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I’ve assembled the most of my furniture in my room, and I hooked up my computer, but I’m not good at sewing. I can concentrate on something which is in my interest like oil painting, but I would be lazy in areas where I’m not interested in.
Are you handy? oOr do you have to get someone to fix things?
I’ve assembled the most of my furniture in my room, and I hooked up my computer, but I’m not good at sewing.
most = talking about quantity, amounts
the most = superlative comparison (the most funny -> the funniest, the most pretty -> the prettiest, etc.)
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You can use "things I'm interested in" to explain it more concisely. Similar examples: things I like, things I usually eat, things I think about, things I'm not good at, etc.
And "other areas" is neater to use here because you already introduced the topic (things you're interested in) earlier in the same sentence.
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I'm pretty handy! But I'm short. So sometimes, I still need to get other people to help me.
Are you handy? or do you have to get someone to fix things?
I’ve assembled the most of my furniture in my room, and I hookedset up my computer, but I’m not good at sewing.
You dont need the because it is not one specific furniture since you say most. Hook up does mean to provide electricity to equipment but I dont think it is the best word choice here.
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I understand what you want to say but it is more clear this way and with correct grammar. To be interested in something is a very useful phrase.
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Overall very great. The meaning of the sentences come through, like I understand what you are trying to say. Good job! Keep writing.
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I’ve assembled the most of my furniture in my room, and I hooked up my computer, but I’m not good at sewing. I’ve assembled You dont need the because it is not one specific furniture since you say most. Hook up does mean to provide electricity to equipment but I dont think it is the best word choice here. I’ve assembled most = talking about quantity, amounts the most = superlative comparison (the most funny -> the funniest, the most pretty -> the prettiest, etc.) |
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I can concentrate on something which is in my interest like oil painting, but I would be lazy in areas where I’m not interested in. I can concentrate on something I understand what you want to say but it is more clear this way and with correct grammar. To be interested in something is a very useful phrase. I can concentrate on You can use "things I'm interested in" to explain it more concisely. Similar examples: things I like, things I usually eat, things I think about, things I'm not good at, etc. And "other areas" is neater to use here because you already introduced the topic (things you're interested in) earlier in the same sentence. |
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