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Are you good at networking?

I’m really not good at networking. I tried to be an outgoing person, but that totally didn’t suit myself. Additionally, I’ve been using various SNS and posting about my hobbies, but I don’t have relations with other people on there. I have no idea how I make my new friends.

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Are you good at networking?

I’m really not good at networking.

I tried to be an outgoing person, but that totally didn’t suit myselfe.

Additionally, I’ve been using various SNS and posting about my hobbies, but I don’t have relationships with the other people on there.

To "have relations" between people could be interpreted to as a euphemistic way to mean having sex. It's better to avoid this phrase to avoid being misinterpreted.

"To have a relationship/to have relationships" is what you should use instead.

I have no idea how Ito make many new friends.

OR: "I have no idea how I should make new friends."
OR: "I have no idea how I am going to make new friends."

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Are you good at networking?


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I’m really not good at networking.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I tried to be an outgoing person, but that totally didn’t suit myself.


I tried to be an outgoing person, but that totally didn’t suit myselfe.

Additionally, I’ve been using various SNS and posting about my hobbies, but I don’t have relations with other people on there.


Additionally, I’ve been using various SNS and posting about my hobbies, but I don’t have relationships with the other people on there.

To "have relations" between people could be interpreted to as a euphemistic way to mean having sex. It's better to avoid this phrase to avoid being misinterpreted. "To have a relationship/to have relationships" is what you should use instead.

I have no idea how I make my new friends.


I have no idea how Ito make many new friends.

OR: "I have no idea how I should make new friends." OR: "I have no idea how I am going to make new friends."

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