Nov. 12, 2020
One of my childhood dreams was to become a DJ.
I love listening music because it helps me to relax the mind.
I want to find a job can play music all day.
At that time (80’s) most people refer this job as “DJ” not announcer.
Why is that?
I think the word announcer is too formal and boring.
That dream never happen.
But I recently find out that in many other countries people understand DJ is really different.
DJ is like a pop star (handsome, sex), works in large music event also like a mood maker.
No!
I just want play some relax music and works in radio station only.
Who is confuse?
One of my childhood dreams wais to become a DJ.
Since this is still a dream you had as a child, you should use the present tense.
I love listening to music because it helps me to relax the mind.
You need a preposition after the verb "to listen", as it is a intransitive verb. You do not need to use a preposition between a main verb (to help) and an auxiliary verb.
I want to find a job canthat lets me play music all day long.
At that time (80’s) mostDuring my childhood in the 1980's, people refer to this job as being a “DJ”, not an announcer.
Why is that?
I think the word "announcer" is too formal and boring.
ThatUnfortunately, my childhood dream never happenmaterialized.
But I recently find out thatRecently, I found out that the meaning of "DJ" in many other countries people understand DJ is really different.
DJ is like a pop star (handsome, sex),For instance, DJ is like a handsome and sexy pop star who works inat large music events alsnd who like a mood makers to create the mood.
It's hard for me to correct because I don't know exactly what you mean by mood maker.
No, that's not what I wanted to be!
I just wanted to play some relaxing music and works in for a radio station only.
Who is confuse?
Being confused may not be what you want to say. I think you are trying to point out that your definition of a"DJ" is different from other people's. If that is the case, then try to use another adjective. Maybe "Who is more accurate?"
Announcer? DJ (Disc Jockey)?
One of my childhood dreams was to become a DJ.
I love listening to music because it helps me to relax themy mind.
I want to find a job where I can play music all day.
At that time (the 80’s), most people referred to this job as “DJ”, not announcer.
Why is that?
I think the word announcer is too formal and boring.
That dream never happen.ed.
But I recently fiound out that in many other countries how people understandinterpret DJ is really different.
DJ is like a pop star (handsome, sexy), works inat large music events, and is also like a mood maker.
No!
I just want play some relaxing music and works in for radio stations only.
Who is confused?
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One of my childhood dreams was to become a DJ. This sentence has been marked as perfect! One of my childhood dreams Since this is still a dream you had as a child, you should use the present tense. |
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I love listening music because it helps me to relax the mind. I love listening to music because it helps me to relax I love listening to music because it helps me You need a preposition after the verb "to listen", as it is a intransitive verb. You do not need to use a preposition between a main verb (to help) and an auxiliary verb. |
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I want to find a job can play music all day. I want to find a job where I can play music all day. I want to find a job |
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At that time (80’s) most people refer this job as “DJ” not announcer. At that time (the 80’s), most people referred to this job as “DJ”, not announcer.
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I think the word announcer is too formal and boring. This sentence has been marked as perfect! I think the word "announcer" is too formal and boring. |
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That dream never happen. That dream never happen
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But I recently find out that in many other countries people understand DJ is really different. But I recently f
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DJ is like a pop star (handsome, sex), works in large music event also like a mood maker. DJ is like a pop star (handsome, sexy), works
It's hard for me to correct because I don't know exactly what you mean by mood maker. |
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No! This sentence has been marked as perfect! No, that's not what I wanted to be! |
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I just want play some relax music and works in radio station only. I just want play some relaxing music and work I just wanted to play some relaxing music and work |
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Who is confuse? Who is confused? Who is confuse? Being confused may not be what you want to say. I think you are trying to point out that your definition of a"DJ" is different from other people's. If that is the case, then try to use another adjective. Maybe "Who is more accurate?" Who else is confuse? |
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