April 4, 2025
Are we progressing?
These past few days I've been wondering on how the world has changed so quickly and dramatically. It has advanced to an extent where it becomes difficult to believe in the advancements that have been made in recent years. One of the most revolutionizing advancements of which is Artificial intelligence or AI. Who could have thought that some mindless piece of code or algorithm would be able to think independently someday. Nevertheless, after all these advancements my opinion is that the quality of life for an average Joe has not changed much. Poverty has increased and the ones who rule are fighting for their own agendas. I just can't believe it's 21st century and countries are still fighting wars. Media has proved to be a propaganda tower, feeding people with biased information and hiding the truth. We are now more divided than we ever were. I think all of this can only be reversed through education. We should prepare our next generations for a better future. Still, the question is how do we do it?
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These past few days I've been wondering on how the world has changed so quickly and dramatically.
I just can't believe it's the 21st century and countries are still fighting wars.
Still, the question is, how do we do it?
One of the most revolutionizingary advancements of which is Aartificial intelligence or AI.
Who could have thought that some mindless piece of code or algorithm would be able to think independently someday.?
I just can't believe it's the 21st century and countries are still fighting wars.
Media has proved to be ajust propaganda tower, feeding people with biased information and hiding the truth.
We should prepare our next future generations for a better future.
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You spoke eloquently on such a difficult topic! Nice job!
Are we progressing?
These past few days I've been wondering on how the world has changed so quickly and dramatically.
It has advanced to an extent where it becomes difficult to believe in the advancements that have been made in recent years.,
Oone of the most revolutionizing advancements of which is Artificial intelligence or AI.
when using the construction 'of which' you don't have to state the subject again ('advancements,' in this case). One of the purposes of the phrase 'of which' is to avoid repeating the name of the subject 👍
Who could have thought that some mindless piece of code or algorithm would be able to think independently someday.
Nevertheless, after all these advancements, my opinion is that the quality of life for anthe average Joe has not changed much.
For some reason, the saying is always "the average Joe." "A average Joe" is still gramatically correct, but it is not how the phrase is usually said. So, it's not incorrect, but I changed it just so that you are aware of how the phrase is usually said 👍
I just can't believe it's the 21st century and countries are still fighting wars.
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Really good, almost flawless, conversational-sounding English. Nice work!
I, too, wonder if we are progressing. Obviously, technology increases, quality of life improves, but I also question progression and evolution, because I look around and sometimes think that the human race must be devolving (at least where I live). I agree that education is key to equipping the next generations for what lies ahead.
Anyways, you have really nice grammar. But aside from grammar, I also wanted to say, it is a thought-provoking essay 👍
One of the most revolutionizing advancements of which is Artificial intelligence or AI.
I just can't believe it's the 21st century and countries are still fighting wars.
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Excellent work! Your English is great! Keep it up!
Are we progressing?
These past few days I've been wondering on how the world has changed so quickly and dramatically.
It has advanced to anthe extent where itthat it has becomes difficult to believe in the advancements that have been made in recent years.
One of the most revolutionizing advancements of which is Artificial intelligence or AI.
Who could have thought that some mindless piece of code or algorithm would be able to think independently someday.?
Nevertheless, after all these advancements my opinion is that the quality of life for an average Joe has not changed much.
Poverty has increased and the ones who rule are fighting for their own agendas.
I just can't believe it's the 21st century and countries are still fighting wars.
Media has proved to be a propaganda tower, feeding people with biased information and hiding the truth.
We are now more divided than we ever were.
I think all of this can only be reversed through education.
We should prepare our next generations for a better future.
Still, the question is how do we do it?
Feedback
Overall you write well! If you were speaking, this would all feel very natural. However, in writing there were just a few small errors.
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