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Are you punctual?
I am too punctual, and that’s my pros and cons. The other day, I reached station to see my friends one and half hours earlier. I was able to walk around the station, so I totally didn’t care about that. I don’t want to make someone wait for me.
I am too punctual, and that’s myboth a pros and a cons.
Being punctual is one "thing," so wouldn't be spoken of in the plural sense (pros and cons)
The other day, I reachedwent to the train station to smeet my friends one and a half hours earliery.
You need to mention the type of station. It could be a bus, subway, or train station, for example.
"Earlier" is a comparison - earlier to what? "Early" can be used alone
I was able to walk around the station, so I totally didn’t care about that.
I don’t want to make someone wait for me.
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Great job.
I am very punctual, because I get too much anxiety about the possibility of being late. Luckily, my husband is the same as me, so we never argue about the time to leave for something!
yesterday
Thank you so much for your careful corrections.
Every time I look at the corrections, I'm amazed at how many simple words you used. Simple is better after all. I'm relieved to know that there's someone who has the same sense of time as me.
Are you punctual?
I am too punctual, and that’s my pros and consblem.
You could also say: "I'm very punctual, which is good and bad." Since you said you are "too punctual", it's clear you mean it as a negative. "Very punctual" could be positive or negative in meaning.
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"Meet" and "see" are both fine here, but "meet" sounds better. You can emphasize the surprise of your problem with "but". You wanted to meet your friends "but" you were too early!
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Here, you can use "though" to show the contrast. For the last phrase: "so it was no problem" and "so it didn't matter" would also work.
I don’t want to make someone wait for me.
You can also say, "I don't want to make anyone wait for me." The meaning is about the same.
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I'm a pretty punctual person as well. Once, I ran to the airport in the rain in Japan, since you have to arrive early at airports in America. You have to stand in long lines at security and get your luggage checked, after all. However, when I got to the airport, I didn't see my flight on the list. I asked an employee and they chuckled and said I was way too early, so I sat waiting for a long time.
yesterday
Thank you so much for your careful corrections.
Every time I look at the corrections, I'm amazed at how many simple words you used. Simple is better after all. I'm relieved to know that there's someone who has the same sense of time as me.
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I am too punctual, and that’s my pros and cons. I am too punctual, and that’s my pro You could also say: "I'm very punctual, which is good and bad." Since you said you are "too punctual", it's clear you mean it as a negative. "Very punctual" could be positive or negative in meaning. I am too punctual, and that’s Being punctual is one "thing," so wouldn't be spoken of in the plural sense (pros and cons) |
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The other day, I reached station to see my friends one and half hours earlier. The other day, I "Meet" and "see" are both fine here, but "meet" sounds better. You can emphasize the surprise of your problem with "but". You wanted to meet your friends "but" you were too early! The other day, I You need to mention the type of station. It could be a bus, subway, or train station, for example. "Earlier" is a comparison - earlier to what? "Early" can be used alone |
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I was able to walk around the station, so I totally didn’t care about that. I was able to walk around the station, Here, you can use "though" to show the contrast. For the last phrase: "so it was no problem" and "so it didn't matter" would also work. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I don’t want to make someone wait for me. I don’t want to make someone wait for me. You can also say, "I don't want to make anyone wait for me." The meaning is about the same. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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