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April 15, 2022

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April 15th 2022

a It's cool and comfortable today.
How about you?
b Isn't it a little cold?
a Really?, this much is just right for me.
It's the kind of temperature that I just barely don't miss the blankets.
b You have a point. if it were any colder, I wouldn't be able to get out of bed.
aYeah,that's right.
b But if it gets hotter, you won't need more blankets.
a That's just different. I don't like hot weather.
Do you prefer hot to cold?
b Hot!
a Yeah, I figured.
There are more people who like hot than people who like cold, absolutely.
b Yeah, I think so, but Around me, there are more person who say they like cold.
a You have good friends.
b Yeah, maybe, haha but You can't judge someone good or bad by liking hot or cold.
a I can.
Guys who like hot are bad guys.
Cause Cold areas have less crime.maybe.
I suppose.
sigh... How I wish I lived in country that Is cold all year round.
I am dreading the coming season and really want to escape.



I'd like to know common colloquial phrases! 🙇‍♂️

As a side note,a and b stand for people❗️

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April 15th 2022

a It's cool and comfortable today.

How about you?

b Isn't it a little cold?

a Really?, this much This is just right for me.

It's the kind of temperature that I just barelywhere I almost don't miss the blankets.

b You have a point.

iIf it were any colder, I wouldn't be able to get out of bed.

aYeah,that's right.

b But if it gets hottwarmer, you won't need more blankets.

We go from cool to warm in the US.

a That's just different.

I don't like hot weather.

Do you prefer hot to cold?

b HotYes!

This is how we'd answer in the US.

a Yeah, I figured.

There are more people who like hot than people who like cold, absolutely.

b Yeah, I think so, but Aaround me, there are more person who say they like cold.

a You have good friends.

b Yeah, maybe, haha, but Yyou can't judge someone good or bad by liking hot or cold.

a I can.

Guys who like hot are bad guys.

Cause Ccold areas have less crime., maybe.

I suppose.

sigh... How I wish I lived in a country that Is cold all year round.

I am dreading the coming seasonwarmer weather and really want to escape.

or

I'm dreading summer and really want to escape.

I'd like to know common colloquial phrases! 🙇‍♂️

As a side note,a and b stand for people❗️

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sho

April 17, 2022

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Thank you so much. It was really easy to understand.

aA: It's coolnice and comfortableol today.

Since A and B are names, they should be capitalized. A colon should be used to indicated who is talking, so I'll be adding this to the following sentences as well. Formatted this way, it makes it clear that A and B are people and having a conversation.

How about youWhat do you think?

"How about you" following the previous sentence sounds awkward. If the previous sentence was something like, "I think the weather is..." then using "how about you" as the follow up is fine.

bB: Isn't it a lbittle cold?

aA: Really?, this much is just right for Feels perfect to me.

It's the kind of temperature that I just barely don't miss thejust the right temperature to not need any blankets.

Not positive I understood what you're trying to say correctly given the following contexts.

bB: You do have a point.

Or if you want to go super casual, just "Point" is fine too.

iIf it were any colder, I wouldn't be able to get out of bed.

Need to capitalize the first word in a sentence.

aYeah,that's rightA: True.

bB: But if it gets any hotter, you won't need moreany blankets.

Also not positive I interpreted this correctly.

a That's justA: Well that's different.

Do you prefer it hot tor cold?

bB: Hot!

aA: Yeah, I figured.

There are definitely more people who like it hot than people who like cold, absolutelycold.

bB: Yeah, I think so, but Around me, t too. There are more personople around me who say they like the cold.

aA: You have good friends.

bB: Yeah, maybe, haha but Y. Haha, you can't judge whether someone's good or bad by likingif they like it hot or cold though.

aA: Yes I can.

Guys who like it hot are bad guys.

Cause Ccold areas have less crime., maybe.

I supposeProbably.

sSigh... How I wWish I lived in country that I's cold all year round.

I a'm dreading the upcoming seasonmonths and really want to escaperun away.

