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jjorajj

May 29, 2020

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Today I saw a romantic anime movie called "I want to eat your pancreas". Many people said this movie make them cry but I didn't cry. I think I lost all of my feelings by watching other sad movies. Don't get me wrong, the movie touched my heart and made me feel that euphoria I use to feel when I watch some good movie or when I discover a good song... anyway, I highly recommend you this movie even if you don't watch much anime like me.

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Titles are capitalized.

Today I saw a romantic anime movie today called "I want to eat your pancreas".

Many people said this movie makde them cry, but I didn't cry.

I think I lost all of my feelings by watching other sad movies.

Don't get me wrong, the movie touched my heart and. It made me feel that euphoria I used to feel when I watch somed good movies, or when I discovered a good song... a Anyway, I highly recommend you this movie, even if you don't watch much anime like me.

I changed the sentence structure to avoid run-on sentences.

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This is one of my favorite movies! I didn't cry either, but it gave me a lot of chills.

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anime movie

Today I saw a romantic anime movie called "I want to eat your pancreas".

Many people said this movie makde them cry but I didn't cry.

I think I lost all of my feelings by watching other sad movies.

Don't get me wrong, the movie touched my heart and made me feel that euphoria I used to feel when I would watch somea good movie or when I discover a good song... anyway, I highly recommend you this movie (to you) even if you don't watch much anime like me.

1) "When I would" and similar phrases can be used to talk about things you did repeatedly in the past. 2) With the verb "recommend," people usually say "recommend X to you" instead of "recommend you X." With most verbs, what you wrote would be normal. Recommend can also take a direct object, as in "I recommended Mary for the job." Maybe that's why people prefer to say "recommend X to you" instead of "recommend you X."

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Nice entry! I looked up the movie, but I think I'm scared to watch it. It looks really sad.

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Today I saw a romantic anime movie called "I wWant to eEat yYour pPancreas".

Today I watched a romantic anime movie titled "I Want to Eat Your Pancreas"

Many people said this movie makde them cry but I didn't cry.

I think I lost all of my feelings by watching other sad movies.

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I see that it basically got 8/10. I might give it a shot. Have you watched Weathering with You?

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jjorajj

May 29, 2020

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Thank you. not yet xD I'm going to watch it tomorrow because it's too late here almost 3:00 a.m

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aAnime mMovie

Titles are capitalized.

Today I saw a romantic anime movie called "I want to eat your pancreas".


Today I saw a romantic anime movie called "I wWant to eEat yYour pPancreas".

Today I watched a romantic anime movie titled "I Want to Eat Your Pancreas"

Today I saw a romantic anime movie called "I want to eat your pancreas".

Today I saw a romantic anime movie today called "I want to eat your pancreas".

Many people said this movie make them cry but I didn't cry.


Many people said this movie makde them cry but I didn't cry.

Many people said this movie makde them cry but I didn't cry.

Many people said this movie makde them cry, but I didn't cry.

I think I lost all of my feelings by watching other sad movies.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Don't get me wrong, the movie touched my heart and made me feel that euphoria I use to feel when I watch some good movie or when I discover a good song... anyway, I highly recommend you this movie even if you don't watch much anime like me.


Don't get me wrong, the movie touched my heart and made me feel that euphoria I used to feel when I would watch somea good movie or when I discover a good song... anyway, I highly recommend you this movie (to you) even if you don't watch much anime like me.

1) "When I would" and similar phrases can be used to talk about things you did repeatedly in the past. 2) With the verb "recommend," people usually say "recommend X to you" instead of "recommend you X." With most verbs, what you wrote would be normal. Recommend can also take a direct object, as in "I recommended Mary for the job." Maybe that's why people prefer to say "recommend X to you" instead of "recommend you X."

Don't get me wrong, the movie touched my heart and. It made me feel that euphoria I used to feel when I watch somed good movies, or when I discovered a good song... a Anyway, I highly recommend you this movie, even if you don't watch much anime like me.

I changed the sentence structure to avoid run-on sentences.

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