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SummerTeaWater

Feb. 23, 2022

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Apps When Traveling

Thanks to many applications, it is easier to travel abroad now.

I usually use Google translator and Google map.

As you may know, the translation app is very important for convenient communication.

When I went to China, I could only say two sentences, "Ni Hao" and "Xie Xie".

At that time, there was no smart phone, so I couldn't enjoy the travel.


The nice map app is useful during trips as well.

When I went to Warsaw in Poland, I could visit beautiful small trails near the old town.

At that time, the map app helped me go there.


Overall, traveling abroad is easier with useful apps.

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Apps When Traveling

Thanks to many applications, it is easier to travel abroad now.

I usually use Google translator and Google map.

As you may know, the translation app is very important for convenient communication.

When I went to China, I could only say two sentences, "Ni Hao" and "Xie Xie".

At that time, there wasere no smart phones, so I couldn't enjoy the travelip.

The nice map app is nice and useful during trips as well.

When I went to Warsaw in Poland, I could visit beautiful small trails near the old town.

At that time, the map app helped me go there.

Overall, traveling abroad is easier with useful apps.

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Great job! :D

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SummerTeaWater

Feb. 24, 2022

402

Thank you so much.

Apps WhenI Use While Traveling

There is nothing incorrect with your original title! This is just a stylistic change to add more context :)

Thanks to many mobile applications, it is easier to travel abroad now.

I usually use Google tTranslatore and Google mMaps.

As you may know, thea translation app is very important for convenienteasy communication.

When I went to China, I could only say two sentences,phrases: "Nni Hhao" and "Xxie Xxie"."

Just fixed some punctuation choices here.

At that time, there was noI didn't have a smart phone at that time, so I couldn't enjoy the travelip.

The nice map app is useful during trips as well.

When I went to Warsaw in Poland, I couldwanted to visit beautiful small trails near the old town.

At that time, the mGoogle Maps app helped me goguide me there.

Overall, traveling abroad is easier with useful apps.

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잘 쓰셨습니다! 제가 외국에 공부하려고 갔을 때 구글맵 앱이 제 가장 친한 친구 같았어요. ㅋㅋㅋ.

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SummerTeaWater

Feb. 24, 2022

402

너무 고맙습니다!

Apps When Traveling

Thanks to many applications, it is easier to travel abroad now.

I usually use Google translator and Google map.

As you may know, the translation app is very important for convenient communication.

When I went to China, I could only say two sentences, "Ni Hao" and "Xie Xie".

At that time, there was no smart phones, so I couldn't enjoy the travel.

Add s to make it plural meaning many

The nice map app is useful during trips as well.

When I went to Warsaw in Poland, I couldwas able visit beautiful small trails near the old town.

A natural way to say this

At that time, the map app helped me go there.

Overall, traveling abroad is easier with useful apps.

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Good job!! Your English is really good!!!

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SummerTeaWater

Feb. 24, 2022

402

Thank you very much.

Apps When Traveling

Thanks to many applications, it is easier to travel abroad now.

I uUsually, I use Google tTranslatore and Google mMaps.

What you wrote was correct but putting usually first is another way to write it

As you may know, the translation app iss are very important for convenienteasy communication.

When I went to China, I could only say two sentences, "Ni Hao" and "Xie Xie".

At thate time, there was no smart phonesmartphones weren't invented, so I couldn't enjoy the travelling.

You could also write "there were no smartphones at the time"

The (nice) map app is useful during trips as well.

When I went to Warsaw in, Poland, I could visit beautiful small trails near the old town.

At that time, the map app helped me go there.

Overall, traveling abroad is easier with useful apps.

Feedback

A very interesting piece of writing, not many mistakes! well done :)

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SummerTeaWater

Feb. 24, 2022

402

Thank you so much!

Apps When Traveling


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Apps WhenI Use While Traveling

There is nothing incorrect with your original title! This is just a stylistic change to add more context :)

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Thanks to many applications, it is easier to travel abroad now.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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Thanks to many mobile applications, it is easier to travel abroad now.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I usually use Google translator and Google map.


I uUsually, I use Google tTranslatore and Google mMaps.

What you wrote was correct but putting usually first is another way to write it

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I usually use Google tTranslatore and Google mMaps.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

As you may know, the translation app is very important for convenient communication.


As you may know, the translation app iss are very important for convenienteasy communication.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

As you may know, thea translation app is very important for convenienteasy communication.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

When I went to China, I could only say two sentences, "Ni Hao" and "Xie Xie".


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

When I went to China, I could only say two sentences,phrases: "Nni Hhao" and "Xxie Xxie"."

Just fixed some punctuation choices here.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

At that time, there was no smart phone, so I couldn't enjoy the travel.


At thate time, there was no smart phonesmartphones weren't invented, so I couldn't enjoy the travelling.

You could also write "there were no smartphones at the time"

At that time, there was no smart phones, so I couldn't enjoy the travel.

Add s to make it plural meaning many

At that time, there was noI didn't have a smart phone at that time, so I couldn't enjoy the travelip.

At that time, there wasere no smart phones, so I couldn't enjoy the travelip.

The nice map app is useful during trips as well.


The (nice) map app is useful during trips as well.

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The nice map app is useful during trips as well.

The nice map app is nice and useful during trips as well.

When I went to Warsaw in Poland, I could visit beautiful small trails near the old town.


When I went to Warsaw in, Poland, I could visit beautiful small trails near the old town.

When I went to Warsaw in Poland, I couldwas able visit beautiful small trails near the old town.

A natural way to say this

When I went to Warsaw in Poland, I couldwanted to visit beautiful small trails near the old town.

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At that time, the map app helped me go there.


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At that time, the mGoogle Maps app helped me goguide me there.

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Overall, traveling abroad is easier with useful apps.


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