June 13, 2025
My second text: Shopping
Now, I have to go out with my mother. She needs my help with the shops. We will to take a bus from our house to the stores. We will to buy meal (coffee, flour, butter, rice, etc). It's ten and two quarters from the morning. And after the shopping. We start to cook for all of the family. That's will are to twelve o'clock or one o'clock of the afternoon.
Ahora, yo debo salir con mi madre. Ella necesita mi ayuda con las compras. Nosotros tomaremos un autobús desde nuestra casa hasta las tiendas. Nosotros compraremos comida (café, harina, mantequilla, arroz, etc). Son las diez y dos cuartos de la mañana. Y después de ir de compras. Nosotros empezaremos a cocinar para toda la familia. Eso será a las doce o a las una de la tarde.
My sSecond texPost: Shopping
My Second Post: Shopping
Now, I have to go out with my mother.
Now I have to go out with my mother.
She needs my help withat the shopstore.
She needs my help at the store.
We will to take a bus from our house to the stores.
We will take a bus from our house to the stores.
We will to buy meal (items for meals, such as coffee, flour, butter, rice, etc).
We will buy items for meals, such as coffee, flour, butter, rice, etc.
It's ten and two quarters from the morning10:30 A.M..
It's 10:30 A.M..
And after the shopping, we will cook for our entire family.
And after shopping, we will cook for our entire family.
We start to cook for all of the family. We start to cook for all of the family.
Remove this sentence and combine with the previous.
That's will are to twelve o'clock or one o'clock of the afternoontake us until around noon or 1 pm.
That will take us until around noon or 1 pm.
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My second text: Shopping
Now, I have to go out with my mother.
She needs my help with the shopsshopping.
She needs my help with shopping.
Remove the and change shops to shopping because it's an ongoing activity.
We will to take a bus from our house to the stores.
We will to buy mealgroceries (coffee, flour, butter, rice, etc).
We will buy groceries (coffee, flour, butter, rice, etc).
You could also say, "We will buy ingredients (coffee, flour, butter, rice, etc)."
It's ten and two quarters fromin the morning.
It's ten and two quarters in the morning.
You could also say "It's ten thirty (10:30) in the morning" to be more natural.
And after the shopping.,
And after shopping,
Don't use the before an -ing verb. Connect this sentence with the next sentence, as this is a dependent clause, and the next sentence is an independent clause. You can also remove the "and" to make this sentence instead: "After shopping, we start to cook for the whole family."
Wwe start to cook for all of the family.
we start to cook for all of the family.
Connected from the previous sentence. You could also say "we start to cook for the whole family" to sound more natural.
That'sen it will are tobe twelve o'clock or one o'clock ofin the afternoon.
Then it will be twelve o'clock or one o'clock in the afternoon.
Now, I have to go out with my mother.
She needs my help with the shopsping.
She needs my help with the shopping.
We will to take a bus from our house to the stores.
We will take a bus from our house to the stores.
We will to buy mealgroceries (coffee, flour, butter, rice, etc).
We will buy groceries (coffee, flour, butter, rice, etc).
A "meal" is something bigger that is ready to eat, like something you would have for lunch or dinner.
It's ten and two quarters fromthirty in the morning.
It's ten thirty in the morning.
Since you have just been talking about the future, it might sound more natural if you add some time-related adverb. For example, "It's currently ten thirty in the morning."
And after the shopping.,
After the shopping,
This isn't a sentence by itself.
Wewe'll start to cook for all of ththe whole family.
we'll start to cook for the whole family.
That's will are tobe around twelve o'clock or one o'clock ofin the afternoon.
That will be around twelve o'clock or one o'clock in the afternoon.
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We start to cook for all of the family.
Connected from the previous sentence. You could also say "we start to cook for the whole family" to sound more natural. We start to cook for all of the family. We start to cook for all of the family. Remove this sentence and combine with the previous. |
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She needs my help with the shops.
She needs my help with the shop
She needs my help with Remove the and change shops to shopping because it's an ongoing activity.
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We will to take a bus from our house to the stores.
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We will to buy meal (coffee, flour, butter, rice, etc).
We will A "meal" is something bigger that is ready to eat, like something you would have for lunch or dinner.
We will You could also say, "We will buy ingredients (coffee, flour, butter, rice, etc)."
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It's ten and two quarters from the morning.
It's ten Since you have just been talking about the future, it might sound more natural if you add some time-related adverb. For example, "It's currently ten thirty in the morning."
It's ten and two quarters You could also say "It's ten thirty (10:30) in the morning" to be more natural.
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And after the shopping.
A This isn't a sentence by itself.
And after Don't use the before an -ing verb. Connect this sentence with the next sentence, as this is a dependent clause, and the next sentence is an independent clause. You can also remove the "and" to make this sentence instead: "After shopping, we start to cook for the whole family."
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That's will are to twelve o'clock or one o'clock of the afternoon.
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