May 17, 2022
Answer to an Email
Dear John
Honestly, I suffered from depression for some time during my undergraduate studies. This was the main reason for my low scores. Due to depression, I could not participate in classes and was mostly absent in some of my theoretical classes. Participation in class and being present in class were major factors in giving students a good score. I mostly studied the material of those classes on my own.
Regarding the article, unfortunately, there is a bad tradition among Iranian professors that they tend to put their names before their students in published articles. This is an implicit rule, but it has exceptions, too. If you check out articles published by Professor Moghadam, you can see this fact. In the lab I worked, supervisors (Ph.D. students who supervised M.S students) put their names before M.S students. That is why my name is in third place. The structure of that project was defined by me and the Ph.D. student. However, all of the experimental works are almost carried out by me. I say “almost” because the analysis of the results was done by both of us. The manuscript of the article was written by Mr. Eslami, Ph.D. Student.
In the second article which was a catalyst project, I talked with my supervisor and convinced him to put my name in the second place. My role in this project is similar to my first project. The only difference was that I conducted the whole study without other authors participating in the experimental work and I also wrote the manuscript. The publication of this article has been delayed for some reason. One of them is because Professor Moghadam is retiring from teaching.
Best wishes,
Ali
Answer to an Email
Dear John
Honestly, I suffered from depression for some time during my undergraduate studies.
This was the main reason for my low scores.
Due to depression, I could not participate in classes and was mostly absent infrom some of my theoretical classes.
Participation in class and being present in class were major factors in givingfor students getting a good score.
I mostly studied the material of those classes on my own.
Regarding the article, unfortunately, there is a bad tradition among Iranian professors that they tend to put their names before their students in published articles.
This is an implicit rule, but it has exceptions, too.
If you check out articles published by Professor Moghadam, you can see this fact.
In the lab where I worked, supervisors (Ph.D. students who supervised M.S students) put their names before M.S students.
That is why my name is in third place.
The structure of that project was defined by me and the Ph.D. student and me.
However, almost all of the experimental works are almostwere carried out by me.
I say “almost” because the analysis of the results was done by both of us.
The manuscript of the article was written by Mr. Eslami, a Ph.D. Student.
It could be "the PhD student" if he was the exact one you were working with
In the second article which was a catalyst project, I talked with my supervisor and convinced him to put my name in the second place.
My role in this project is similar to my first project.
The only difference was that I conducted the whole study without other authors participating in the experimental work and I also wrote the manuscript.
The publication of this article has been delayed for some reason.
One of them is because Professor Moghadam is retiring from teaching.
Best wishes,
Ali
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May 17, 2022
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Due to depression, I could not participate in classes and was mostly absent in some of my theoretical classes. Due to depression, I could not participate in classes and was mostly absent |
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I mostly studied the material of those classes on my own. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Regarding the article, unfortunately, there is a bad tradition among Iranian professors that they tend to put their names before their students in published articles. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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This is a rule, but it has exceptions, too. |
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If you check out articles published by Professor Moghadam, you can see this fact. If you check out articles published by Professor Moghadam, you can see this |
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In the lab I worked, supervisors (Ph.D. students who supervised M.S students) put their names before M.S students. In the lab where I worked, supervisors (Ph.D. students who supervised M.S students) put their names before M.S students. |
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That is why my name is in third place. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The structure of that project was defined by me and the Ph.D. student. The structure of that project was defined by |
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However, all of the experimental works are almost carried out by me. However, almost all of the experimental works |
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In the second article which was a catalyst project, I talked with my supervisor and convinced him to put my name in the second place. In the second article which was a catalyst project, I talked with my supervisor and convinced him to put my name in |
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My role in this project is similar to my first project. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I say “almost” because the analysis of the results was done by both of us. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The manuscript of the article was written by Mr. Eslami, Ph.D. Student. The manuscript of the article was written by Mr. Eslami, a Ph.D. Student. It could be "the PhD student" if he was the exact one you were working with |
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The only difference was that I conducted the whole study without other authors participating in the experimental work and I also wrote the manuscript. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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This is an implicit rule, but it has exceptions, too. This is an implicit rule, but it has exceptions |
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