As a side note,a A and bB stand for people❗️

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There are some overall issues that are easily fixable, mostly capitalization and the written format for conversations.

You mentioned wanting colloquial phrases, so I tailored a lot of my "corrections" to reflect a more casual tone than what you wrote. Many of the sentences I made edits to are grammatically correct, but they're either not really how two close friends would talk or sounded a bit awkward in conjunction with its previous/following sentence. I've marked those with "Stylistic". Of course, the suggestions I gave are not the only way to phrase things naturally.

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sho

April 16, 2022

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bB: But if it gets any hotter, you won't need moreany blankets.

I wanna say"When the temperature gets warmer, you won't need a blanket."
Do those sentences mean the same thing?

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sho

April 16, 2022

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bB: But if it gets any hotter, you won't need moreany blankets.

I wanna say"When the temperature gets warmer, you won't need a blanket."
Do those sentences mean the same thing?

もっと暑くなればブランケットもいらなくなるじゃん?

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April 16, 2022

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It's the kind of temperature that I just barely don't miss thejust the right temperature to not need any blankets.

I wanna express

I hate temperatures that don't require blankets.=too hot.
I hate temperatures where I miss blanket.=too cold.
I like temperatures where I think I just barely need a blanket.= just right.


私はブランケットが必要じゃない気温が嫌い。それは暑すぎるから
私はブランケットを恋しいと思う気温も嫌い。それは寒すぎるから
私はギリギリブランケットが必要と思える気温が好き。それは丁度いいから
だから私は、
ギリギリブランケットを恋しいと思える気温が好きと表現しました。


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sho

April 16, 2022

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It's the kind of temperature that I just barely don't miss thejust the right temperature to not need any blankets.


I hate temperatures that don't require blankets.=too hot.
I hate temperatures where I miss blanket.=too cold.

I wanna express

I like temperatures where I think I just barely need a blanket.= just right.


私はブランケットが必要じゃない気温が嫌い。それは暑すぎるから
私はブランケットを恋しいと思う気温も嫌い。それは寒すぎるから
私はギリギリブランケットが必要と思える気温が好き。それは丁度いいから
だから私は、
ギリギリブランケットを恋しいと思える気温が好きと表現しました。

April 15th 2022

a It's cool and comfortable today.

How about you's the weather where you are? / How's the weather over there? / How do you feel / What do you think about the weather?

"How about you" is confusing here. If you're asking about the weather, it would be better to use these other phrases.

b Isn't it a little cold?

a Really?, this much is just right for me.

It's the kind of temperature that I just barely don't miss the blankets.

b You have a point.

iIf it were any colder, I wouldn't be able to get out of bed.

a Yeah, that's right.

b But if it gets hotter, you won't need more blankets.

a That's just different.

I don't like hot weather.

Do you prefer hot to cold?

b Hot!

a Yeah, I figured.

There are more people who like hot than people who like cold, absolutely.

b Yeah, I think so, but Aaround me, there are more personople who say they like cold.

Use "people" for the plural of "person". "Person" is not acceptable as a plural form. In some cases, you may encounter "persons", used to specify certain types of people. Other than that, when you say "around me", it feels like you mean physically around you. It may be better to say, "people I know", "more often than not", "most people here"...

a You have good friends.

b Yeah, maybe, haha but Yyou can't judge someone good or bad by likingby whether they prefer hot or cold weather.

In colloquial English, "good" is often used with verbs, but it's preferred to say "well". "I am well", "I play the piano very well", "are you feeling well?" etc... Whereas "well" is an adverb, "good" is an adjective: "your piano playing is good", "I am good" (meaning that I am a good person)... Other than that, to "judge someone" isn't usually used with "good or bad". "You can't judge a book by its cover", "only God can judge you", "I'm not a good judge of character", are some common expressions with "judge".

a I can.

Guys who like hot weather are bad (guys).

Cause Ccold areas have less crime.m Maybe.

