Oct. 27, 2020
Another favorite series
I have chosen American horror story because I really like horror series.
I enjoy watching it because the scenes are pretty realistic and the costumes look very cool.
I like the special effects they make in most of the episodes.
One of my favorite episode is where they are in a hotel and they get kidnapped.
American horror story is a thriller and horror series which is very popular with teenagers. It’s about many people who mostly aren’t normal . It takes place in America. The story is a bit scary. In this series, there is a very good looking boy who looks like my past crush,maybe that’s why this series has caught my eyes.
I can promise you, you won’t forget this series so soon.The actors play the roles pretty good even if they have to play a psychopath. I think some of the characters describe sometimes what we feel ,that’s why I really like it and recommend it.
Another favorite series
I have chosen American hHorror sStory because I really like horror series.
I enjoy watching it because the scenes are pretty realistic and the costumes look very cool.
I like the special effects they makuse in most of the episodes.
One of my favorite episodes is wheren they are in a hotel and they get kidnapped.
A more natural way to say this would be:
In one of my favorite episodes, they get kidnapped from a hotel.
American hHorror sStory is a thriller and horror series whichthat is very popular with teenagers.
It’s about manya group of people who mostly aren’t normal .
It takes place in America.
The story is a bit scary.
In this series, there is a very good looking boy who looks like my past crush,m. Maybe that’s why this series has caught my eyes.
I can promise you, you won’t forget this series so soon. The actors play the roles pretty goodwell even if they have to play a psychopath.
A more natural way to say this “this series is hard to forget”
I think some of the characters describe sometimes what we feel ,tsometimes. That’s why I really like it and recommend it.
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Good writing! My corrections are mainly to make it more natural. I have always wanted to watch American Horror Story but I get scared too easily. Keep writing!
Oct. 28, 2020
Thank you, Fabledlamb!
Another favorite series
I have chosen American hHorror sStory because I really like horror series.
I enjoy watching it because the scenes are pretty realistic and the costumes look very cool.
I like the special effects they make in most of the episodes.
One of my favorite episodes is where they are in a hotel and they get kidnapped.
American hHorror sStory is a thriller and horror series which is very popular with teenagers.
It’s about many people who mostly aren’t normal .
It takes place in America.
The story is a bit scary.
In this series, there is a very good -looking boy who looks like my past crush,; maybe that’s why this series has caught my eyes.
When you connect two independent clauses without a conjunction, you should use a semicolon rather than a comma.
I can promise you, you won’t soon forget this series so soon. The actors play the roles pretty good even if they have to play a psychopath.
I think some of the characters describe sometimes what we feel; ,that’s why I really like it and recommend it.
Feedback
Great job!
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