Nov. 24, 2023
Asian Games in China 2023
The Asian Games is a multi-sport event held every four years in Asia. the latest one was the 19th in Hangzhou, which ended on the 8th October in China. It was not a surprise that the Chinese team won the most gold medals, ranked number one, and was far ahead of all the other Asian countries. India's table tennis team this time, however, won against China in the women's double final.
it's interesting that people in China were not angry about this gold medal loss to the Indians. They discussed that the Chinese team had won too many medals, and this one was a gift. Upon the number of medal medals, I don't think this can prove that China is a leading sports nation. Whereas, when I was a child, I believed that a gold medal country would be a sports nation.
the latest one was the 19th in Hangzhou, which ended on the 8th October in China.
The 19th Asian Games took place in Hangzhou, China, and wrapped up on October 8th.
It was not a surprise that the Chinese team won the most gold medals, ranked number one, and was far ahead of all the other Asian countries.
It came as no surprise that the Chinese team won the most gold medals, ranked number one, and well surpassed all of the other Asian countries.
India's table tennis team this time, however, won against China in the women's double final.
India's table tennis team did, however, win against China in the women's double final.
it's interesting that people in China were not angry about this gold medal loss to the Indians.
It's interesting that Chinese people were not angry about this gold medal loss to India/the Indians.
They discussed that the Chinese team had won too many medals, and this one was a gift.
Spectators rationalized that the Chinese team had already won too many medals, so this one was a gift.
Upon the number of medal medals, I don't think this can prove that China is a leading sports nation.
Contrary to what I believed as a child, I don't think that China's number of gold medals can prove that it is a leading sports nation.
Whereas, when I was a child, I believed that a gold medal country would be a sports nation.
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Nov. 26, 2023
Thank you for your corrections!
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It was not an't surpriseing that the Chinese team won the most gold medals, ranked number one, and was far ahead of all the other Asian countries.
Why is this not surprising? Because they usually win?
India's table tennis team this time, however, won against China this time in the women's double final.
iIt's interesting that people in China were not angry about this gold medal loss to the Indians.
They discussed people were saying that the Chinese team had won too many medals, andlready, so this one was a gift.
Upon theI don't think only the high number of medalgold medals, I don't think this itself can prove that China is a leading sports nation.
Whereas, when I was a child, I believed that a country with many gold medal countrys would be a sports nation.
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It seems like the last two sentences abruply change. You don't explain *why* you don't think China is a sports nation, or give any reason to support it, so it feels out of place.
Nov. 25, 2023
Thank you for your corrections! It's a big question whether the Olympic gold medals can truly reflect a country's sporting prowess, I personally think it reflects a country's economic levels.
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The Asian Games is a multi-sport event held every four years in Asia. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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the latest one was the 19th in Hangzhou, which ended on the 8th October in China.
the latest one was the 19th in Hangzhou, which ended on the 8th October in China. The 19th Asian Games took place in Hangzhou, China, and wrapped up on October 8th. |
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It was not a surprise that the Chinese team won the most gold medals, ranked number one, and was far ahead of all the other Asian countries. It was Why is this not surprising? Because they usually win? It was not a surprise that the Chinese team won the most gold medals, ranked number one, and was far ahead of all the other Asian countries. It came as no surprise that the Chinese team won the most gold medals, ranked number one, and well surpassed all of the other Asian countries. |
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India's table tennis team this time, however, won against China in the women's double final. India's table tennis team India's table tennis team this time, however, won against China in the women's double final. India's table tennis team did, however, win against China in the women's double final. |
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it's interesting that people in China were not angry about this gold medal loss to the Indians.
it's interesting that people in China were not angry about this gold medal loss to the Indians. It's interesting that Chinese people were not angry about this gold medal loss to India/the Indians. |
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They discussed that the Chinese team had won too many medals, and this one was a gift. The They discussed that the Chinese team had won too many medals, and this one was a gift. Spectators rationalized that the Chinese team had already won too many medals, so this one was a gift. |
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Upon the number of medal medals, I don't think this can prove that China is a leading sports nation.
Upon the number of medal medals, I don't think this can prove that China is a leading sports nation. Contrary to what I believed as a child, I don't think that China's number of gold medals can prove that it is a leading sports nation. |
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Whereas, when I was a child, I believed that a gold medal country would be a sports nation. Whereas, when I was a child, I believed that a country with many gold medal Whereas, when I was a child, I believed that a gold medal country would be a sports nation. Combine w/previous |
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