Are sShanghai People Arrogant? (4)

I have sauntered odown Nanjing Road ( a busy shopping street in Shanghai ) many times.

"To saunter down" is how we use it in the US. We don't use spaces to separate parentheses.

I often saw some people arguing loudly over something,. In most cases, it happened between a salesperson and a customer.

I remember a customer who excomplained loudly to the people loudly around him complained that the sales bully on him, hperson tried to bully him. He had asked the salesperson three times for one product, but the sales left him alone without any excuseperson ignored him for no reason, so he ranted abouto the salesperson.

Try to keep your adverbs and prepositional phrases close to the verbs or nouns they modify.

One day, my colleague led me to a house in an alley where adjacent to a shopping street was adjacent to it.

A crowd of people hasd already filled the room.

This sentence is past tense.

Some fFamous brand watches like Omega, Rolex, Zenith, and other magnificent watches were presented on the sellingales counters.

Since you list the type of watches, there's no need for "some" to modify "watches."

They not only sellold watches, but also some CD-burning software, and fashion bags.

I was not surprised by the products, w. What made me surprised me was that there were many foreigners.

Actually, many of them also want to save money, i. It's difficult to buy cheap and well-made replicas in their own countries.

A real Omega is worth about 10,000 Yuan, but a replica one only costs 300 Yuan (I know in Guangzhou, it only costs 150 Yuan ), so why not?"

Are sShanghai People Arrogant? (4)

One day, my colleague led me to a house in an alley whereich was adjacent to a shopping street.

I was not surprised by the products, w. What made me surprised was that there were many foreigners.

My colleague explained the reason to me,: "Do you think all foreigners are rich?" he asked me.

Actually, many of them also want to save money, i. It's difficult to buy cheap and well-made replicas in their own countries.

A real Omega isworth about 10,000 Yuan, but a replica onewill only cost 300 Yuan (I know in Guangzhou, it only costs 150Yuan ), why not?". How come?

Are shanghai PeoplePeople from Shangai Arrogant? (4)

I have saunteredbeen on Nanjing Road ( a busy shopping street in Shanghai ) many times.

sauntered is not such a popular verb

often I saw some people arguing loudly over something, most cases it happeneds between a sales and a customer.

remember to always mention the person doing the action

I remember a customer who explained to the people loudly around him complained that the salesman bully on him, he had asked for the sales three times forabout one product, but the salesman left him alone without any excuse, so he ranted to the sales manager.

Sales is not a person. If you are talking about the person who makes the sale, it's called salesman.

One day, my colleague led me to a house in an alley wherethat/which is adjacent to a shopping street.

They nodon't only sell watches, but also some CD-burning software, and fashion bags.

A real Omega is worth about 10,000 Yuan, but a replica one only costs 300 Yuan (I know in Guangzhou, only costs 150Yuan ), why not?"

Are shanghai People Apeople in Shanghai arrogant? (4)

I have sauntered along Nanjing Road ( a busy shopping street in Shanghai ) many times.

I often sawee some people arguing loudly over something, most cases happened between a sales andly salespeople with a customer.

Narrative present tense

I remember a customer who excomplained loudly to the people loudly around him complained that the salesperson was bully oning him, and that he had asked the salesperson three times for onea product, but the salesperson left him alone without any excuse, so he ranted to the salesabout this to the manager.

you can also say salesman/saleswoman if you want to specify the gender. Or just employee to be generic. 'Manager' is just a guess, but 'sale' isn't a person :)

One day, my colleague led me to a house in an alley where adjacent to a shopping streetip/mall.

A crowd of people hasd already filled the room.

Some famous brand watches like Omega, Rolex, Zenith, and other magnificent watches were presented oin the selling counterdisplay cabinets.

Of course, they were all replicaknock-offs.

'knock-offs' / 'fakes'. Replica has a more positive connotation

They not only sell watches, but also some CD-burning software, and fashion bags.

I was not surprised by the products, but what made me surprised me was that there were many foreigners.

Actually, many of them also want to save money, it's difficult to buy cheap and well-made replicaknock-off products in their own countries.

A real Omega watch is worth about 10,000 Yuan, but a replicaknock-off one only costs 300 Yuan (I know in Guangzhou, it only costs 150 Yuan ), why not?"