May 15, 2025
As soon as he got home,
My son started unpacking his luggage from the overnight field trip. I was surprised how quickly he did that because I always had to tell him to unpack his bags again and again after every trip we had. Does this phenomenon mean that he has grown? Or just a transient mood for that? I was not sure. However I just felt that I loved my son all the more, who was somewhat different today.
家に帰ってきた途端、息子は宿泊学習の荷物を片付け始めた。私は驚いた。なぜなら、これまでは旅行から帰ってくるたびに、荷物を片づけなさい！と何回も言わなくてはいけなかったからだ。この現象は、息子の成長ということなのか？それとも、単に今そういう気分であるだけなのか？わからないけど、やっぱりいつもとどこかが違う息子をいっそう愛しく思った。
I was surprised at how quickly he did that because I always had to tell him to unpack his bags again and again after every trip we had together.
However I just felt that I loved my son all the more, who was somewhat different today.
I was surprised how quickly he did that because I alwaysusually hadve to tell him to unpack his bags again andover and over again after every trip we've had.
Does this phenomenon mean that he has grown?
I think phenomenon is usually used for nature/science (ex: natural phenomena 自然現象)
Or just a transientwas he just in the mood for that?
HoweverWhatever it was, I just felt that I loved my son all the more, who was somewhat different today.
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That's so cute! I remember as a child the smallest, most random things could make me want to try being like someone else.
May 16, 2025
Thank you for your comment and correction. Maybe he was just like you. He simply wanted to act differently that day. I love how he sways like this from day to day.
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Mmy son started unpacking his luggage from the overnight field trip.
I was surprised by how quickly he did that because I always had to tell him to unpack his bags again and again after every trip we had.
Does this phenomenon mean that he has grown?
Or was it just a transient mood for that?
I was not sure.
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This a very sweet story😊
May 16, 2025
Thank you! I’m glad that you didn’t correct “phenomenon“ in this context even though it might sound unnatural here. As I choose the word intentionally to highlight my stance as an observer for unexplainable shift in my son’s behavior, though I am not sure of your intention to leave this untouched.
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My son started unpacking his luggage from the overnight field trip.
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I was surprised how quickly he does that because I always had to tell him to unpack his bags again and again after every trip we had. |
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