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Key to create a schedule
I'm used to using obsidian for notes and it's superior.
After couple of videos with instructions of using, I fall in love with this tool.
Give me a minute to tell about something. I had a big problem with my plans, because I very fast forgot about them. And what is the most important thing, I didn't understand when I should exiting, and I didn't understand when I made my goal.
You say: "You don't set goals correctly!"
I answer: "Yes, and I didn't know it"
But in Obsidian, I started use Graphs, unfortunately I couldn't attach screenshots in this note. I don't understand why.
https://yapx.ru/image/cZHHd
Do you see the the tangle in the middle of screenshots? It's all my daily notes for 2025, and all of lists of tasks in these notes have a criteria of goal.
Do you understand it? Whenever you set the goal, you should think about the criteria of reach this goal.
For example: "Large goal: I wanna lern English"
Criteria of reach the goal: "B2 level in 6 months"
Look at this, I set the goal, criteria and deadline.
After that we should to split this goal to little tasks
"Goals: Writing, Speaking, Grammar, Vocabulary and Listening"
After that we don't forget about criterias:
* * *
├ Large goal: I wanna lern English
└ Criteria of reach the goal: B2 level in 6 months
├ Goal- 1: Writing
└Criteria of goal 1: Can calmly write 10-15 sentences without translator after moth of practise!!
├ Another goal: ...
***
After that my life is changed, and every day I close tasks, open tasks and happy because with this planing system I already handle with a lot of difficulties.
But, while I writing this text, I thought about how can I see my year statistics like in Steam? Maybe I should create my own, if it doesn;t exist?

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Another tMore Thoughts

"Another" can't be used with a plural noun, "another" signifies that there is only ONE, aka "one other"

The Key to cCreateing a sSchedule:

I guess this could be a sub-title/sub-header

I'm used to using oObsidian for notes and it's superior.

After watching a couple of videos with instructions of usingon how to use it, I faell in love with this tool.

Give me a minute to tellalk about something.

I had a big problem with sticking to my plans, because I very fastquickly forgot about them.

It's not wrong but specifying what about the plans was a problem (making them, sticking to them, etc) sounds more natural

And what is the most important thing was, I didn't understand when I should exiting, and I didn't understand when I madequit or at what point I had completed my goal.

No need to list "didn't understand" twice
"when I had completed my goal" is also fine, I think "at what point" better shows that some criteria is being met

YIf you sayid: "You don't set goals correctly!"

Since it's a hypothetical situation/conversation, you should include something that indicates that

I'd answer: "Yes, and I didn't know itrealize it until now."

Original isn't technically wrong but this sounds more natural

But in Obsidian, I started to use Graphs, - unfortunately I couldn't attach screenshots in this note.

I don't understand why.

Do you see the the tangle in the middle of the screenshots?

It's only one screenshot

It'sThose are all my daily notes for 2025, and all of the lists of tasks in these notes have a criteria of goalcompletion.

matching the plural of "notes"
"They are all my daily notes" is ok, "those are/these are" is better because you're pointing out something specific in the image

Do you understand it?

Whenever you set the goal, you should think about the criteria tof reach this goal.

"Large goal: I wanna learn English"

Criteria tof reach the goal: "B2 level in 6 months"

Look at this,at - I set the goal, criteria and deadline.

After that we should to split this goal into little tasks.

After that we don'Let's not forget about criterias for these either:

Using "After that" here makes it sound like splitting the goal resulted in us being unable to forget about criteria
The plural word for "criteria" is also "criteria"

I wanna learn English

└ Criteria tof reach the goal: B2 level in 6 months

└Criteria of gfor Goal 1:

Can calmly write 10-15 sentences without a translator after a month of practisce!!

After thatusing this app my life is changed, and e. Every day I close tasks, open tasks and happyfeel satisfied because with this planning system I have already handle withd a lot of difficulties.

After what? If you don't specify, it sounds like you're saying "after what we did in that example just now"
"Happy" doesn't feel like the right word here, but if you want to use it you can say "am/feel happy"

But, while I writing this text, I thought about howwhether I can I see my yearly statistics like in Steam?

Maybe I should create my own, if it doesn;'t exist?

