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Are you good at painting?
I’m not sure I am good at painting or not, but I really love oil painting. I began to paint aimlessly several years ago, and immediately I was attracted to it. I think the bottom line is not only what I paint but also why I paint. I want you to enjoy it.
Are you good at painting?
I’m not sure I aif I'm good at painting or not, but I really love oil painting.
Instead of "if" you could also use "whether" but that might sound more formal
You can use "I'm" here, like you did at the start of the sentence, to sound less formal
I began to paint aimlessly several years ago, and immediately I was attracted to it.
I think the bottom line is not only what I paint but also why I paint.
I want you to enjoy it.
I think you're saying that you want to enjoy painting, so the "you" here should be removed.
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Whether or not you're good is far less important than whether or not you enjoy it. With time you'll improve, but as long as you enjoy it that's the main thing. I'm sure you're a far better painter than me, but I don't paint because I don't enjoy it
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I’m not sure I am good at painting or not, but I really love oil painting. I’m not sure Instead of "if" you could also use "whether" but that might sound more formal You can use "I'm" here, like you did at the start of the sentence, to sound less formal |
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I began to paint aimlessly several years ago, and immediately I was attracted to it. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I think the bottom line is not only what I paint but also why I paint. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I want you to enjoy it. I want I think you're saying that you want to enjoy painting, so the "you" here should be removed. |
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