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alexwong2164

May 13, 2022

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As a 55 old man, I do that…

As a 55 old man, I do that…

Today when I go to my favor fast food chain to order my favor breakfast.

It is a bowl of porridge plus a bowl of dry noodles and a cup of coffee.

When I send the picture to my friends they think I am having a dinner.

Breakfast is the most important meal of day!

Without waste any food on the table I will eat it all.

For that kind of volume when I was younger it means nothing.

But now I did feel is a little more to take it.

So, today I just eat the porridge and save the noodle for lunch.

Me old man!

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As a 55 year old man, I do that/this

As a 55 year old man, I do that…

Today when I goI'm going to my favorurite fast food chain to order my favorurite breakfast.

It is a bowl of porridge plusand a bowl of dry noodles and, with a cup of coffee.

When I send thea picture of my meal to my friends they think I am having a dinner.

Breakfast is the most important meal of day!

I agree! :)

WithouI won't waste any food on the table - I will eat it all.

For that kind of volumeTo eat that much when I was younger it means nothing.was no problem,

Bbut now I did feel that it is a lbittle more to take itdifficult to eat it all.

Try not to start a sentence with 'But'. You can link the two sentences when that happens.

To eat that much when I was younger was no problem, but now I feel that it is a bit more difficult to eat it all.

So, today I just eate the porridge and saved the noodles for lunch.

Starting a sentence with So is very casual.

MeI'm such an old man!

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Well done :)

Today when I go to my favorurite fast food chain to order my favorurite breakfast.

Favourite (British/Canadian English) Favorite (American English)

Without wasteing any food on the table I will eat it all.

So, today I just eat the porridge and save the noodles for lunch.

MeI am an old man!

Me old man!


MeI am an old man!

MeI'm such an old man!

But now I did feel is a little more to take it.


Bbut now I did feel that it is a lbittle more to take itdifficult to eat it all.

Try not to start a sentence with 'But'. You can link the two sentences when that happens. To eat that much when I was younger was no problem, but now I feel that it is a bit more difficult to eat it all.

So, today I just eat the porridge and save the noodle for lunch.


So, today I just eat the porridge and save the noodles for lunch.

So, today I just eate the porridge and saved the noodles for lunch.

Starting a sentence with So is very casual.

As a 55 old man, I do that…


As a 55 year old man, I do that/this

As a 55 old man, I do that…


As a 55 year old man, I do that…

Today when I go to my favor fast food chain to order my favor breakfast.


Today when I go to my favorurite fast food chain to order my favorurite breakfast.

Favourite (British/Canadian English) Favorite (American English)

Today when I goI'm going to my favorurite fast food chain to order my favorurite breakfast.

It is a bowl of porridge plus a bowl of dry noodles and a cup of coffee.


It is a bowl of porridge plusand a bowl of dry noodles and, with a cup of coffee.

When I send the picture to my friends they think I am having a dinner.


When I send thea picture of my meal to my friends they think I am having a dinner.

Breakfast is the most important meal of day!


Breakfast is the most important meal of day!

I agree! :)

Without waste any food on the table I will eat it all.


Without wasteing any food on the table I will eat it all.

WithouI won't waste any food on the table - I will eat it all.

For that kind of volume when I was younger it means nothing.


For that kind of volumeTo eat that much when I was younger it means nothing.was no problem,

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