I suppose.

sigh... How I wish I lived in a country that Iis cold all year round.

I am dreading the coming season and really want to escape.

I'd like to know common colloquial phrases! 🙇‍♂️

As a side note,a and b stand for people❗️

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Hey! Excellent job. Some colloquial phrases for the weather are:
It's raning cats and dogs. (It's raining a lot)
I'm drenched. (I am very wet)
It's pouring. (It's raining a lot)
It's freezing. (It's really cold)
Other sentences related to the weather:
I am feeling under the weather. (I am not feeling very well)
The calm before the storm. (A calm moment before a big commotion)
My head is in the clouds. (I am distracted or I'm a daydreamer)

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April 15, 2022

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How about you's the weather where you are? / How's the weather over there? / How do you feel / What do you think about the weather?

A and B are in the same place, and A asks B, "What do you think about this temperature?"

I wanna express this situation!

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April 15, 2022

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b Yeah, maybe, haha but Yyou can't judge someone good or bad by likingby whether they prefer hot or cold weather.

Is it possible to make sense without "good or bad" here?

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April 15, 2022

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If you wish to add "good or bad", you might say: "You can't judge someone for being good or bad", which means that they are either a good person or a bad person. So if you add "for", then it makes sense (:

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Aoife

April 15, 2022

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A and B are in the same place, and A asks B, "What do you think about this temperature?" ↑ I wanna express this situation!

Yes, then "What do you think about the weather?" would fit perfectly. We don't usually ask, we just say "the weather is bad" and then the other person replies: "well, it's not too bad" or, "yes, it's terrible weather we're having". The weather is a popular conversation topic in some English-speaking countries (:

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sho

April 15, 2022

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If you wish to add "good or bad", you might say: "You can't judge someone for being good or bad", which means that they are either a good person or a bad person. So if you add "for", then it makes sense (:

"you can't judge someone by whether they prefer hot or cold weather." and "You can't judge someone for being good or bad by whether they prefer hot or cold weather."

Is there any difference between these two meanings?

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sho

April 15, 2022

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Yes, then "What do you think about the weather?" would fit perfectly. We don't usually ask, we just say "the weather is bad" and then the other person replies: "well, it's not too bad" or, "yes, it's terrible weather we're having". The weather is a popular conversation topic in some English-speaking countries (:

Oh, I see!
Thank you!!

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Aoife

April 15, 2022

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"you can't judge someone by whether they prefer hot or cold weather." and "You can't judge someone for being good or bad by whether they prefer hot or cold weather." Is there any difference between these two meanings?

The first one means that you cannot judge them, period. There is no judgement to be made. The second one emphasises that they cannot be judged for being *good* or *bad*. Since the conversation talks about how people are *good* in hot weather and *bad* in cold weather, I would say that the second sentence would fit better.

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April 15, 2022

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The first one means that you cannot judge them, period. There is no judgement to be made. The second one emphasises that they cannot be judged for being *good* or *bad*. Since the conversation talks about how people are *good* in hot weather and *bad* in cold weather, I would say that the second sentence would fit better.

Thank you so much!!
I learned a lot !!!😆

April 15th 2022


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a It's cool and comfortable today.


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aA: It's coolnice and comfortableol today.

Since A and B are names, they should be capitalized. A colon should be used to indicated who is talking, so I'll be adding this to the following sentences as well. Formatted this way, it makes it clear that A and B are people and having a conversation.

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How about you?


How about you's the weather where you are? / How's the weather over there? / How do you feel / What do you think about the weather?

"How about you" is confusing here. If you're asking about the weather, it would be better to use these other phrases.

How about youWhat do you think?

"How about you" following the previous sentence sounds awkward. If the previous sentence was something like, "I think the weather is..." then using "how about you" as the follow up is fine.

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b Isn't it a little cold?


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bB: Isn't it a lbittle cold?

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a Really?, this much is just right for me.


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aA: Really?, this much is just right for Feels perfect to me.

a Really?, this much This is just right for me.

