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Tammy

March 17, 2024

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Another Hiking

I went to hike again yesterday.

The location was in Jiangsu Province, and it took us two and a half hours to get there.

The scenery was not as beautiful as the one we had seen last Saturday, but I still found some beautiful flowers whose beauties I couldn't have taken with my iPhone.

After all, Spring is coming. There's no ugly scenery in Eastern China in springtime.

You can find the video here: https://youtu.be/bapsOl12Gz0
and pictures here: https://twitter.com/myplain_


又一次的徒步

昨天又去徒步啦。

地点在江苏省,我们花了两个半小时开到那里。

虽然风景不及上周六的美,但我依然看到了许多美丽的花儿,然而我的苹果相机并未能捕捉到他们的美。

毕竟,春天来了。华东的春天里没有难看的风景啊。

你可以在这里看我拍的视频 https://youtu.be/bapsOl12Gz0 ,这里看照片https://twitter.com/myplain_

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Another Hikinge

I went to hikehiking again yesterday.

The location was in Jiangsu Province, and it took us two and a half hours to get there.

The scenery was not as beautiful as the one we had seen last Saturday, but I still found some beautiful flowers, whose beauties I couldn't have taken with my iPhone.

After all, Spring is coming.

There's no ugly scenery in Eastern China in springtime.

You can find the video here: https://youtu.be/bapsOl12Gz0 and pictures here: https://twitter.com/myplain_

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Tammy

March 19, 2024

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Thank you so much!

Another Hiking

I went to hike again yesterday.

The location was in Jiangsu Province, and it took us two and a half hours to get there.

The scenery was not as beautiful as the one we had seen last Saturday, but I still found some beautiful flowers whoseith beauties that I couldn't have takencaptured with my iPhone.

After all, Spring is coming.

There's no ugly scenery in Eastern China in springtime.

You can find the video here: https://youtu.be/bapsOl12Gz0 and pictures here: https://twitter.com/myplain_

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Tammy

March 18, 2024

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Thank you for your correction!

Another Hikinge

I went to hikehiking again yesterday.

The location was in Jiangsu Province, and it took us two and a half hours to get there.

The scenery was not as beautiful as the one we had seen last Saturday, but I still found some beautiful flowers whose beauties I couldn't have takeny I wasn't able to capture with my iPhone.

After all, Spring is coming.

There's no ugly scenery in Eastern China in springtime.

You can find the video here: https://youtu.be/bapsOl12Gz0 and pictures here: https://twitter.com/myplain_

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Good job.

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Tammy

March 18, 2024

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Thank you!

Another Hikinge

I went to hikehiking again yesterday.

The location was in Jiangsu Province, and it took us two and a half hours to get there.

The scenery was not as beautiful as the one we had seen last Saturday, but I still found some beautiful flowers whose beautiesy I couldn't have taken with my iPhone.

After all, Spring is coming.

There's no ugly scenery in Eastern China in springtime.

You can find the video here: https://youtu.be/bapsOl12Gz0 and pictures here: https://twitter.com/myplain_

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Good job

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Tammy

March 18, 2024

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Thank you!

Another Hikinge

I went to hikehiking again yesterday.

Using the infinitive doesn’t sound as natural

The location was in Jiangsu Province, and it took us two and a half hours to get there.

The scenery was not as beautiful as the one we had seen last Saturday, but I still found some beautiful flowers whose beauties I couldn't have taken with my iPhone.

After all, Spring is coming.

There's no ugly scenery in Eastern China in springtime.

You can find the video here: https://youtu.be/bapsOl12Gz0 and pictures here: https://twitter.com/myplain_

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Well done :)

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Tammy

March 17, 2024

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Thank you so much!

I need to learn the infinitive, gerund, and present participle again!

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After all, Spring is coming.


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