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Blue_crayon

Jan. 5, 2023

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First children

First children of many families are likely to be required to be magnanimous and large-hearted to their younger siblings.
When there's a fight between children, parents tell the first child to yield(?), give way(?), and they tend to stick up for the younger children. "You should give way because you are older." This is the most common sentence that the first children might hear most.
That said, first children are the parents' first love. Parents give their all heart to their first child. I think people have second kids for the first kid. The first kid was so lovable, and they miss the first one's toddler moments, so they might want to have another baby. Or, they might want to make long-lasting friends or company for the first kid. Whatever the reason, the love toward their own kids are huge, and the parents love their children without any disparity.

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First children of many families are likely to be required to be magnanimous and large-hearted to their younger siblings.

I'm a first child.

When there's a fight between children, parents tell the first child to yield(? ), give way(? ), andstop because they tend to stick up for the younger children.

"You should give way because you are older."

This is the most common sentence is one that the first children might hear the most.

That said, first children are the parents' first love.

Parents give all of their all heart to their first child.

I think people have a second kidschild for the first kichild.

The first kid was so lovable, and they parents end up missing the first one's toddler moments, so they might want to have another baby.

Or, they might want to make long-lasting friends or company for the first kid.

Whatever the reason, the love toward their own kids are huge, and the parents love their children without any disparity.

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I agree. Very well done!

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Blue_crayon

Jan. 6, 2023

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Thank you so much. I am a first child too.

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mari

Jan. 6, 2023

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Thank you so much. I am a first child too.

haha, I thought so! I almost wrote, "I'm a first child, too." :)

When there's a fight between children, parents tell the first child to yield(? ), give way(? ),take their side and they tend to stick up for the younger children.

This is the most common sentence that the first children might hear mofirst.

I think people have a second kids for the first kid.

Or, they might want to make long-lasting friends or company for give their first kid someone to play with.

sounds a bit more natural

Whatever the reason, the love toward their own kids areis huge, and the parents love their children without any disparity.

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Blue_crayon

Jan. 6, 2023

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Thanks a lot!

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When there's a fight between children, parents tell the first child to yield(? ), give way(? ),be the bigger person and they tend to stick up for the younger children.

"You should give way because you are older."

This ismight be the most common sentence that the first children might hear most hears.

That said, first children are the parents' first love.

Parents give their all heart to their first child.

I think people have second kids forbecause of the first kid.

The first kid was so lovable, and they miss the first one's toddler moments, so they might want to have another baby.

Or, they might want to make long-lasting friends or company for the first kid.

Whatever the reason, the love toward their own kids are huge, and the parents love their children without any disparityfavouritism.

Disparity isn't wrong per se but I think favouritism might work better in this context.

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Blue_crayon

Jan. 6, 2023

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Thank you so much!!

First-born children

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That said, first-born children are their parents' first love.

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The first kid wasis usually so lovable, and they miss the first one's toddler moments, sothat they might want to have another baby.

Or, they might want their first kid to make long-lasting friends or have company forin the first kidorm of a sibling.

Whatever the reason, their love towards their own kids are hugelimitless, and the parents love their children without any disparity.

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Blue_crayon

Jan. 5, 2023

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Thanks!!!

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I think people have second kids for the first kid.


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I'm a first child.

When there's a fight between children, parents tell the first child to yield(? ), give way(? ), and they tend to stick up for the younger children.


When there's a fight between children, parents tell the first child to yield(? ), give way(? ),be the bigger person and they tend to stick up for the younger children.

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When there's a fight between children, parents tell the first child to yield(? ), give way(? ), andstop because they tend to stick up for the younger children.

"You should give way because you are older."


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This is the most common sentence that the first children might hear most.


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That said, first children are the parents' first love.


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The first kid was so lovable, and they miss the first one's toddler moments, so they might want to have another baby.


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The first kid was so lovable, and they parents end up missing the first one's toddler moments, so they might want to have another baby.

Or, they might want to make long-lasting friends or company for the first kid.


Or, they might want their first kid to make long-lasting friends or have company forin the first kidorm of a sibling.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Or, they might want to make long-lasting friends or company for give their first kid someone to play with.

sounds a bit more natural

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Whatever the reason, the love toward their own kids are huge, and the parents love their children without any disparity.


Whatever the reason, their love towards their own kids are hugelimitless, and the parents love their children without any disparity.

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Disparity isn't wrong per se but I think favouritism might work better in this context.

Whatever the reason, the love toward their own kids areis huge, and the parents love their children without any disparity.

Whatever the reason, the love toward their own kids are huge, and the parents love their children without any disparity.

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