Aug. 25, 2020
Are fully self-driving cars safe?
These days, many companies are developing self-driving cars that are safe enough to be driven on public roads, and it seems that it will be realized in the near future. I believe that they are safe, and that conventional cars will be replaced by them in few decades.
Self-driving cars do not need drivers. This means accidents caused by drivers' carelessness will be gone. For example, getting sleepy is a common problem with driving. Nevertheless, machines do not have that problem, so there will be less car accidents. Moreover, driving over speed limits is also one of the dangerous things, which can lead to serious car accidents. However, self-driving cars would never break that rule, and it will surely result in the decrease in the number of car accidents.
Are fully self-driving cars safe?
These days, many companies are developing self-driving cars that are safe enough to be driven on public roads, and it seems that ithis vision will be realized in the near future.
In this sentence it is not really clear what "it" is. As a result I've modified it. This is a bit of a nitpicky correction
I believe that they are safe, and that conventional cars will be replaced by them in few decades.
Self-driving cars do not need drivers.
This means accidents caused by drivers' carelessness will be gonestop.
What you have is not incorrect. I wouldn't necessarily use the word gone as you have though.
For example, getting sleepy is a common problem with driving.
Nevertheless, machines do not have that problem, so there will be less car accidents.
Moreover, driving over speed limits is also one of thea dangerous things, which can lead to serious car accidents.
However, self-driving cars would never break that rule, and ithey will surely result in the decrease in the number of car accidents.
note that self driving cars is plural and thus they is used instead of it.
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Honestly your writing is pretty much perfect. If I read this outside this site, I would believe it was a fluent English speaker who wrote it. Most of my corrections are pretty persnickety and I didn't really find much that is genuinely incorrect.
Aug. 28, 2020
Thank you so much!
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Are fully self-driving cars safe? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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These days, many companies are developing self-driving cars that are safe enough to be driven on public roads, and it seems that it will be realized in the near future. These days, many companies are developing self-driving cars that are safe enough to be driven on public roads, and it seems that In this sentence it is not really clear what "it" is. As a result I've modified it. This is a bit of a nitpicky correction |
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I believe that they are safe, and that conventional cars will be replaced by them in few decades. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Self-driving cars do not need drivers. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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This means accidents caused by drivers' carelessness will be gone. This means accidents caused by drivers' carelessness will What you have is not incorrect. I wouldn't necessarily use the word gone as you have though. |
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For example, getting sleepy is a common problem with driving. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Nevertheless, machines do not have that problem, so there will be less car accidents. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Moreover, driving over speed limits is also one of the dangerous things, which can lead to serious car accidents. Moreover, driving over speed limits is also |
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However, self-driving cars would never break that rule, and it will surely result in the decrease in the number of car accidents. However, self-driving cars would never break that rule, and note that self driving cars is plural and thus they is used instead of it. |
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