Aug. 10, 2020
I'm a graphic designer and I'd like to sell my designs on Merch by Amazon.
This is my application letter.
Could you check it and tell me, please, is it any good or not?
Hi, there
I'm an artist and a graphic designer. I've been creating and selling my designs through the Internet for several years now. My designs are created by using inspiration, imagination and of course special software.
Studying and understanding the importance of trends, niches, promotions, targeting and many other elements of successful online sales are helping me too.
That's why I think that designs should attract not only consumers' attention but also a desire to buy them.
Many of my works are already profitable on some Print On Demand platforms such as Teepublic, Redbubble, Zazzle.
I have a strong desire to apply for Merch by Amazon because I believe that combination of my experience and the one of the best performing company in the world could be profitable for both sides.
Application letter
I'm a graphic designer and I'd like to sell my designs on Merch by Amazon.
This is my application letter.
Could you check it and tell me, please, isf it is any good or not?
I would also suggest moving the location where you have please in this sentence. It sounds slightly awkward. For example:
Could you please check it and tell me if it is any good or not?
or:
Could you check it and tell me if it is any good or not please?
Hi,ello there.
Hi is a bit informal. There is no need for a comma here.
I'm an artist and a graphic designer.
I've been creating and selling my designs through the Iinternet for several years now.
My designs are created by using inspiration, imagination and of course special software.
Studying and understanding the importance of trends, niches, promotions, targeting and many other elements of successful online sales are helping me too.
That'is is why I think that designs should attract not only consumers' attention but also atheir desire to buy them.
Many of my works are already profitable on some Print On Demand platforms such as Teepublic, Redbubble, and Zazzle.
I have a strong desire to apply for Merch by Amazon because I believe that the combination of my experience and the one of the best performing companyies in the world could be profitable for both sides.
I'm a graphic designer and I'd like to sell my designs on Merch by Amazon.
This is my application letter.
Could you check it and tell me, please, isf it is any good or not?
Hi, there.
I'm an artist and a graphic designer.
I've been creating and selling my designs through the Internet for several years now.
My designs are created by using inspiration, imagination and of course special software.
Studying and understanding the importance of trends, niches, promotions, targeting and many other elements of successful online sales are helping me too.
That's why I think that designs should attract not only consumers' attention but also a desire to buy them.
Many of my works are already profitable on some Print On Demand platforms such as Teepublic, Redbubble, and Zazzle.
Always end a serial list like this with a conjunction like "and" or "or".
I have a strong desire to apply for Merch by Amazon because I believe that the combination of my experience and the one of the best performing companyies in the world could be profitable for both sides.
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This is good with a few minor corrections. Good luck!
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I've been creating and selling my designs through the Internet for several years now. This sentence has been marked as perfect! I've been creating and selling my designs through the |
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My designs are created by using inspiration, imagination and of course special software. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Studying and understanding the importance of trends, niches, promotions, targeting and many other elements of successful online sales are helping me too. This sentence has been marked as perfect! Studying and understanding the importance of trends, niches, promotions, targeting and many other elements of successful online sales |
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That's why I think that designs should attract not only consumers' attention but also a desire to buy them. This sentence has been marked as perfect! Th |
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