

ASMR is intriguing. People who are recording those videos are very patient and gentle. None of them grate my ears yet. I wouldn't listen to it for hours though but some role plays are well-made. Some youtubers make a good effort to create a realistic scenery. The vintage backgrounds decor are my favourite. They may spend a lot of time hunting the items they need. I don't really feel any triggles while listening to ASMR. By the way, if my eyes focus on the person's fingers moving on the screen, it tends to get me to sleep.

I can only correct this last part in one block for some reason. ...hunting *for* the items... The vintage decor in the backgrounds... I don't really feel any tingles...

(:

This was my little aside.

ASMR is intriguing. People who are recording thoese videos are very patient and gentle. None of them grate my ears as yet. I wouldn't listen to it for hours, though but some role plays are well-made. Some youtubers make a good effort to create a realistic scenery. The vintage backgrounds decor areis my favourite. They mayust spend a lot of time huntinglooking for the items they need. I don't really feel any triggles while listening to ASMR. By the way, if my eyes focus on the person's fingers moving on the screen, it tends to get me to make me fall asleep.

Not sure what triggles are.

(:

This was my little aside. aside, ASMR is intriguing. People who are recording those videos are very patient and gentle. None of them grate my ears yet. I wouldn't listen to it for hours though but some role play videos are well-made. Some yYoutubers makeput in a good amount of effort to create a realistic scenery. The decor of the vintage backgrounds decor areis my favourite. They may spend a lot of time huntingsearching for the items they need. I don't really feel any trigglesingling sensation while listening to ASMR. By the way, if my eyes focus on the person's fingers moving on the screen, it tends to get me to make me fall asleep.

though and but both mean the same thing, so "but" is superfluous.

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