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Ask for a half-day leave

The weather forecast says it will snow this afternoon. On Friday there usually has a heavy traffic, because many people go out of my work city this day. I think the snow will make the traffic get heavier, then my commute time will get too long and the driving will prove me to be exhausting. So I am planning to ask for a half-day leave this afternoon, so I can avoid the heavy traffic.

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Asking for a half-day of leave

The weather forecast says it will snow this afternoon.

On Friday there is usually has a heavy traffic, because many people go out of my work city this day.the city where I work on Fridays.

Suggestion: Many people try to drive out of the city on Friday evenings, so the traffic is usually heavy.

I think the snow will make the traffic geteven heavier, thenand my commute time will get too long, and the driving will (prove me to) be exhausting.

So I am planning to ask for {a half-day leave | a half day of leave} this afternoon, so I can avoid the heavy traffic.

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The traffic is heavy on Friday afternoons here, too, and if it snows—or even just rains hard—it’s horrible. Taking the afternoon off sounds like a good idea.

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Vinson

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Thanks my friend. Would please tell where are you from^_^

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I’m from the USA :-)

Ask for a half-day leave

The weather forecast says it will snow this afternoon.

On Friday, there is usually has a heavy traffic, because many people go out of my work city on this day.

1) to say a situation exist, "there is" should be used instead of "there has". E.g. there is an earth quake in Japan.
2) traffic is uncountable, so you would not put "a" in front of traffic.

I think the snow will make the traffic get heavier, then my commute time will get too long and the driving will prove me to bbecome exhausting.

So I am planning to ask for a half-day leave this afternoon, so I can avoid the heavy traffic.

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Vinson

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Got it. Thanks

Ask for a half-day leave


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Asking for a half-day of leave

The weather forecast says it will snow this afternoon.


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On Friday there usually has a heavy traffic, because many people go out of my work city this day.


On Friday, there is usually has a heavy traffic, because many people go out of my work city on this day.

1) to say a situation exist, "there is" should be used instead of "there has". E.g. there is an earth quake in Japan. 2) traffic is uncountable, so you would not put "a" in front of traffic.

On Friday there is usually has a heavy traffic, because many people go out of my work city this day.the city where I work on Fridays.

Suggestion: Many people try to drive out of the city on Friday evenings, so the traffic is usually heavy.

I think the snow will make the traffic get heavier, then my commute time will get too long and the driving will prove me to be exhausting.


I think the snow will make the traffic get heavier, then my commute time will get too long and the driving will prove me to bbecome exhausting.

I think the snow will make the traffic geteven heavier, thenand my commute time will get too long, and the driving will (prove me to) be exhausting.

So I am planning to ask for a half-day leave this afternoon, so I can avoid the heavy traffic.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

So I am planning to ask for {a half-day leave | a half day of leave} this afternoon, so I can avoid the heavy traffic.

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