It's the kind of temperature that I just barely don't miss the blankets.


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It's the kind of temperature that I just barely don't miss thejust the right temperature to not need any blankets.

Not positive I understood what you're trying to say correctly given the following contexts.

It's the kind of temperature that I just barelywhere I almost don't miss the blankets.

b You have a point.


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bB: You do have a point.

Or if you want to go super casual, just "Point" is fine too.

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if it were any colder, I wouldn't be able to get out of bed.


iIf it were any colder, I wouldn't be able to get out of bed.

iIf it were any colder, I wouldn't be able to get out of bed.

Need to capitalize the first word in a sentence.

iIf it were any colder, I wouldn't be able to get out of bed.

aYeah,that's right.


a Yeah, that's right.

aYeah,that's rightA: True.

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b But if it gets hotter, you won't need more blankets.


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bB: But if it gets any hotter, you won't need moreany blankets.

Also not positive I interpreted this correctly.

b But if it gets hottwarmer, you won't need more blankets.

We go from cool to warm in the US.

a That's just different.


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a That's justA: Well that's different.

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I don't like hot weather.


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Do you prefer hot to cold?


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Do you prefer it hot tor cold?

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b Hot!


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bB: Hot!

b HotYes!

This is how we'd answer in the US.

a Yeah, I figured.


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aA: Yeah, I figured.

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There are more people who like hot than people who like cold, absolutely.


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There are definitely more people who like it hot than people who like cold, absolutelycold.

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b Yeah, I think so, but Around me, there are more person who say they like cold.


b Yeah, I think so, but Aaround me, there are more personople who say they like cold.

Use "people" for the plural of "person". "Person" is not acceptable as a plural form. In some cases, you may encounter "persons", used to specify certain types of people. Other than that, when you say "around me", it feels like you mean physically around you. It may be better to say, "people I know", "more often than not", "most people here"...

bB: Yeah, I think so, but Around me, t too. There are more personople around me who say they like the cold.

b Yeah, I think so, but Aaround me, there are more person who say they like cold.

a You have good friends.


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aA: You have good friends.

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b Yeah, maybe, haha but You can't judge someone good or bad by liking hot or cold.


b Yeah, maybe, haha but Yyou can't judge someone good or bad by likingby whether they prefer hot or cold weather.

In colloquial English, "good" is often used with verbs, but it's preferred to say "well". "I am well", "I play the piano very well", "are you feeling well?" etc... Whereas "well" is an adverb, "good" is an adjective: "your piano playing is good", "I am good" (meaning that I am a good person)... Other than that, to "judge someone" isn't usually used with "good or bad". "You can't judge a book by its cover", "only God can judge you", "I'm not a good judge of character", are some common expressions with "judge".

bB: Yeah, maybe, haha but Y. Haha, you can't judge whether someone's good or bad by likingif they like it hot or cold though.

b Yeah, maybe, haha, but Yyou can't judge someone good or bad by liking hot or cold.

a I can.


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aA: Yes I can.

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Guys who like hot are bad guys.


Guys who like hot weather are bad (guys).

Guys who like it hot are bad guys.

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Cause Cold areas have less crime.maybe.


Cause Ccold areas have less crime.m Maybe.

Cause Ccold areas have less crime., maybe.

Cause Ccold areas have less crime., maybe.

I suppose.


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I supposeProbably.

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sigh... How I wish I lived in country that Is cold all year round.


sigh... How I wish I lived in a country that Iis cold all year round.

sSigh... How I wWish I lived in country that I's cold all year round.

sigh... How I wish I lived in a country that Is cold all year round.

I am dreading the coming season and really want to escape.


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I a'm dreading the upcoming seasonmonths and really want to escaperun away.

I am dreading the coming seasonwarmer weather and really want to escape.

or I'm dreading summer and really want to escape.

I'd like to know common colloquial phrases! 🙇‍♂️


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As a side note,a and b stand for people❗️


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As a side note,a A and bB stand for people❗️

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