030301-A simple analyzesis of an ad 030301-A simple analysis of an ad

030301-A simple analyzesis of an ad 030301-A simple analysis of an ad

If this is an essay then you should probably capitalise the title, “A Simple Analysis Of An Advertisement”

The picture is a print ad ofor a DR diamond ring, coming from its official website. The picture is a print ad for a DR diamond ring, coming from its official website.

The picture is a print advert of a DR diamond ring, coming from its official website. The picture is a print advert of a DR diamond ring, coming from its official website.

“advert of a DR diamond ring” not “advert of DR diamond ring”

This company sells proposal rings, and its main customer is the vast heterosexual community.target demographic is the unmarried youth in China This company sells proposal rings and its target demographic is the unmarried youth in China

"vast heterosexual community" is something you would never say in English, not in a million years. I completely changed it because, even in talking about business or marketing, it's taboo to talk about someone's sexuality and quite rude. "Target demographic" is more correct than "main customer" though it's not technically wrong.

This company sells proposal rings, and its main customer is the vasts come from the heterosexual community. This company sells proposal rings, and its main customers come from the heterosexual community.

You might want to simply say, “and its target audience is the heterosexual community.” - this sounds a bit better. I don’t think you need to say “vast” because everyone knows heterosexuals seem to be the majority… (Also I tried replacing “vast” with some kind of word soup, “majority of marriageable blah blah” but it’s clunky and I couldn’t get it to work.)

I think it is a successful ad for feelerromantic types because the diamond ring is an appearance product, and its value source issignifies most strongly romantic love. I think it is a successful ad for romantic types because the diamond ring is an appearance product, and its signifies most strongly romantic love.

I know that by 'feelers' you mean people who feel their emotions quite strongly, but 'feelers' in English is a word that perverted men use to refer to their hands. Alternatively, it can refer to an insect's hands or equivalent. I'm not quite sure what you mean by 'value source,' tell me if my change works.

I think it is a successful advert for feelersempathetic people because the diamond ring is an appearance product, and its value source issymbolic of romantic love. I think it is a successful advert for empathetic people because the diamond ring is symbolic of romantic love.

“feelers” is not something I’ve ever heard of (apart from in Brave New World maybe haha! Actually they were called “feelies” I think.) Maybe when you said “appearance product” (this is a little unnatural) you meant “fashionable item”? Maybe when you said “value source”, you meant, “it is a popular representation of romantic love”. The description “value source” is definitely not natural in my experience (am I wrong? Are there any examples online of this?).

This billboard has heavya lot of/makes heavy use of imagery and little copy: customers can see a giant product picture on the left and a terse description on the right. This billboard has a lot of/makes heavy use of imagery and little copy: customers can see a giant product picture on the left and a terse description on the right.

"heavy" refers to weight and would not be used to refer to a quality of imagery unless that imagery was 'heavy' in the sense that it was unpleasantly confronting or disturbing. Great use of 'terse'!

This billboard has heavybold imagery and littlebrief copy: customers can see a giant product picture on the left and a tersesuccinct description on the right. This billboard has bold imagery and brief copy: customers can see a giant product picture on the left and a succinct description on the right.

“Billboard”, “bold”, “brief” - alliteration adds power to sentences when used with care. Also “heavy imagery” is not quite right - “heavy” is can be (but not always of course!) associated with “dark, negative, hard, depressing” etc.

The image shows a woman's hand wearing thea wedding ring resting on the another hand so that the viewers can imagine the bride's joy. The image shows a woman's hand wearing a wedding ring resting on another hand so that the viewers can imagine the bride's joy.

The image shows a hand wearing the wedding ring, resting on the other hand so that tgroom’s hand. This gesture highlights the bride accepts the groom. The viewers can imagine the bride's joy. The image shows a hand wearing the wedding ring, resting on the groom’s hand. This gesture highlights the bride accepts the groom. The viewers can imagine the bride's joy.

Excellent analysis 👍

There is a ring box with a brand logo and a letter ofprenuptial agreement to shapeketch the image of a responsible husband's image. There is a ring box with a brand logo and a prenuptial agreement to sketch the image of a responsible husband.

An agreement signed before a wedding by the bridge and groom is called a 'prenuptial agreement' or simply a 'prenup' (pronounced pree-nup).

There is a ring box with a brand logo, and a letter of agreement to shaperepresent the idea of a responsible husband's image. There is a ring box with a brand logo, and a letter of agreement to represent the idea of a responsible husband.

“shape” suggests “mould, create, encourage or influence”. It’s perfectly fine but your sentence doesn’t quite work with it like this. I don’t have time to think of an alternative. Sorry!

The copy-writing stresses "only" and "always", likeusing words reminiscent of a marriage proposal or vows. The copy-writing stresses "only" and "always", using words reminiscent of a marriage proposal or vows.

Your sentence made sense, but I feel like it would benefit if it was more specific, so I changed it.

The customers would have vicarious emotional experiences from this branad. The customers would have vicarious emotional experiences from this ad.

The customers would have vicarious emotional experiences from this brand’s clever advert. The customers would have vicarious emotional experiences from this brand’s clever advert.

*This is a homework clippassage written for my Business English class. *This is a homework passage written for my Business English class.

'Clip' refers to a video or a piece of audio in rare cases.