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kiwy

Sept. 1, 2021

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Another busy Day

I am also very busy today. I've walked more than 15,000 steps. My feet feel sore. I am also saty hungry in the whole day.
When I study in the leisure time, I am very happy. I love studying new language and I wish I could make a progress soon.
It's time to go to bed, then start another busy day.

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Another bBusy Day

If it's a title, you can capitalize every word.

I am also very busy today.

I've walked more than 15,000 steps.

My feet feel sore.

I amwas also saty hungry in the whole day.

When I study in themy leisure time, I am very happy.

I would probably say "In my free time", but leisure is fine.

I love studying a new language, and I wish I could make amore progress soon.

It's time to go to bed, then start another busy day.

kiwy's avatar
kiwy

Sept. 2, 2021

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Thank you.

Another busy Day


Another bBusy Day

If it's a title, you can capitalize every word.

I am also very busy today.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I've walked more than 15,000 steps.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

My feet feel sore.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I am also saty hungry in the whole day.


I amwas also saty hungry in the whole day.

When I study in the leisure time, I am very happy.


When I study in themy leisure time, I am very happy.

I would probably say "In my free time", but leisure is fine.

I love studying new language and I wish I could make a progress soon.


I love studying a new language, and I wish I could make amore progress soon.

It's time to go to bed, then start another busy day.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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