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Are you supersutitious?
When I was young, I used to be superstitious, but as I get older, I've become less superstitious. Since I started to study mathematics and physics, I didn't believe supernatural things. I still like movies like Harry Potter or Star Wars, though.
Are you supersutitious?
When I was young, I used to be superstitious, but as I gethave gotten older, I've become less superstitious.
Since I started to study mathematics and physics, I didn'tstopped believeing in supernatural things.
I still like movies like Harry Potter or Star Wars, though.
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Great job! I'm not superstitious either, but sometimes it's fun to imagine!
Are you supersutitious?
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When I was young, I used to be superstitious, but as I get've gotten older, I've become less superstitious.
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Since I started to studying mathematics and physics, I didn'thave come to stop believeing in supernatural things.
"I didn't believe supernatural things" implies that that is no longer the case, and you do now believe in them. Instead you should say that you "stopped believing in supernatural things" or something similar
I still like movies like Harry Potter or Star Wars, though.
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I don't believe in the supernatural, but I still enjoy fantasy media with supernatural things in it.
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Since I started to study mathematics and physics, I didon't believe in supernatural things. anymore.¶
You are describing yourself now, so you need the present tense.
We use the expression "believe in"
I added "anymore" to link this sentence to the one before and highlight the way you have changed.
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You think of many different topics to write about, and you ask the reader a question that you answer. These two characteristics engage the reader right away. Nice work!
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When I was young, I used to be superstitious, but as I get older, I've become less superstitious. When I was young, I used to be superstitious, but as I More natural way to phrase this When I was young, I used to be superstitious, but as I |
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Since I started to study mathematics and physics, I didn't believe supernatural things. Since I started to study mathematics and physics, I d You are describing yourself now, so you need the present tense. We use the expression "believe in" I added "anymore" to link this sentence to the one before and highlight the way you have changed. Since I started "I didn't believe supernatural things" implies that that is no longer the case, and you do now believe in them. Instead you should say that you "stopped believing in supernatural things" or something similar Since I started to study mathematics and physics, I |
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