May 13, 2022
As a 55 old man, I do that…
Today when I go to my favor fast food chain to order my favor breakfast.
It is a bowl of porridge plus a bowl of dry noodles and a cup of coffee.
When I send the picture to my friends they think I am having a dinner.
Breakfast is the most important meal of day!
Without waste any food on the table I will eat it all.
For that kind of volume when I was younger it means nothing.
But now I did feel is a little more to take it.
So, today I just eat the porridge and save the noodle for lunch.
Me old man!
As a 55 year old man, I do that/this…
As a 55 year old man, I do that…
Today when I goI'm going to my favorurite fast food chain to order my favorurite breakfast.
It is a bowl of porridge plusand a bowl of dry noodles and, with a cup of coffee.
When I send thea picture of my meal to my friends they think I am having a dinner.
Breakfast is the most important meal of day!
I agree! :)
WithouI won't waste any food on the table - I will eat it all.
For that kind of volumeTo eat that much when I was younger it means nothing.was no problem,
Bbut now I did feel that it is a lbittle more to take itdifficult to eat it all.
Try not to start a sentence with 'But'. You can link the two sentences when that happens.
To eat that much when I was younger was no problem, but now I feel that it is a bit more difficult to eat it all.
So, today I just eate the porridge and saved the noodles for lunch.
Starting a sentence with So is very casual.
MeI'm such an old man!
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Well done :)
Today when I go to my favorurite fast food chain to order my favorurite breakfast.
Favourite (British/Canadian English) Favorite (American English)
Without wasteing any food on the table I will eat it all.
So, today I just eat the porridge and save the noodles for lunch.
MeI am an old man!
Me old man!
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But now I did feel is a little more to take it.
Try not to start a sentence with 'But'. You can link the two sentences when that happens. To eat that much when I was younger was no problem, but now I feel that it is a bit more difficult to eat it all. |
So, today I just eat the porridge and save the noodle for lunch. So, today I just eat the porridge and save the noodles for lunch. So Starting a sentence with So is very casual. |
As a 55 old man, I do that… As a 55 year old man, I do that/this… |
As a 55 old man, I do that… As a 55 year old man, I do that… |
Today when I go to my favor fast food chain to order my favor breakfast. Today when I go to my favo Favourite (British/Canadian English) Favorite (American English) Today |
It is a bowl of porridge plus a bowl of dry noodles and a cup of coffee. It is a bowl of porridge |
When I send the picture to my friends they think I am having a dinner. When I send |
Breakfast is the most important meal of day! Breakfast is the most important meal of day! I agree! :) |
Without waste any food on the table I will eat it all. Without wast
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For that kind of volume when I was younger it means nothing.
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