May 16, 2025
I´m back. I'm aware I said I would bring an interesting story about my last drunkenness, but there wasn't a remarkable situation for writing. Only we watched a striptease show, but nothing more. So I decided to post my dance's presentation that was yesterday.
Everything went really good, people loved our execution and my partner was happy. Perhaps, before we presented our show, all of us practiced the choreography. I felt really comfortable with my ability and didn't practice, so I went for a cigarette. And while I was smoking out of the room, I saw my last partner (Fanny) practicing with her new partner, Gabo. If you had read my latest posts, you would remember she and I had feelings for each other, but I ruined that. The way of her hips and her blonde hair begged me to watch them dancing. Even I was extremely focused in her moves and was enjoying the view of her sinful body, I regretted it sooner than later. She was looking at him, but not like a strange guy, not like a white knight who was going to save her. She was looking at him as she looked at me. A bit of innocence in her lustful eyes while her body was perfectly synchronized with him, and her look said: "I trust you". I can not affirm she was falling in love with him, although I can affirm she never looked at me as a special person.
When I realized that, my body started to shake. I had to take a break, stabilize myself and go back to the room. Even I could deal with that, my self-confidence dropped. I was able to dance, and I did it pretty well. After the presentation, I had a little conversation with Fanny and felt she more cozy with me and, even, I could say she wanted to talk, but was it a real conclusion? I meant nothing but a partner for her, could I say that she forgot our accident and decided to heal our friendship again? That she wanted more than just a friendship? Fortunately, Noemi, my new partner, supported me, she made me laugh, and was there with me that day. More than a normal friend would be, but I don't want to think that she feels something for me, I might be wrong, and I can't deal with another lost friendship. I like to be near her, I hope she likes it too. I won't fuck this up, I won't do anything stupid to mess up this.
So that is my melodramatic story of today. Thanks for all your feedback and I appreciate the supportive comments you have written me. I' ll be in touch with you, and if you want me to explain something, I'll be glad to do it. Thanks for reading.
As she looked at me.
I´m back.
I'm aware I said I would bring an interesting story about my last drunkennesdrunk nights, but there wasn't a remarkable situationtory for writing.
Just to make it easier to read/ say
Only we watched a striptease show, but nothing more.
So I decided to post my dance's presentation that was yesterday.
Everything went really good, people loved our execution and my partner was happy.
Perhaps, bBefore we presented our show, all of us practiced the choreography.
I felt really comfortable with my ability andso I didn't practice, so I and went for a cigarette.
The way of her hips and her blonde hair begged me to watch them dancing.e,
Even I was extremeforced me to only focused in her moves and was enjoying the view of her sinful body, I regretted it sooner than later.
I would merge these two sentences so you can deeply express how you are in a trance by her dance moves.
She was looking at him, but not like a strange guy, notr like a white knight who was going to save her.
She was looking at him as she looked at me.
A bit of innocence in her lustful eyes while her body was perfectly synchronized with him, and her look said: "I trust you".
I can not affirm she was falling in love with him, although I can affirm she never looked at me as a special person.
When I realized that, my body started to shake.
I had to take a break, stabilize myself and go back to the room.
Even I couldn't deal with that, my self-confidence dropped.
I was able to dance, and I did it pretty well.
After the presentation, I had a little conversation with Fanny and felt she more cozy with me and, even, I could say she wanted to talk, but was it a real conclusion?
I meant nothing but a partner for her, could I say that she forgot our accident and decided to heal our friendship again?
ThatWas all she wanted more than just a friendship?
Fortunately, Noemi, my new partner, supported me, she made me laugh, and was there with me that day.
More than a normal friend would be, but I don't want to think that she feels something for me, I might be wrong, and I can't deal with another lost friendship.
I like to be near her, I hope she likes it too.
I won't fuck this up, I won't do anything stupid to mess up this.
So that is my melodramatic story of today.
Thanks for all your feedback and I appreciate the supportive comments you have written me.
I' ll be in touch with you, and if you want me to explain something, I'll be glad to do it.
Thanks for reading.
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This was a good read! I haven't read any other entries, but I am hooked with this story an excited to hear more. I just made the edits that I felt the story should sound for me to understand. I hope to see another entry soon!!
As she looked at me.
I´m back.