Feedback

Happy for you, but this sounds way too organized for the likes of me xD
I've heard Obsidian is similar to Notion (which I use for fictional world-building writing/organization) and if it is I bet you could make that yearly statistic function in the app itself.

Another thoughts


Another tMore Thoughts

"Another" can't be used with a plural noun, "another" signifies that there is only ONE, aka "one other"

Key to create a schedule


The Key to cCreateing a sSchedule:

I guess this could be a sub-title/sub-header

I'm used to using obsidian for notes and it's superior.


I'm used to using oObsidian for notes and it's superior.

After couple of videos with instructions of using, I fall in love with this tool.


After watching a couple of videos with instructions of usingon how to use it, I faell in love with this tool.

Give me a minute to tell about something.


Give me a minute to tellalk about something.

I had a big problem with my plans, because I very fast forgot about them.


I had a big problem with sticking to my plans, because I very fastquickly forgot about them.

It's not wrong but specifying what about the plans was a problem (making them, sticking to them, etc) sounds more natural

And what is the most important thing, I didn't understand when I should exiting, and I didn't understand when I made my goal.


And what is the most important thing was, I didn't understand when I should exiting, and I didn't understand when I madequit or at what point I had completed my goal.

No need to list "didn't understand" twice "when I had completed my goal" is also fine, I think "at what point" better shows that some criteria is being met

You say: "You don't set goals correctly!"


YIf you sayid: "You don't set goals correctly!"

Since it's a hypothetical situation/conversation, you should include something that indicates that

I answer: "Yes, and I didn't know it"


I'd answer: "Yes, and I didn't know itrealize it until now."

Original isn't technically wrong but this sounds more natural

But in Obsidian, I started use Graphs, unfortunately I couldn't attach screenshots in this note.


But in Obsidian, I started to use Graphs, - unfortunately I couldn't attach screenshots in this note.

I don't understand why.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

https://yapx.ru/image/cZHHd


Do you see the the tangle in the middle of screenshots?


Do you see the the tangle in the middle of the screenshots?

It's only one screenshot

It's all my daily notes for 2025, and all of lists of tasks in these notes have a criteria of goal.


It'sThose are all my daily notes for 2025, and all of the lists of tasks in these notes have a criteria of goalcompletion.

matching the plural of "notes" "They are all my daily notes" is ok, "those are/these are" is better because you're pointing out something specific in the image

Do you understand it?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Whenever you set the goal, you should think about the criteria of reach this goal.


Whenever you set the goal, you should think about the criteria tof reach this goal.

For example:


"Large goal: I wanna lern English"


"Large goal: I wanna learn English"

Criteria of reach the goal: "B2 level in 6 months"


Criteria tof reach the goal: "B2 level in 6 months"

Look at this, I set the goal, criteria and deadline.


Look at this,at - I set the goal, criteria and deadline.

After that we should to split this goal to little tasks


After that we should to split this goal into little tasks.

"Goals: Writing, Speaking, Grammar, Vocabulary and Listening"


After that we don't forget about criterias:


After that we don'Let's not forget about criterias for these either:

Using "After that" here makes it sound like splitting the goal resulted in us being unable to forget about criteria The plural word for "criteria" is also "criteria"

* * *


├ Large goal:


I wanna lern English


I wanna learn English

└ Criteria of reach the goal: B2 level in 6 months


└ Criteria tof reach the goal: B2 level in 6 months

├ Goal- 1: Writing


└Criteria of goal 1:


└Criteria of gfor Goal 1:

Can calmly write 10-15 sentences without translator after moth of practise!!


Can calmly write 10-15 sentences without a translator after a month of practisce!!

├ Another goal: ...


***


After that my life is changed, and every day I close tasks, open tasks and happy because with this planing system I already handle with a lot of difficulties.


After thatusing this app my life is changed, and e. Every day I close tasks, open tasks and happyfeel satisfied because with this planning system I have already handle withd a lot of difficulties.

After what? If you don't specify, it sounds like you're saying "after what we did in that example just now" "Happy" doesn't feel like the right word here, but if you want to use it you can say "am/feel happy"

But, while I writing this text, I thought about how can I see my year statistics like in Steam?


But, while I writing this text, I thought about howwhether I can I see my yearly statistics like in Steam?

Maybe I should create my own, if it doesn;t exist?


Maybe I should create my own, if it doesn;'t exist?

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