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What's your earliest memory?

Although my parents brought me many places like zoo or skiing, I mostly don't remember of my childhood memories. I clearly remember the moment me left arm's bone was broken when I was in elementary school. Looking back now, I've had injuries a lot in my life.

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What's your earliest memory?

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What's your earliest memory?

Looking back now, I've had injuries a lot in my life.

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What's your earliest memory?

Looking back now, I've had injuries a lot in my life.

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What's your earliest memory?


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Although my parents brought me many places like zoo or skiing, I mostly don't remember of my childhood memories.


Although my parents brought mehave taken me to many places like the zoo or skiingthe ski slopes, I mostly don't remember of my childhood memories. Although my parents have taken me to many places like the zoo or the ski slopes, I mostly don't remember my childhood memories.

1. "zoo" is a place noun, so for the sake of parallelism, the other thing should be a place noun, too. 2. If the place where you went skiing is solely dedicated to skiing, "ski resort" is the appropriate place. I used "ski slopes" in case it was only one of many facilities.

Although my parents brought me many places like the zoo or skiingthe ski resort, I mostly don't remember of my childhood memories. Although my parents brought me many places like the zoo or the ski resort, I mostly don't remember my childhood memories.

We say "the zoo", not just "zoo". "Skiing" is not a place that you can be brought to, it's an activity. So I changed it to "the ski resort", which better represents the place you were brought to.

Although my parents brought me many places like the zoo or on skiing trips, I mostly don't remember of my childhood memories. Although my parents brought me many places like the zoo or on skiing trips, I mostly don't remember my childhood.

I edited this to "on skiing trips" because "skiing" is not a place, but an activity. "Memories" is not needed here because you already used "remember" in the sentence. You could also say, "I don't have many memories of my childhood."

Although my parents broughthave taken me to many places like the zoo or to go skiing, I mostly don't remember of my childhood memories. Although my parents have taken me to many places like the zoo or to go skiing, I mostly don't remember of my childhood memories.

Brought is understood but taken is more correct. Taken me to the zoon. Taken me to go skiing

Although my parents had brought me to many places like the zoo or mountains for skiing, I mostly don't remember most of my childhood memories. Although my parents had brought me to many places like the zoo or mountains for skiing, I don't remember most of my childhood memories.

Skiing is an activity, and since you are listing places, the place you went to ski should go in the sentence instead of the activity!

I clearly remember the moment me left arm's bone was broken when I was in elementary school.


I clearly remember the moment mey left arm's bone was broken when I was in elementary school. I clearly remember the moment my left arm bone was broken when I was in elementary school.

However, I clearly remember the moment me left arm's bone was broken when I wasI broke my left arm in elementary school. However, I clearly remember the moment I broke my left arm in elementary school.

Because this sentence contradicts what you said in your previous sentence (that you don't remember many childhood memories), it would be good to start it with "However". You would also say "I broke my left arm" instead of the more passive "my left arm's bone was broken".

I clearly remember the moment me left arm's bone was brokenI broke my left arm when I was in elementary school. I clearly remember the moment I broke my left arm when I was in elementary school.

I clearly remember the moment methat the bone in my left arm's bone was broken when I was in elementary school. I clearly remember the moment that the bone in my left arm was broken when I was in elementary school.

I clearly remember the moment mey left arm's bone was broken when I was in elementary school. I clearly remember the moment my left arm's bone broke when I was in elementary school.

Looking back now, I've had injuries a lot in my life.


Looking back now, I've had a lot of injuries a lot in my life. Looking back now, I've had a lot of injuries in my life.

"a lot" is supposed to be modifying "injuries", so it goes first, and is then connected with "of".

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Looking back now, I've had many injuries a lot in my life. Looking back now, I've had many injuries in my life.

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Looking back nowon my past, I've had many injuries a lot in my life. Looking back on my past, I've had many injuries in my life.

"Looking" is in present continuous tense, so it basically tells us that it's happening now!

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