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Tammy

Aug. 11, 2024

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Another Fantastic YouTube Channel

I just watched a video on YouTube. It was about a girl traveling by motorbike to Lasha, the capital of Tibet. I saw many familiar streets and buildings in the video because I had been there several years ago.

I've followed this YouTuber for two years since she recorded her way back to China from Swithland. She traveled through Turkey, Georgia, Nepal, Malaysia, and other countries before finally reaching her home in China. Sometimes, you can see many little details in her videos because she has unique perspectives as a human geographer.

If you want to know more about China, I highly recommend her videos since January 2023. She doesn't talk about big stories but only the daily details about normal people and normal things. However, her videos aren't boring, maybe because of her curiosity and beautiful pictures.

Best of all, she speaks English in those videos, so you can follow her stories easily.

Oh, I forgot to tell you the name of the channel. It's @littlechineseeverywhere.


刚在YouTube上看了个视频,一个女孩骑摩托车去西藏首府拉萨旅行的。看到了许多熟悉的街道和建筑,因为我几年前去过那里。

我关注这个阿婆主已经两年了,因为她一路记录了从瑞士回中国的故事。她途经土耳其、格鲁吉亚、尼泊尔、马来西亚等等,最后回到中国的家。有时候,你可以在她的视频中看到很多小细节,因为她作为一个人文地理学家,有着独特的视角。

如果你想更多地了解中国,我强烈推荐她2023年1月以来的视频。她不谈大新闻,只谈普通人和普通事物的日常细节。然而,她的视频并不无聊,也许是因为她的好奇心和美丽的画面。

最重要的是,她在那些视频中说英语,所以你可以很容易地跟上她的故事。

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It was about a girl traveling by motorbike to Lhasha, the capital of Tibet.

Its spelling in English is based on the Tibetan name. From Wikipedia:
“Lhasa literally translates to ‘place of gods’ (ལྷ lha, god; ས sa, place) in the Tibetan language.”

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It sounds like an interesting channel.

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Tammy

Aug. 12, 2024

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Thank you so much!

Another Fantastic YouTube Channel

I just watched a video on YouTube.

It was about a girl traveling by motorbike to Lasha, the capital of Tibet.

I saw many familiar streets and buildings in the video because I had been there several years ago.

I've followed this YouTuber for two years since she recorded her way back to China from Swithzerland.

She traveled through Turkey, Georgia, Nepal, Malaysia, and other countries before finally reaching her home in China.

Sometimes, you can see many little details in her videos because she has unique perspectives as a human geographer.

If you want to know more about China, I highly recommend her videos sincetarting January 2023.

She doesn't talk about big stories but only the daily details about normal people and normal things.

However, her videos aren't boring, maybe because of her curiosity and beautiful pictures.

Best of all, she speaks English in those videos, so you can follow her stories easily.

Oh, I forgot to tell you the name of the channel.

It's @littlechineseeverywhere.

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Tammy

Aug. 12, 2024

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Thank you so much!

Another Fantastic YouTube Channel

I just watched a video on YouTube.

It was about a girl traveling by motorbike to Lasha, the capital of Tibet.

I saw many familiar streets and buildings in the video because I had been there several years ago.

I've followed this YouTuber for two years since she recorded her way back to China from Swithland.

She traveled through Turkey, Georgia, Nepal, Malaysia, and other countries before finally reaching her home in China.

Sometimes, you can see many little details in her videos because she has unique perspectives as a human geographer.

If you want to know more about China, I highly recommend her videos since January 2023.

She doesn't talk about big stories but only the daily details about normal people and normal things.

However, her videos aren't boring, may. It might be because of her curiosity and beautiful pictures.

I think the original sentence would be okay for speaking. I corrected it for grammar purposes.

Best of all, she speaks English in those videos, so you can follow her stories easily.

Oh, I forgot to tell you the name of the channel.

It's @littlechineseeverywhere.

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Very good job!

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Tammy

Aug. 12, 2024

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Thank you so much!

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I just watched a video on YouTube.

It was about a girl traveling by motorbike to Lasha, the capital of Tibet.

I saw many familiar streets and buildings in the video because I had been there several years ago.

I've followed this YouTuber for two years since she recorded her way back to China from Swithland.

Because the other places you name are countries, I wondered if you meant Switzerland instead of Swithland. I never heard of Swithland before, but I looked it up and found that it is a very small town in England. If you meant the small town, I think you should name the country as well.

She traveled through Turkey, Georgia, Nepal, Malaysia, and other countries before finally reaching her home in China.

Sometimes, you can see many little details in her videos because she has unique perspectives as a human geographer.

If you want to know more about China, I highly recommend ther videos she has been making since January 2023.

She doesn't talk about big stories but only the daily details about normal people and normal thingsof ordinary people and everyday life.

1. I'm not sure why I want to change "about" to "of," or even if it's really necessary. It just feels better to me.
2. "Normal people" and "normal things" aren't wrong, but "ordinary people" and "everyday life" are common expressions which I think sound a little more natural.

However, her videos aren't boring, maybe because of her curiosity and beautiful pictures.

Best of all, she speaks English in those videos, so you can follow her stories easily.

Oh, I forgot to tell you the name of the channel.

It's @littlechineseeverywhere.

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Her channel sounds very interesting :)

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Tammy

Aug. 11, 2024

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Oh my gosh! Switzerland! It’s a bad habit to watch videos while writing entries!

Thank you so much for your corrections and feedback!

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It was about a girl traveling by motorbike to Lhasha, the capital of Tibet.

Its spelling in English is based on the Tibetan name. From Wikipedia: “Lhasa literally translates to ‘place of gods’ (ལྷ lha, god; ས sa, place) in the Tibetan language.”

I saw many familiar streets and buildings in the video because I had been there several years ago.


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I've followed this YouTuber for two years since she recorded her way back to China from Swithland.


I've followed this YouTuber for two years since she recorded her way back to China from Swithland.

Because the other places you name are countries, I wondered if you meant Switzerland instead of Swithland. I never heard of Swithland before, but I looked it up and found that it is a very small town in England. If you meant the small town, I think you should name the country as well.

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I've followed this YouTuber for two years since she recorded her way back to China from Swithzerland.

She traveled through Turkey, Georgia, Nepal, Malaysia, and other countries before finally reaching her home in China.


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Sometimes, you can see many little details in her videos because she has unique perspectives as a human geographer.


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If you want to know more about China, I highly recommend her videos since January 2023.


If you want to know more about China, I highly recommend ther videos she has been making since January 2023.

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If you want to know more about China, I highly recommend her videos sincetarting January 2023.

She doesn't talk about big stories but only the daily details about normal people and normal things.


She doesn't talk about big stories but only the daily details about normal people and normal thingsof ordinary people and everyday life.

1. I'm not sure why I want to change "about" to "of," or even if it's really necessary. It just feels better to me. 2. "Normal people" and "normal things" aren't wrong, but "ordinary people" and "everyday life" are common expressions which I think sound a little more natural.

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However, her videos aren't boring, maybe because of her curiosity and beautiful pictures.


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However, her videos aren't boring, may. It might be because of her curiosity and beautiful pictures.

I think the original sentence would be okay for speaking. I corrected it for grammar purposes.

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Best of all, she speaks English in those videos, so you can follow her stories easily.


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Oh, I forgot to tell you the name of the channel.


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It's @littlechineseeverywhere.


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