I'm aware I said I would bring an interesting story about my last drunkenness, but there wasn't a remarkable situation for writing.
Only we watched a striptease show, but nothing more.
So I decided to post my dance's presentation that was yesterday.
Everything went really good, people loved our execution and my partner was happy.
Perhaps, before we presented our show, all of us practiced the choreography.
I felt really comfortable with my ability and didn't practice, so I went for a cigarette.
And while I was smoking outside of the room, I saw my last partner (Fanny) practicing with her new partner, Gabo.
If you had read my latest posts, you would remember she and I had feelings for each other, but I ruined that.
The way of her hips and her blonde hair begged me to watch them dancing.
Even I was extremely focused in her moves and was enjoying the view of her sinful body, I regretted it sooner than later.
She was looking at him, but not like a strange guy, not like a white knight who was going to save her.
She was looking at him as she looked at me.
A bit of innocence in her lustful eyes while her body was perfectly synchronized with him, and her look said: "I trust you".
I can not affirm she was falling in love with him, although I can affirm she never looked at me as a special person.
When I realized that, my body started to shake.
I had to take a break, stabilize myself and go back to the room.
Even I could deal with that, my self-confidence dropped.
I was able to dance, and I did it pretty well.
After the presentation, I had a little conversation with Fanny and felt she more cozy with me and, even, I could say she wanted to talk, but was it a real conclusion?
I meant nothing but a partner for her, could I say that she forgot our accident and decided to heal our friendship again?
That she wanted more than just a friendship?
Fortunately, Noemi, my new partner, supported me, she made me laugh, and was there with me that day.
More than a normal friend would be, but I don't want to think that she feels something for me, I might be wrong, and I can't deal with another lost friendship.
I like to be near her, I hope she likes it too.
I won't fuck this up, I won't do anything stupid to mess up this.
So that is my melodramatic story of today.
Thanks for all your feedback and I appreciate the supportive comments you have written to me.
I' ll be in touch with you, and if you want me to explain something, I'll be glad to do it.
Thanks for reading.
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And while I was smoking out of the room, I saw my last partner (Fanny) practicing with her new partner, Gabo. And while I was smoking outside of the room, I saw my last partner (Fanny) practicing with her new partner, Gabo. |
If you had read my latest posts, you would remember she and I had feelings for each other, but I ruined that. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
The way of her hips and her blonde hair begged me to watch them dancing. This sentence has been marked as perfect! The way of her hips and her blonde hair begged me to watch them danc |
Even I was extremely focused in her moves and was enjoying the view of her sinful body, I regretted it sooner than later. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
I would merge these two sentences so you can deeply express how you are in a trance by her dance moves. |
She was looking at him, but not like a strange guy, not like a white knight who was going to save her. This sentence has been marked as perfect! She was looking at him, but not like a strange guy |
She was looking at him as she looked at me. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
A bit of innocence in her lustful eyes while her body was perfectly synchronized with him, and her look said: "I trust you". This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
I can not affirm she was falling in love with him, although I can affirm she never looked at me as a special person. I can not affirm she was falling in love with him, although I can affirm she never looked at me as a special person. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
When I realized that, my body started to shake. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
Even I could deal with that, my self-confidence dropped. This sentence has been marked as perfect! Even I couldn't deal with that, my self-confidence dropped. |
I like to be near her, I hope she likes it too. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
I won't fuck this up, I won't do anything stupid to mess up this. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
So that is my melodramatic story of today. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
Thanks for all your feedback and I appreciate the supportive comments you have written me. Thanks for all your feedback and I appreciate the supportive comments you have written to me. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
I' ll be in touch with you, and if you want me to explain something, I'll be glad to do it. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I had to take a break, stabilize myself and go back to the room. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
I was able to dance, and I did it pretty well. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
After the presentation, I had a little conversation with Fanny and felt she more cozy with me and, even, I could say she wanted to talk, but was it a real conclusion? This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
I meant nothing but a partner for her, could I say that she forgot our accident and decided to heal our friendship again? This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
That she wanted more than just a friendship? This sentence has been marked as perfect!
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Fortunately, Noemi, my new partner, supported me, she made me laugh, and was there with me that day. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
More than a normal friend would be, but I don't want to think that she feels something for me, I might be wrong, and I can't deal with another lost friendship. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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