Jan. 6, 2023
From the Committed Citizens association we're looking for young people like you to collaborate for improving the wellbeing in our neighborhood.
Are you into sports?
Then you can join one of our mountain hikes to pick up rubbish on the way. Unless you prefer to know how an sport event is organized. In this case you're best option is to be one of our volunteer members that every month organized one popular competition. Did you know about the 5K run the last week? it was all arranged by them.
Maybe you love overcoming stories. We recommend to help in the soup kitchen. Dozens of people with hundreds of amazing life stories going by it every week. You don't need to have special habilities in the kitchen, people serving food are in direct contact with the helped ones.
For sure you're bored of hearing your parents telling that you never help? Take this opportunity :-)
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Good work.
Are you ready to be a key part in our community?
From the Committed Citizens aAssociation we're looking for young people like you to collaborate for improving the wellbeing in our neighborhood.
"Committed Citizens Association" I would assume the three words make up the complete name? so would use a capital for all.
Are you into sports?
Then you can join one of our mountain hikes toand pick up rubbish on the way.
Unless you prefer to know how an sport event is organized.
sport starts with a consonant sound so "a" not "an"
In this case, you'rer best option is to be one of our volunteer members that every monthwho organized one a popular competition each month .
your (possessive) not you're (short for you are). Happens regularly at this moment so "organize" not "organized" which is past tense. probably can say "a" rather than one unless you need to emphasise it is one and not two etc
Did you know about the 5K run the last week?
Not talking about a specific "last week" so don't need the.
iIt was all arranged by them.
Start of a sentence needs capital letter.
Maybe you love overcominspiring stories.
"overcoming" does not work with "stories". You can talk about "overcoming something" as in succeeding despite the something holding you back eg "overcoming an injury" but not about an "overcoming story"
We recommend to helping in the soup kitchen.
"helping" not "to help"
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"going by it" suggests that someone is walking or driving past.
You don't need to have special habilities in the kitchen,. The people serving food are in direct contact with the ones being helped ones.
You cannot say "helped ones". Joining two complete sentences with a comma is not considered good punctuation.
For sure you're boredAre you fed up of hearing your parents telling that you never help?
"For sure" sounds a bit strange at the beginning. "bored" is okay "fed up" suggests you are a bit irritated as well as a bit bored so think is a bit better.
Take this opportunity :-)
Feedback
Very good. Very clear and understandable.
Is this supposed to be a particular type of English? "neighborhood" is US spelling but "rubbish" is a British word usage and Americans would, to the best of my knowledge, say "trash".
Are you ready to be a key part inof our community?
From tThe Committed Citizens association we'reis looking for young people like yourself to collaborate forto improvinge the wellbeing in our neighborhood.
Are you into sports?
Then you can join one of our mountain hikes to pick up rubbish on the way.
Unless you prefer to know how an sports event is organized.
In this case you're best option is to be one of our volunteer members that every month organized one popular competition every month.
Did you know about the 5 K run the last week?
iIt was all arranged by them.
Maybe you love overcoming stories.
¿Qué quieres expresar con 'overcome'?
En realidad significa 'vencer' - no me parece encajar aquí.
We recommend to help in the soup kitchen.
Dozens of people with hundreds of amazing life stories going by itcome by every week.
You don't need to have special habilities in the kitchen, people serving food are in direct contact with theose who are being helped ones.
For sure you're bored of hearing your parents telling you that you never help?
Take this opportunity :-)
Feedback
Un compromiso social admirable.
:)
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From the Committed Citizens association we're looking for young people like you to collaborate for improving the wellbeing in our neighborhood.
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it was all arranged by them.
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For sure you're bored of hearing your parents telling that you never help? For sure you're bored of
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