May 2, 2024
Around the Imperial Palace
When I left home before 9 o'clock, it was still cool.
I dared to put on a thin, chic vest under a blue linen jacket. I arrived at Tokyo Station by 10:30. I guessed that it was supposed to be hot during the day. It was pleasant.
I like this well-maintained and quiet area around the Imperial Palace. There were many foreign tourists, probably going to the Imperial Palace.
I sat on a bench for a while, reading my notepad. When I looked up, a blonde woman among a tour group was aiming her smartphone at me. She was wearing sunglasses but I saw her smile at me.
I wondered why she took a photo of me, but I quickly said "Thank you".
She meandered away with others. I wonder if my figure looked good enough for her? No, I must have been quite a sight of foregin land for her.
９時前に家を出る時は、まだひんやりとしていて、青の麻のジャケットの下に薄いシックなベストを身に着けた。
東京駅には１０時半には着いた。日中はきっと暑くなるだろうと思った。心地よかった。ぼくはこの皇居周辺のよく整備され静かな空間が好きだ。外国人観光客も多い。きっと皇居に行くのだろう。ぼくはしばらくベンチに座ってメモ帳を読んでいた。ふと顔を上げると、金髪女性がスマフォーで僕を映していた。サングラスだったけど、にっこり笑みを浮かべてくれた。ぼくなんか映してどうするんだと思ったが、とっさにサンキューと言った。彼女はみんなと一緒に歩いて行った。そんなに僕の姿が様になっていたのかな？いや単なる異国の地の風景の一部だったんだろう。
Around the Imperial Palace
When I left home before 9 o'clock, it was still cool.
I dared to put ontried my luck with a thin, chic vest under a blue linen jacket.
I arrived at Tokyo Station by 10:30.
I guessed that it was supposed to be hot during the day.
It was pleasant.
I like this well-maintained and quiet area around the Imperial Palace.
There were many foreign tourists, probably going to the Imperial Palace.
I sat on a bench for a while, reading my notepad.
When I looked up, a blonde woman among a tour group was aiming her smartphone at me.
I wondered why she took a photo of me, but I quickly said "Thank you".
She meandered away with others.
I wonder if my figure looked good enough for her?
Noah, I must have been quite a sighjust a part of the foregign landscape for her.
May 3, 2024
Thank you for your corrections.
Around the Imperial Palace
When I left home before 9 o'clock, it was still cool.
I dared to put on a thin, chic vest under a blue linen jacket.
I arrived at Tokyo Station by 10:30.
I guessed that it was supposed to be hot during the day.
It was pleasant.
I like this well-maintained and quiet area around the Imperial Palace.
There were many foreign tourists, probably going to the Imperial Palace.
I sat on a bench for a while, reading my notepad.
When I looked up, a blonde woman among a tour group was aiming her smartphone at me.
She was wearing sunglasses but I saw her smile at me.
I wondered why she took a photo of me, but I quickly said "Thank you".
She meandered away with others.
I wonder if my figure looked good enough for her?
No, I must have been quite a sight of foregin land for her.
Around the Imperial Palace
When I left home before 9 o'clock, ithe air was still cool.
I dared tofelt daring, so I put on a thin, chic vest under a blue linen jacket.
I arrived at Tokyo Station by 10:30.
I guessed that it was supposed toassumed it would be hot during the day.
It was pleasant.
I like thise well-maintained and quiet area around the Imperial Palace.
There were many foreign tourists, who were probably goingalso on their way to the Imperial Palace.
Your sentence is correct! I'm trying to suggest more natural ways of saying it.
I sat on a bench for a while, reading my notepad.
When I looked up, a blonde woman amongin a tour group was aiming her smartphone at me.
She was wearing sunglasses, but I saw her smile at me.
I wondered why she took a photo of me, but I quickly said "Thank you"."
She meandered away with others.
I wonder if my figure looked good enough for her?
No, Iit must have been quite a sight of foregin land forbecause it was such a foreign sight to her.
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It's interesting that you said thank you! I would have felt very awkward afterwards, haha!
May 3, 2024
Thank you for your corrections. I thought that she didn't want to do more. I didn't mind if I shook hands with her or hugged her..lol
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