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April 30, 2025

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Are our parents always right?

I don't know if I am a good child or not. I always tried to be one. But now that I am in my 20s, I think all the traits I got from my parents are somehow creating problems for me. I am struggling to blend in with people. I keep all the things to myself and fear sharing something. I can't express myself fully. The comparisons my parents used to make and still make have made me a constantly self-doubtful person. I am always questioning my ability, my talent. Because of this introvert nature originating from self-doubt, I keep losing friends. Then, I always blame myself. But sometimes the behavior of close ones makes me so sad that I don't want to talk to them for fear of getting hurt again. People can be so selfish and mean. But I always blame myself that I am the one who is responsible for not keeping the friendship with them. At some point, this burden becomes too heavy to carry.

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I keep all the things to myself and fear sharing something.

I keep everything to myself in fear of sharing something [ personal / that can come back and hurt me ]

The comparisons my parents used to make and still make have made me a constantly self-doubtful person.

The comparisons my parents used to make (and still make) have made me question everything I do.

Because of this introvert nature originating from self-doubt, I keep losing friends.

Because of this self-doubt-originated introvert nature, I keep losing friends.

But sometimes the behavior of close ones makes me so sad that I don't want to talk to them for fear of getting hurt again.

But sometime the behavior of people close to me makes me so sad, I don’t want to talk to them in fear of getting hurt, again.

But I always blame myself that I am the one who is responsible for not keeping the friendship with them.

I end up always blaming myself for not maintaining our friendship.

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Overall good sentences! And I understand these things! It’s tough! I finally started ‘de-programming’ myself from my parents’ words and actions. Sometimes I still doubt myself and sometimes trying to speak with them is hard, but at the end of the day I still feel more like myself and can live more naturally. Good luck!

Are our parents always right?

I don't know if I am a good child or not.

I always tried to be one.

But now that I am in my 20s, I think all the traits I got from my parents are somehow creating problems for me.

I am struggling to blend in with people.

I keep all the everythings to myself and fear sharing someam afraid to share anything.

I can't express myself fully.

The comparisons my parents used to make and still make have made me a constantly self-doubtful persondoubt myself.

This just sounds less awkward

I am always questioning my ability,ies and my talents.

Because of thismy introvert nature originating, which stems from self-doubt, I keep losing friends.

Then, I always blame myself.

But sometimes the behavior of closemy loved ones makes me so sad that I don't want to talk to them for fear of getting hurt again.

People can be so selfish and mean.

But I always blame myself that I am the one who is responsible for not keepfor not maintaining these friendship with thems.

At somea certain point, this burden becomes too heavy to carry.

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Overall really great writing! Just a few sentences with unnatural phrasing.

Are our parents always right?

I don't know if I am a good child or not.

I have always tried to be one.

But now that I am in my 20s, I think all the traits I got from my parents are somehow creating problems for me.

I am struggling to blend in with people.

I keep all the everythings to myself and fear sharing somethingmy thoughts.

I can't express myself fully.

The comparisons my parents used to make, and still makedo, have made me a constantly self-doubtful person.

I am always questioning my ability, my talent.

Because of this introvertive nature originating from self-doubt, I keep losing friends.

Then, I always blame myself.

But sometimes the behavior of close ones makes me so sad that I don't want to talk to them for fear of getting hurt again.

People can be so selfish and mean.

But I always blame myself, believing that I am the one who is responsible for not keeping the friendship with them.

At some point, this burden becomes too heavy to carry.

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Your text is very well written. I made a few improvements, to make it sound more natural, but it was great as is.

I always tried to be one.


I have always tried to be one.

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Are our parents always right?


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I don't know if I am a good child or not.


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But now that I am in my 20s, I think all the traits I got from my parents are somehow creating problems for me.


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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I am struggling to blend in with people.


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I keep all the things to myself and fear sharing something.


I keep all the everythings to myself and fear sharing somethingmy thoughts.

I keep all the everythings to myself and fear sharing someam afraid to share anything.

I keep all the things to myself and fear sharing something.

I keep everything to myself in fear of sharing something [ personal / that can come back and hurt me ]

I can't express myself fully.


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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

The comparisons my parents used to make and still make have made me a constantly self-doubtful person.


The comparisons my parents used to make, and still makedo, have made me a constantly self-doubtful person.

The comparisons my parents used to make and still make have made me a constantly self-doubtful persondoubt myself.

This just sounds less awkward

The comparisons my parents used to make and still make have made me a constantly self-doubtful person.

The comparisons my parents used to make (and still make) have made me question everything I do.

I am always questioning my ability, my talent.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I am always questioning my ability,ies and my talents.

Because of this introvert nature originating from self-doubt, I keep losing friends.


Because of this introvertive nature originating from self-doubt, I keep losing friends.

Because of thismy introvert nature originating, which stems from self-doubt, I keep losing friends.

Because of this introvert nature originating from self-doubt, I keep losing friends.

Because of this self-doubt-originated introvert nature, I keep losing friends.

Then, I always blame myself.


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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

But sometimes the behavior of close ones makes me so sad that I don't want to talk to them for fear of getting hurt again.


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But sometimes the behavior of closemy loved ones makes me so sad that I don't want to talk to them for fear of getting hurt again.

But sometimes the behavior of close ones makes me so sad that I don't want to talk to them for fear of getting hurt again.

But sometime the behavior of people close to me makes me so sad, I don’t want to talk to them in fear of getting hurt, again.

People can be so selfish and mean.


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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

But I always blame myself that I am the one who is responsible for not keeping the friendship with them.


But I always blame myself, believing that I am the one who is responsible for not keeping the friendship with them.

But I always blame myself that I am the one who is responsible for not keepfor not maintaining these friendship with thems.

But I always blame myself that I am the one who is responsible for not keeping the friendship with them.

I end up always blaming myself for not maintaining our friendship.

At some point, this burden becomes too heavy to carry.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

At somea certain point, this burden becomes too heavy to carry.

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