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isaac

April 24, 2023

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Application letter for degree practices (Formal letter)

Dear Mr. White
I am currently attending the last year of the environmental science degree AT the University of Pablo Olavide. Since, I am specially interested in the environmental impact assessment field and your prestigious company, EnvAss, is internationally settled in this area, I would be glad to be part of them during my practices, in order to achieve some initial background experience beyond theory.
Throughout the degree I have been specialising in this area of knowledge by choosing any subject direct or indirectly related to it, so I am highly motivated to follow this professional path. I truly believe in that environmental laws are properly applied in this field, which enable both contruction companies and nature coexist without conflicts.
Your company would be benefited economically from me mainly through three points. Due to I belong to a university and practices are part of a subject, EnvAss would receive a public grant in case I get a position to do my practices. Secondly, as a consequence of what I explained before, part of this grant would be my salary. Last but not least, I am proud to be one of the higher average scores in my promotion. Because of that, I will be granted with an additional scholarship that would contribute to my salary and be part of your revenues for hiring me.
To sum up, passion for the environmental assessment, high scores and two scholarships make me the best candidate to work in EnvAss during one month. I will do my best for your company and I will try to take as much advantage as possible of this learning stage.
Sincerely,
Isaac Hormigo Ávalos


You are a university student and you want to spend a month doing work experience at
an international company. You decide to write a letter to the Recruitment Manager at the
company explaining why you want to do work experience there and saying how the company
would also benefit.

Write your letter.

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I am currently attending the last year of the environmental science degree AT the University of Pablo Olavide.

I am currently in the last year of an environmental science degree at ….

Since, I am specially interested in the environmental impact assessment field and your prestigious company, EnvAss, is internationally settled in this area, I would be glad to be part of them during my practices, in order to achieve some initial background experience beyond theory.

I would be glad to be a part of it …

I truly believe in that environmental laws are properly applied in this field, which enable both contruction companies and nature coexist without conflicts.

I truly believe that

Your company would be benefited economically from me mainly through three points.

I would/could greatly benefit your company, mainly due to the fact that …

Due to I belong to a university and practices are part of a subject, EnvAss would receive a public grant in case I get a position to do my practices.

The fact that I attend university and I must practice as an
essential part of my courses

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isaac

May 9, 2023

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Thank you so much for all your corrections

Application letter for degree practices (Formal letter)


Dear Mr. White


I am currently attending the last year of the environmental science degree AT the University of Pablo Olavide.


I am currently attending the last year of the environmental science degree AT the University of Pablo Olavide.

I am currently in the last year of an environmental science degree at ….

Since, I am specially interested in the environmental impact assessment field and your prestigious company, EnvAss, is internationally settled in this area, I would be glad to be part of them during my practices, in order to achieve some initial background experience beyond theory.


Since, I am specially interested in the environmental impact assessment field and your prestigious company, EnvAss, is internationally settled in this area, I would be glad to be part of them during my practices, in order to achieve some initial background experience beyond theory.

I would be glad to be a part of it …

Throughout the degree I have been specialising in this area of knowledge by choosing any subject direct or indirectly related to it, so I am highly motivated to follow this professional path.


I truly believe in that environmental laws are properly applied in this field, which enable both contruction companies and nature coexist without conflicts.


I truly believe in that environmental laws are properly applied in this field, which enable both contruction companies and nature coexist without conflicts.

I truly believe that

Your company would be benefited economically from me mainly through three points.


Your company would be benefited economically from me mainly through three points.

I would/could greatly benefit your company, mainly due to the fact that …

Due to I belong to a university and practices are part of a subject, EnvAss would receive a public grant in case I get a position to do my practices.


Due to I belong to a university and practices are part of a subject, EnvAss would receive a public grant in case I get a position to do my practices.

The fact that I attend university and I must practice as an essential part of my courses

Secondly, as a consequence of what I explained before, part of this grant would be my salary.


Last but not least, I am proud to be one of the higher average scores in my promotion.


Because of that, I will be granted with an additional scholarship that would contribute to my salary and be part of your revenues for hiring me.


To sum up, passion for the environmental assessment, high scores and two scholarships make me the best candidate to work in EnvAss during one month.


I will do my best for your company and I will try to take as much advantage as possible of this learning stage.


Sincerely,


Isaac Hormigo Ávalos


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