April 10, 2022
Arranging Photos
There is one event that I have arranged the pictures from Aprils to next Marchs.
With the photos, I create an annual album for my kids.
It started when my first child was born in April 2014, and now I have made 7 albums for my three kids.
Today, I collected photos in my phone and my wife's one.
Almost 10 thousand pictures were in a single folder in my computer now.
It will spend a lot of time to create a new album, however it will be fun.
I hope my kids will be happy with the new album.
There is one event that I have arranged the pictures from Aprils to next Marchs.
I'm not sure about this sentence...
Today, I collected photos ion my phone and my wife's one.
Almost 10 thousand pictures weare in a single folder in my computer now.
If you have the word "now," usually you would be talking in present tense.
It will spendtake a lot of time to create a new album, however it will be fun.
April 11, 2022
Thank you very much.
There is one event that I have arranged withe pictures from Aprils to next Marchs.
Today, I collected photos ion my phone and on my wife's one.
It will spendtake a lot of time to create a new album, h. However, it will be fun.
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Great work!
April 11, 2022
Thank you :)
Arranging Photos
There is one event that I have arranged the pictures for from Aprils to next Marchs.
I don't really understand the sentence
With the photos, I create an annual album for my kids.
It started when my first child was born in April 2014, and now I have made 7 albums for my three kids.
Today, I collected photos in my phofrom mine and my wife's phones.
AThere are almost 10 thousand pictures were in a single folder ion my computer now.
It will spendtake a lot of time to create a newnother album, however it will be fun.
I hope my kids will be happy with the new album.
You could also say "I hope my kids will enjoy the new album"
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Really good writing, it's so cute that you make photo albums :)
April 11, 2022
Thank you very much.:)
April 11, 2022
There is one event that I have arranged the pictures for from Aprils to next Marchs.
I tried to write this sentence.
"I make an album from April until next March every year."
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With the photos, I create an annual album for my kids. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It started when my first child was born in April 2014, and now I have made 7 albums for my three kids. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Today, I collected photos in my phone and my wife's one. Today, I collected photos Today, I collected photos Today, I collected photos |
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Almost 10 thousand pictures were in a single folder in my computer now.
Almost 10 thousand pictures If you have the word "now," usually you would be talking in present tense. |
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It will spend a lot of time to create a new album, however it will be fun. It will It will It will |
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I hope my kids will be happy with the new album. I hope my kids will be happy with the new album. You could also say "I hope my kids will enjoy the new album" |
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