March 13, 2020
Another Fable From Aesop
"The golden axe and the silver axe"
Once upon a time, there lived a honest woodman in a place. One day, he fall over on a slope and dropped his iron axe in a pond. Then, a beautiful goddess came up from the pond. She held a golden axe and a silver axe in her hands and said him, “Is this golden axe you dropped? Or this silver one?” He answered honestly, “No, ma'am, mine is neither.” "Is that so? I got it." She said so and went back to the pond. She hadn't come up again since then. He couldn't get back his axe from the pond.
Sadly ever after.
Lesson:
You can take advantage of someone's kindness at times.
もう一つのイソップ童話
『金の斧と銀の斧』
昔々あるところに正直者の木こりが住んでいました。ある日、木こりは坂道で転んで自分の鉄の斧を池に落としてしまいました。すると、池の中からキレイな女神が出てきました。女神は金の斧と銀の斧を持っており、木こりに言いました。｢あなたが落としたのはこの金の斧ですか？それとも、この銀の斧ですか？｣ 正直者の木こりは答えました。｢いいえ、女神様。私の斧はそのどちらでもありません。｣ ｢そうですか。わかりました｣ 女神はそう言って泉に戻りました。それっきり二度と現れませんでした。木こりは自分の斧を池から取り戻すことはできませんでした。
悲しきや。。。
教訓:
たまには人の厚意に甘えよう
Once upon a time, there livedwas an honest woodman in a placecutter.
Woodman isn't wrong, but it is a little unusual. Lumberjack is also fine.
"Lived.....in a place" sounds like a direct translation from Japanese. It isn't wrong, but it doesn't sound natural in English.
Or this silver one?” He answered honestly, “No, ma'am, mine is neitherneither are mine.” "Is that so?
I got it."see," she said, and went back in the pond.
She said so and went back to the pond.
He couldn'tSadly, he never geot back his axe back from the pond.
Sadly ever after.
You can take advantage of someone's kindness at times.
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Very nice job.
March 14, 2020
Thank you for the correction!
Another Fable From Aesop
"The golden axe and the silver axe"
One day, he faell over odown a slope and dropped his iron axe in a pond.
She held a golden axe and a silver axe in her hands and said to him, “IsDid you drop this golden axe you dropped?
I got itsee."
She said so and went back to the pond.
He couldn't get backnever got his axe back from the pond.
Sadly ever after.
Lesson:
You can take advantage of someone's kindness at times.
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Very good! Some small corrections, but good overall :)
頑張れ~!｡ﾟ✶.ヽ(*´∀`*)ﾉ.✶｡
Another Fable From Aesop
"The golden axe and the silver axe"
Once upon a time, there lived an honest woodmanlumberjack in a place.
I think you mean 'lumberjack' not woodman. A lumberjack cuts trees.
One day, he faell over on a slope and dropped his iron axe in a pond.
'fall' is present tense. 'fell' is past tense.
She held a golden axe and a silver axe in her hands and said him, “IsDid you drop this golden axe you dropped?
Or this silver one?” He answered honestly, “No, ma'am, mine is neither.” "Is that so?
I got it."
She said so and went back to the pond.
She hadn'tnever coame up again since then.
He couldn't get back his axe from the pond.
Sadly ever after.
Lesson:
You can take advantage of someone's kindness at times.
Feedback
Very good :)
March 14, 2020
Thank you for the correction!
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