Aug. 23, 2021
Aptis exam Part 4 (informal)
Hi here!
How are things going? I'm sorry I didn't write to you before but I've been too bussy.
I have just received and email from the club. In my opinion, the visitors should pay a low fee to access because the club need more money to work. On the other hand, the visitors should have some advantage, for example something to have lunch or funny ativities for children.
Let me know what you think about that.
Love,
Manuel.
Aptis exam Part 4 (informal)
Hi there!
Set phrase.
How are things going?
I'm sorry I didn't write to you before, but I've been too bussy.
I have just received and email from the club.
In my opinion, the visitors should pay at loweast a small fee tofor access because the club needs more money to work.
"the visitors" sounds like we're talking about a specific set of visitors. Like you've been told "50 visitors from China will be coming next week", and you reply "I think the visitors should pay a small fee".
The other change is difficult to explain, but sounds a lot more natural. "to work" is okay, so I haven't changed it, but a native would probably say "to operate" or "to function", maybe "to run" or "to keep running" or "to keep going".
On the other hand, the visitorsy should haveget some advantagething in return, for example something to haveeat for lunch or funny activities for children.
"funny" - things that make you laugh. "fun" - things that you enjoy doing.
Let me know what you think about that.
Love,
Manuel.
Aug. 25, 2021
thank you so much!!!
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Hi here! Hi there! Set phrase. |
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I'm sorry I didn't write to you before but I've been too bussy. I'm sorry I didn't write to you before, but I've been too bus |
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I have just received and email from the club. I have just received an |
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In my opinion, the visitors should pay a low fee to access because the club need more money to work. In my opinion, "the visitors" sounds like we're talking about a specific set of visitors. Like you've been told "50 visitors from China will be coming next week", and you reply "I think the visitors should pay a small fee". The other change is difficult to explain, but sounds a lot more natural. "to work" is okay, so I haven't changed it, but a native would probably say "to operate" or "to function", maybe "to run" or "to keep running" or "to keep going". |
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On the other hand, the visitors should have some advantage, for example something to have lunch or funny ativities for children. On the other hand, the "funny" - things that make you laugh. "fun" - things that you enjoy doing. |
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