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Two days later, I moved from my friend's home to a dormitory in a six-storey Staff Building without an elevator. There were several other comparatively older and bad-state low-rise buildings nearby, which were called Worker Houses.

There were 6 metal bunk beds in my dormitory. I forget which floor I was living on and how much I paid for it each month. An HR staff ushered me in pointing to a top bunk and saying, "It's your bed, you can take relax and rejuvenate at noon from 12:00 to one o'clock in the afternoon, of course, you can sleep here at night." In fact, I never touched my bed at noon.

I sat by an assembly line, some ornaments like elves, Christmas trees, smashed snow, reindeer, and more others toward to my hands through a motor-driven conveyor. First, I must put them into a crystal sphere which had already piled on my place. Then, put it on the conveyor belt again, some other workers were waiting for it and prepared to do the next process.

The ornaments were so beautiful in my eyes when I first saw them put on the tables; hanging on the walls; piling on the ground. So many various ornaments filled every corner of the workshop. They will go to thousands of families in the world through our hands, making them sing, dance, and sing on the great days by the end of December.

No matter how much I loved these kinds of Christmas accessories before, I looked at them as disgusting after one hour of working by the assembly line.

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My Life in SZ (2)

There were 6 metal bunk beds in my dormitory.

I forget which floor I was living on and how much I paid for it each month.

In fact, I never touched my bed at noon.

So many various ornaments filled every corner of the workshop.

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Two days later, I moved from my friend's home to a dormitory in a six- storey Staff Buildingy employee housing complex without an elevator.

"Story" is how we spell it in the US but other English speaking countries probably spell it "storey."

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My Life in SZ (2)

There were 6 metal bunk beds in my dormitory.

I forget which floor I was living on and how much I paid for it each month.

In fact, I never touched my bed at noon.

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They will pass through our hands and go to thousands of families in the world through our hands,, who will makinge them sing, dance, and sing onfor the great days byholidays through the end of December.

I'm not sure what "on the great days" means, so I translated it to "the holidays" for now.

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Two days later, I moved from my friend's home to a dormitory in a six-storey Staff Building without an elevator.


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"Story" is how we spell it in the US but other English speaking countries probably spell it "storey."

There were several other comparatively older and bad-state low-rise buildings nearby, which were called Worker Houses.


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There were 6 metal bunk beds in my dormitory.


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I forget which floor I was living on and how much I paid for it each month.


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An HR staff ushered me in pointing to a top bunk and saying, "It's your bed, you can take relax and rejuvenate at noon from 12:00 to one o'clock in the afternoon, of course, you can sleep here at night."


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I sat by an assembly line, some ornaments like elves, Christmas trees, smashed snow, reindeer, and more others toward to my hands through a motor-driven conveyor.


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They will go to thousands of families in the world through our hands, making them sing, dance, and sing on the great days by the end of December.


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