July 19, 2025
Antisocial Lifestyle
I don't like shopping at all. If I need something, I go to the nearest store where I can buy it and go home. It's targeted shopping. Although I'm a bit antisocial I prefer shopping in person because it's easier and simplier than online. Why? Because if I go to the store and buy a... TV for example, then that's mine. I bring it home and the job is done. But if I order something today, I have to wait for several emails and the courier of course, who is completely unpredictable. Maybe he/she calls me before the delivery, maybe not. Maybe he/she'll come when he/she promised, maybe he/she won't. And the package itself... maybe comes in one piece, maybe not. Maybe the ordered thing works fine, maybe not. Sometimes I order some stuff, though. Especially if I can't buy something in person.
AntisocialLiving an Asocial/Introverted Lifestyle
There are differences with antisocial vs. asocial:
https://www.verywellmind.com/asocial-vs-antisocial-differences-7555163
https://www.mentalhealth.com/library/asocial-vs-antisocial-difference
If you resonate with being an introvert, I recommend reading more here: https://www.webmd.com/balance/introvert-personality-overview
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If I need something, I go to the nearest store where I can buy it and go home.
It's targeted shopping.
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Why?
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Maybe he/sSometimes, they calls me before the delivery, maybe noand sometimes they don't.
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And tThe package itself... maybe comes in one piece, maybe not or in several pieces.
Maybe the thing I've ordered thing works fine, maybe not. Possibly, it doesn't work at all.
Sometimes I order some stuff online, though, especially if I can't buy it in person.
Especially if I can't buy something in person.
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You've written an interesting text. I focused on making your text more concise and using more accurate vocabulary. Although it's common to mix up words like antisocial and asocial, there are differences between them. Antisocial usually refers to people with Antisocial Personality Disorder, which you can read more about here: https://www.healthline.com/health/mental-health/asocial-vs-antisocial-vs-introverted
July 20, 2025
Thank you :)
July 20, 2025
You're welcome.
Antisocial Lifestyle
I don't like shopping at all.
If I need something, I go to the nearest store where I can buy it and go home.
It's targeted shopping.
AlEven though I'm a bit antisocial, I prefer shopping in person because it's easier and simplier than online.
Why?
Because if I go to the store and buy a... TV, for example, then that's mine.
I bring it home and the job is done.
But if I order something today, I have to wait for several emails and the courier of course, who is completely unpredictable.
Maybe he/sthey calls me before the delivery, maybe not.
Maybe he/sthey'll come when he/sheas promised, maybe he/she won'not.
And for the package itself... maybe, hopefully it comes in one piece, maybe I don't knotw.
Maybe the ordered thing works fine, maybe not.
Sometimes I order some stuff, online though.
Especially if I can't buy something in person.
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July 20, 2025
Thank you. :)
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