Jan. 5, 2026
Arrived At My Work City
I just drove from my living city to my work city. It's a 152 km journey, and it takes more than 2 hours. I feel a little tired. Fortunately, I didn't pick up any hitchhikers. Otherwise, I would have felt more tired.
Tomorrow, I have to go back to work again. It's such a drag! When is this never ending work grind gonna stop?
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Feedback on a few words:
I suggest "end" would be better than "stop" because many things stop temporarily (trains, elevators, music, etc.), but I think you mean that you want the grind to be done and not resume, to be over for good.
Also, "gonna" sticks out. It's a casual word like "wanna," and it is often heard in spoken language. It could be used in texting with family and friends, but it seems a little out of place in this piece. The expressions "It's such a drag" and "never ending," which can also be heard often in spoken language, use precise words and are grammatically correct, so they are not out of place. (Just an opinion)
Jan. 6, 2026
Thanks for your meticulous corrections.
Arrived At My Work City
I just drove from my living city to my work cityhome to the city where I work.
Grammatically it is correct, but we don't usually call the city we live in as "living city" nor call the city we work at as "work city".
It's a 152 km journey, and it takes more than 2 hours.
I feel a little tired.
Fortunately, I didn't pick up any hitchhikers.
Otherwise, I would have felt more tired.
Tomorrow, I have to go back to work again.
It's such a drag!
When is this never ending work grind gonna stop?
Jan. 6, 2026
thanks
Arrived At My WorkJob’s City
Work is a verb, job is a noun / adjective.
I just drove from my living city to my workjob(’s city).
Your “living city” is implied when you say my city. You could even just say job as that would be more common in normal conversation .
It's a 152 km journey, and i that takes more than 2 hours.
When is this never ending work grind gonna stop?
I just drove from my living cityhome to my work city.
"Living city" and "Work city" are techinally correct but not natural.
I feel a lbittle tired.
"Little" is completely correct, "bit" is more natural.
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Great work and nice expressions!
Jan. 6, 2026
thanks
I just drove from my living cityhome to my work city.
This sounds more natural.
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Great job!
Jan. 6, 2026
thanks
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I just drove from my living city to my work city. I just drove from my This sounds more natural. I just drove from my Your “living city” is implied when you say my city. You could even just say job as that would be more common in normal conversation . I just drove from "Living city" and "Work city" are techinally correct but not natural. I just drove from my Grammatically it is correct, but we don't usually call the city we live in as "living city" nor call the city we work at as "work city". |
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It's a 152 km journey, and it takes more than 2 hours. It's a 152 km journey This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I feel a little tired. I feel a "Little" is completely correct, "bit" is more natural. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Fortunately, I didn't pick up any hitchhikers. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Otherwise, I would have felt more tired. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Tomorrow, I have to go back to work again. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It's such a drag! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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When is this never ending work grind gonna stop? When is this never ending work grind gonna stop? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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