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alexwong2164

Oct. 6, 2020

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Asian English



https://www.youtube.com/watch?time_continue=1&v=53me-ICi_f8&feature=emb_logo

After I watched this video. I did feel a little sad!


I always want to be native for my nonmother languages. (English, Japanese…)


Because I believe if I want to found a job in those countries.


First thing I must do is able to spoke just like them.


Plus, if you spoke a language with heavy accent.



That didn’t look or feel cool at all.


But this Asian prove me wrong.


You still can become popular in western.


Even your English with strong accent problem.


That tells characteristic comes first, rather than speaking with beautiful pronunciation.

Corrections

I didAfter I watched this video, I feelt a little sad!

"After I watched this video" is not a complete sentence. It is a subordinate clause. Combine it with the next sentence.

I always want to be native forly-proficient in my nonmothernative languages.

You cannot be "native" by trying. Only by being born. You can be natively-proficient by studying.

FBecause I believe if I want to find a job in these countries, the first thing I must do is able to spokeeak just like them.

"Because I believe if I want to found a job in those countries" is not a sentence. It is an adverbial subordinate clause. Combine it with the next one.

That diPlus, if you speak a language with a heavy accent, it wouldn't look or feel cool at all.

But this Asian guy proves me wrong.

You still can become popular in western culture.

Even yourif you speak English with a strong accent problem.

Thatis tells characteristicme that personality comes first, rather than speaking with beautiful pronunciation.

Asian English


https://www.youtube.com/watch?time_continue=1&v=53me-ICi_f8&feature=emb_logo


After I watched this video.


I did feel a little sad!


I didAfter I watched this video, I feelt a little sad!

"After I watched this video" is not a complete sentence. It is a subordinate clause. Combine it with the next sentence.

I always want to be native for my nonmother languages.


I always want to be native forly-proficient in my nonmothernative languages.

You cannot be "native" by trying. Only by being born. You can be natively-proficient by studying.

(English, Japanese…)


Because I believe if I want to found a job in those countries.


First thing I must do is able to spoke just like them.


FBecause I believe if I want to find a job in these countries, the first thing I must do is able to spokeeak just like them.

"Because I believe if I want to found a job in those countries" is not a sentence. It is an adverbial subordinate clause. Combine it with the next one.

Plus, if you spoke a language with heavy accent.


That didn’t look or feel cool at all.


That diPlus, if you speak a language with a heavy accent, it wouldn't look or feel cool at all.

But this Asian prove me wrong.


But this Asian guy proves me wrong.

You still can become popular in western.


You still can become popular in western culture.

Even your English with strong accent problem.


Even yourif you speak English with a strong accent problem.

That tells characteristic comes first, rather than speaking with beautiful pronunciation.


Thatis tells characteristicme that personality comes first, rather than speaking with beautiful pronunciation.

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