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galoarellano1987

Aug. 28, 2024

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Another day with hope

Today I woke up early, and immediately I had a thought about of a wonderful day. I arrived to my office around 8am and immediately I had check my email and answer some letters.

After, I had to do some tests and this one had a positive results. I felt a little bit nervous for my tests, however this ones were satisfactory.

I hope the rest of day will be quiet and relax.

Thank you for your time while reading this letter.

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Another day with hopehopeful day

Original title works, this one flows better.

Today I woke up early, and immediately I had a thought about of a wonderful day.

If the "wonderful day" is a prediction, then I'd recommend you say "I had a thought that today would be a wonderful day." Or from your title, you could also say "I had hope that today would be a wonderful day."

I arrived to my office around 8am and immediately I had to check my email and answer some letterand respond to my emails.

I'm assuming that letters are the emails that you checked here!

After, I had to dotake some tests and this onese had a positive results.

I'm assuming there was more than one test because of the line that you wrote after this one. ^^

I felt a little bit nervous for my tests, however thisese ones were satisfactory.

I hope the rest of today will be quiet and relaxing.

Thank you for taking your time whileto reading this letter.

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Congratulations on the positive test results!!

Another dDay with hHope

Today I woke up early, and immediately I had a thought about of a wonderful day.

I arrived to my office around 8am a.m. and immediately I had to check my email and answer some letters.

After, I had to do some tests and this oneone of them had a positive results.

You can say “this one had a positive result” if the test had been specified but since you are talking in general “one of them” makes more sense.

I felt a little bit nervous for my tests, however this ones wereas satisfactory.

I hope the rest of day will be quiet and relaxing.

Thank you for your time while reading this letter.

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good job!!

Today I woke up early, and immediately I had a thought about offeeling it was going to be a wonderful day.

I arrived ato my office around 8am and immediately I had checked my email and answered some letters.

Afterwards, I had to do some tests and this one had a positive results.

I felt a little bit nervous for my tests, however thisese ones were satisfactory.

I hope the rest of day will be quiet and relaxing.

Thank you for your time while reading this letter.

Another day with hope


Another dDay with hHope

Another day with hopehopeful day

Original title works, this one flows better.

Today I woke up early, and immediately I had a thought about of a wonderful day.


Today I woke up early, and immediately I had a thought about of a wonderful day.

Today I woke up early, and immediately I had a thought about offeeling it was going to be a wonderful day.

Today I woke up early, and immediately I had a thought about of a wonderful day.

If the "wonderful day" is a prediction, then I'd recommend you say "I had a thought that today would be a wonderful day." Or from your title, you could also say "I had hope that today would be a wonderful day."

I arrived to my office around 8am and immediately I had check my email and answer some letters.


I arrived to my office around 8am a.m. and immediately I had to check my email and answer some letters.

I arrived ato my office around 8am and immediately I had checked my email and answered some letters.

I arrived to my office around 8am and immediately I had to check my email and answer some letterand respond to my emails.

I'm assuming that letters are the emails that you checked here!

After, I had to do some tests and this one had a positive results.


After, I had to do some tests and this oneone of them had a positive results.

You can say “this one had a positive result” if the test had been specified but since you are talking in general “one of them” makes more sense.

Afterwards, I had to do some tests and this one had a positive results.

After, I had to dotake some tests and this onese had a positive results.

I'm assuming there was more than one test because of the line that you wrote after this one. ^^

I felt a little bit nervous for my tests, however this ones were satisfactory.


I felt a little bit nervous for my tests, however this ones wereas satisfactory.

I felt a little bit nervous for my tests, however thisese ones were satisfactory.

I felt a little bit nervous for my tests, however thisese ones were satisfactory.

I hope the rest of day will be quiet and relax.


I hope the rest of day will be quiet and relaxing.

I hope the rest of day will be quiet and relaxing.

I hope the rest of today will be quiet and relaxing.

Thank you for your time while reading this letter.


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Thank you for taking your time whileto reading this letter.

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